MG SS ROADS OF DESTINY. PART 20--Updated page 20

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Hello frnds u ust be thinking its Nitka,but let me tell u this story is written by my swt frnd shona who s just a kid age 15 yrs. i m just posting her story didnt corrected her mistaskes due to lack of time . Let e tell u she is just a kid so she cant write good romanticscene. she will be using my profile for her story Sometimes. 😆

prologe_______

A 21 yrs old girl enters into a hote of a small town.she ade her weak mother sit on the bench,& told about her need for job for few days only.the old lady(owner) was kind enough to allott her a room in the hotel.girl takes her mother inside her room on third floor.
Girl worked there as helper,owner smiles on her to see her working hard.
In jungle, A man of age 25 packed his luggage.put his bag in hs jeep, & droves away in frustation.Everything, every place reminds him of her.he hates his life without her.He hates every emotion...
He have everything exept his... SAMEERA...his...LOVE...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTERS 1

Both thinks that they r unlucky,they dont have happiness in their life. they have little knoledge of different plan of destiny for them. they r selected to "TRAVEL ON THE ROADS OF DESTINY"

'GEET HANDA' :
A 21 yrs old girl lives in her dreamworld,untill her swt little dreamland was crushed by her family after her father died. She escape from her house with her mother to find a better life for them.she goes fro one pace to another to hide for her cruel family.

'MAAN SINGH KHURANA':
A 25 yrs old business man.Rude,arrogent,Angry young man. Girs die for his one glims but he likes to be isolated from wholle world.
Nobody can think that. this emotionless person loved someone madly. loved life. smiled,or laughed with someone.His happiness get snatched,his whole world shattered into pieces when his love, his SAMEERA DIED
************************OTHER CHARACTERS:
GEET'S FAMILY
RANO HANDA
MOHINDER HANDA
BRIJ
DARJI
RAJENDRA HANDA
**********
MAAN' FAMILY
SAVITRY DEVI
SAMEERA KHANNA
DEV KHURANA
VICKY KHURANA
ANI KHURANA
*************
ADITYA,SASHA,PARI,RAHUL,PREM BAJAJ
*************
we love many celebreties so added
MAAN'S FRIENDS:
ARMAAN MALIK
KRIPA
ANGAD
ANURAG GANGULI
TANI GANGULI
SAMRAT SHERGILL
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GEET'S FRENDS
PINKI
TASHA
RIDHIMA GUPTA
MAYANK SHARMA
NUPUR BHUSHAN
GUNJAN BHUSHAN
MEERA
NAINTARA
CHANDNI
RAJ...
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I M UPDATING FROM CELL PHONE SO CANT UPDATE ONG PARTS .SORRY.********

Edited by nitika20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please like & comment if u like it😊..
[FONT=Verdana]<font size="5">
PART1-- PAGE 1
PART 2, 3 PAGE 2
Part 4, 5- PAGE 3
PART 6- PAGE 4
PART 7 ON PAGE 6
PART 8 ON PAGE 6
PART -9 ON PAGE 7
PART-10 ON PAGE 8
PART- 11 ON Page 9
PART 12 ON PAGE 10
PART 13 ON PAGE 10
PART 14 ON Page 11

Part 15,16 ON page 12


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PART 17 ON Page 13

PART 18 On Page 15,
PART 19 ON Page 18.
PART 20 ON Page 20.
Edited by nitika20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good luck for her work
*** but sameera is his love :( ***
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey she is really great... at thz age of 12 she ia actually writting a story...tat really so nice...
must appreciate her creative skills...
god bless 4r her bright future...
tat was really nice start... continue soon...
nt to forgot ur a good & nice friend... making her creativity exposing...
tats so sweet of u dear... god bless u tooo...
she is really lucky 4r having such a sweet friend...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANKS FOR RESPONCE WILL UPDATE 1ST PART TOMORROW
Edited by nitika20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx guys and about ur question sameera maans luv she really likes the name. and my mom s name is naintara so she made both characters positive. i was really feeling like I will cry When i read 1st part will post part one tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

A 21 YRS OLD GIRL, who lives in her dream world ,unaware of the cruel world.her dreamworld shattered when her father died. He left big property for her daughter but his brother made plan to snatch that property.Girl escapes with her mother to find a better life for them. She travel from one city to another to hide from her uncle &brother. She become indipendent and close type for strangers. So they cant take advantage of her innocence. Brij was searching for her to make her life hell, after searching for 3yrs they declared them dead,& take all the property on her name. GEET told the owner that she need a job ,the old lady was kind so she give her job of her helper.she given them room in the hotel to stay. It was very small city, geet started her work &the owner was loving her like daughter. After working for whole day she was very tired. She enter into her room eats her dinner with her mother then both sleeps. In midnight she woke up in fear,her continuous nightmares from past 3 yrs. she found cold wind coming from the window, she get up to close the windowwhen her hand touched a box she picked up the box and opened it.she lok at the taavij and rememebered the day she bought it. She was very happy her results of MBA ,she paassed with good numbers, & her papaji will come after ten years.she went to temple to pray to god.there she found something shining into a street shop.The fortuneteller told that tie this on ur husband's neck for ur happy life. A small smile comes on her face but vanished next moment when she remembered.she enter into her house & found that every one weaping, then she hear the news about the death of her father into planecrash. After three months of her father's death darji fixed her marriage with someone. She didnt protested untill she hears their real plan.

