MG SS ROADS OF DESTINY. PART 20--Updated page 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
amazing updates...I am so addicted to maaneet that inspite of having exams tomorrow I am reading updates & commenting...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry guys I am really busy I wont be able to give you any update as I return home late than GC lost NB6. I already know that NB had always been biased but still... my mood is completely off.
There one more thing. Today finally my guitar teacher heared me singing and was completely shocked as I Sing Maahi ve maahi mahi ve... And obviously It was nice.

sangeeta don't take your exams for granted and do yr
study ... story kahi bhag nahi jayegi baad me padh lena.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 14
Next Day Maan and Geet were working in the office. And were attending last meeting of the day.
Maan: Hello, Mr Prem Bajaj.
Prem: Hello Mr Khurana.
Maan: Lets start the meeting.
Prem Ok. by the way. I must say you have very nice employees.I am impressed while glancing at Geet.
Geet was busy in presentation.Maan follows Prem' eyes and findshe is looking at geet , Maan didnt like the way he was looking at geet.
The deal was finalised and prem's father shakes hand with Maan and prem forwards his hand towards geet.Geet hesitated but shakes hand with him. Prem caress her hand, Geet felt uncomfortable and look towards Maan, whose eyes were red in anger. Not on geet but for prem how dare he look at her.
After meeting Maan went home and changes into his tracks and heads towards his gym for workout.his frustation was visible in his every move. How dare he look at geet? how he touches Geet. these thought has taken over his mind he worked furiously swete was all over his body .Maan thought he wont Prem meet Geet and called MR. Bajaj.
Maan: Hello Mr Bajaj I wanted to tell you that this project will be handled by you not prem. he can assist you but dont want to give whole responsibility to him he unexperienced and this is really important project I cant take any risk.
Mr Bajaj think Maan is right and prem will assist him and maan is the business tycoon . If he thiks that it will risk the project so let it be. SoMr Bajaj agreed with Maan's terms.
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Next day Maan thought he cant trust prem he will try his best to come colse to geet. so he says shasha will handle the project. Maan think that geet had to know the reason. He have totell her
Geet was thinking there must be some reason , so maan gave projject to shasha. She didnt want to give him any tensioon by asking the reason behind this. right then phone of geet's cabin Geet picked the phone andit was Maan's callhe calls geet in his cabin.
Maan: Geet you will be thinking that why I had given this project to shasha so the reason is this project is very important for our compony and prem is unexperienced in this business and he didnt take it seriously and you too unexperienced and on the other hand sasha is experienced and she can manage iif prem did any mitake thats why I gavevproject to her.
Geet: Its okey sir I understand I kbow if you have decided something.there will be some reason behind it I am not sad because you didnt given this project to me.
Maan : thanks for understandind the situation my intentions wre not to hurt.
Geet: Its okey sir I Have no problems and was about to leave when maan stops her.
Maan: Geet you should prepare for a party after few days regarding this project. So you will be connected indiretctly with with this project. the party will held on saturday. you have to work hard and pinky and adi will help you.
Geet: okey sir thank you geet leaves his cabin.


