MG SS ROADS OF DESTINY. PART 20--Updated page 20 - Page 7

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lovely update! Maan realizes his feelings! update soon

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Read all 17 parts in one go
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Maan and Geet both in so much pain , Maan has lost his love and that
is all because of Prem and now he is after Geet too I just hope he fails
in whatever plans he makes .
on the other hand Geet after Geet's father died her so called family
showed her and her mum their real evil faces but now that Geet and her mum are living with Pinky they seem to be safe
Geet has actually connected with Maan's pain and so she understands
him better , she took him as her friend but after Maan told her to stay in her limit as she is only an employee she tries her best to avoid Maan
now they are in Shimla and Maan realized he is in love with Geet
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PART - 18


Angel was happy atleast Maan realised his feeling toward Geet .Now GEET have to know her feeling .
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Next day Maan goes to site and clear the issue and clear misunderstanding that had been created. like someone did it purposely .

Maan thought that situation is normal so they should go back . but weather was not favourable. so they decided to use car . In evening they begin to Delhi. It was drizzling . Maan wanted to reach KM, and was driving fast later he realized that breaks were fail and hand break was jammed. Maan think that he will make Geet jump out of car. but door was also struck. Maan find it was all planned . But then he saw petrol of car is less.Maan smirked to see a circular road. Maan drive the car through the circle till the car stopped itself.Geet jump thought that why they stopped . Maan didn't tell GEET that it was plan but smiled and said nothing.
Till then it was night and rain has started Maan decided to wait till morning .
In night Maan saw dream in which he confessed to Geet ..

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Next morning Maan hears some sound and find some people and told them to open the door. luckily one of them was mechanic .
They come out and thanked those people and then they went to a Dhaka Geet ate her food silently. Maan just drank lassitude.. Geet rolled her eyes and buy some biscuits . then they reached near highway in a bus. and hire a cab to KM. Geet reached home in noon and slept . in evening Pinky woke her for dinner. They asks Geet about trip. She said it was good.

Maan calls someone and said him to do his work.And told him about his doubt on this whole shimla visit then he said that Pari or Rahul can be behind this . Pari is his Ex secretary and he heard her planning some thing and fired her without any delay, Rahul is Sameera 's best friend.He thinks that I m killer of Sameera .
And there is remember bajaj. I find negative feeling in him. Then person on call said he will find all the information about these person.

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Prem :What ?how he come out of his plan.he was angry one of his plan failed... He ask Paris about next plan
Pari: All ready ... he didn't doubt on us and there is more danger awaiting for him.
Prem :ya right bye ... Thinks its good that both are safe specially Geet . I do not wanna kill her ..But have to stay away for few weeks ...only few days are left for you Mr. Maan singh Khurana.


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Note.. I think that the car idea I have read somewhere else or not but Shona Has written by herself so if it similar to any other story please ignore. the similarity .

----- Hemlata

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