Darji and rajinder told brij that they will get geet married & then they will send rano to orphange.

Geet who was standing behind the door,get shocked.& she ran away.

She picked the taavij into her fist and throws it out of the window and closes the window quickly,& goes to sleep again.rano asks why she awake,she replied nothing just closed the window,both sleap on bed.

A YOUNG MAN COMES OUT OF THE HOTEL TALKING ON PHONE. He goes towards his jeep to take few files when, a taavij fell into her neck he look around to search from where it comes?? but there was nobody,he looks on the windows but that was closed,he sensed that it comes from there.he heared voice from the other side of phone~~~~ hello sir???

MAAN: haan adi bolo!!!!!

ADI: sir deal is finalised.but you have to stay there for few more days the weather conditions are bad so there is no flights for delhi.

MAAN: Hmm adi my all meetings u & shasha have to attend.

ADI: ok sir and the preparations for death anniversary of sameera ma'am,don't worry about that we will prepare for it.

MAAN: Hmm... & he cuts the call (tears escapes from his eyes leans to the jeep for support,then he fells on his knees & screems her name- SAMEERA...WHY YOU LEFT ME ALONE...WHY I CANT BREATH WITHOUT YOU THEN WHY U LEFT UR MAAN WHY... He cried bitterly. He controlled himself & enter in the hotel .he tell the receptionist that he wiil stay there two days instead of one.he forget that taavij still in his neck,now covered by his shirt. He rememeber the memories of sameera, he slowly went to bar and starts drinking.bar was emty only few people were sitting on the dinning chairs. After 8 drinks he got completely dronk,& sees sameera angry on him &he starts singing in his melodious yet painful voice-----------------

Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm mmm

Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm mmm

tune jo na kaha main woh sunta raha

khamkha bewajah khwab bunta raha

geet was unable to sleep she gets up from bed & comes out of her room.she heared amelodious voice,unable to control herself to go there.she found a drunk man singing,she look at him top to bottom,he looks educated & good person.

Tune jo na kaha main woh sunta raha

khamkha bewajah khwab bunta raha

geet saw pain in his eyes,she feels the paion whose eyes show the pain in his heart.maanreminds the day he saw sameera on her death bed. tears roll down his eyes.n in his voice.she stood there looking at a pers

jaane kiski hamein lag gayi hai nazar

he smiles and indicates towards the people looking at him in great concentretion.listing his song.

iss sehar me na apna thikaana raha

poori chahat se main apni chalta raha

khamkha bewajah khwab bunta raha

hmmm hmm hmmm mmm...

tears roll down from geet's eyes ,she also in pain same as maan,so she can understand how maan is feeling.her own family betrayed her.her thoughts broken when maan's voice reach into her ears.

per woh pehle se hai jyada khudse phir ye kiya vaada

he wipes his tears & sings-

khamosh nazrein rahe bejuban

abb na pehle si baatein hain

bolo toh lab thartharaate hain

raaj ye dil ka na ho bayaan

geet cries remembering how her family shows their true face after her father's death.

ho gaya ki asar koi humpe nahi

geet reminds the taavij she thrown out of window few moments ago,maan noticed something in his neck & look at taavil wondering from where it comes???? he didnt takes it out.

hum safar mein toh hain humsafar hai nahi

geet can't bear it anymore she tried to walk away,when maan's voice stops her.

door jaata raha paas aata raha

khamkha bewajah khwab bunta raha

geet sits on one of the chair to listen maan's voice,maan reminds his talk with adi on phone.

aaya woh phir nazar aise

baat chidne lagi phirse

aankho me chobhata kal ka dhuaan

maan comes close to geet & sit on theopposite chair,she smiles sadly.

haal tera na humsa hai

iss khushi me kyun gamsa hai

basne laga kyun phir woh jahan

woh jahan door jisse gaye the nikal

geet remembered when she enter into her house to tell that she paassed.she get shocked to know about her father's death.tears roll down both of their eyes.

phir se yaadon me karti hai jaise pehal

lamha beeta hua dil dukhata raha

khamkha bewajah khwab bunta raha

maan's voice choked in his throat,&geet sings next lines.maan look satisfyingly at her and smiles.for the firsttime someone feel his pain .he falls asleep on his seat.

jaane kiski hamein lag gayi hai nazar

iss sehar mein na apna thikana raha

poori chahat se main apni chalta raha

bujh gayi aag thi daag jalta raha...

geet saw maan sleeping peacefully.there was a glow on his face,and he was smiling in his sleep.

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wow awsome yaar ..i loved it !!! do continue soon and add me the pm list ...
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awesome part dear...
nice start...
continue soon...

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