Finnally here you go... The villain has entered the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
nice update...
maan j of prem...
that prem eying geet😡
maan ne prem ko pre[oject se hatwa diya aur geet ki jagah shasha ko ko project de diya...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kal ek aur update dungi.. O:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART - 15 Geet make the list of everything required for party , She booked hall in a hotel and all arrangement was done. Geet decided to visit the vanue next day and she don't have much work in office so she will wrok from there itself. Geet was leaving when she niticed that masn is still in office.
Geet knocks the door of maans cabin Maan thought Securty guard hoga.. Come in... Geet entered and maan sees geet and... says..
Geet this is the limit .. there is a thing called time where was ur mind... office hours ke baad tumhe ghar chale jaana chahiye tha... itna kaam karogi toh bimar pad jaogi.. Kaam kal ke bhi chod deti to kuch nahi hota... abb tum ghar kaise jaogi... abhi toh koi taxi bhi nhi milegi .. aur tum toh delhi main nayi ho... and... before Maan could speek more Geet says Chup Bilkul Chup highly irritated...
kabse speech de rahe hain saans to lijiye kya kaha aapne Time naam ki cheej hoti hai , kaam to kal parso bhi ho jayega .. bimar ho jaogi ghar kaise jaogi...sehar main nayi aayi hoon... TOH AAP KYUN YAHA HO ... GHR KYU NHI GAYE ..MACHINE BANNE KI KYA JARURAT HAI... BIMAR KYU PADNA CHAHTE hai aap...
Maan :was very concerned about geet's sefety but Geet 's words made him angry..
Maan : Its my office I will do whateve I want.. You are just an employee so dont cross ur limit. my family knows that I m okey and they wont worry about me.. who r u to give me advice now LEAVE...!!!!
Geet eyes got filled with tears,she was hurt .. what she did wrong she think him as her friend...
Geet: you r right sir I m no one to give you advice .I thought we are friends.sorry for misunderstanding I m just a mere employee. this hur maan alot... I am sorry. Geet left from there ...before maan could see her crying..
Maan think that he shouldnt have shouted at her.. What was her foult if You care for her... but how she will go home. he also went behind Geet.
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Geet was walking on road crying bcos of maan's words.. she tries to get a cab but there was not any cab. Some local goons come there and tries to mis behave with Geet Maan was following geet .. he goes toward geet . geet says to goons to leave her way... one goon says what if they dont..Maan punched him on his face.other goons got scared and leave the place... in a moment.. maan hold geets hand and bring her in car and started car to drop geet Home... Geet was happy coz maan saved her but she was still upset on maan... Geet decides that she will behave like an employee of KC thats it...
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thanx for liking the story... next maaneet alag alag for a while... XD;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART -16
Next mprning. Geet Pinky were ready to go office. Geet Said to Pinky that she don't have any work in office So she will see the arrangement of party, and will inform Adi sir on her way .Geet dropped pinky to office than she left for the vanue of party.
Maan thought about his behavior with Geet and decided to say sorry to her but Geet was mot in office.Maan was atleast happy that prem wont come close to Geet. Prem come with his secretary for some discussion about work. But he was searching for Geet, which Maan noticed.
prem: Where is your secretary Geet.
Maan: She is not important than this project so,should we continue.
prem:ya sure! prem gives Maan one glare and he doubted that Maan has send Geet away..And thought why all beautiful girls are in Maan's life, not his.First that Sameera and now this Geet Handa.
After Prem enter his cabin he ordered his secretary not to disturb him.And shouts MSK I won't let you live happily.
You are everyone's favorite. my parents, Sameera... and!!! . sameera's name mahe him remind something qnd he laughs.

****Flashback*******
10:30 pm Sameera entered into Kc. it was raining badly still Sam comes into Maans office..
Sam:Maan its very late in night lets go home.I want to talk to you. How much work you wanna do now..
Maan was facing his back toward Sam.
prem: Hi sammera.
Sam was suspicious what prem is doing here late night,why he is sitting on Maan's place.
Sam: hi prem !! what are you doing here.?
Prem had planned to separate Maan abd Sam so he waited for Maan to leave office .Maane recieved so many msges from sam to reach KM.Maan tried to call her but network didn't work due to bad weather. Maan leaves in his car. Prem entered into office and put an envelop on.Maan's desk. Sam entered into office she didnt noticed that Maan 's car was not there.. she mistook prem as Maan.
Prem thought to change the plan and he raped and killed her by chocking her neck. He cleaned all cabin ,then he Put Sam into car and drove swiftly and crashed the car into road side tree. and flewed from there then he bring the cops and changed the report into road accident.. ... It was believed by everyone.
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Few days passed Geet avioded to come infront of Maan, Maan was restless to meet Geet and he had started to feel something for Geet.
It was the day of party Maan has decided he will sqy sorry to Geet in tonight's party.Guest started to arrive , they liked the party arrangement. Prem hides the drug into his coat.and think that Maan cant keep Geet away from him tonight.
Maan and Prem both waited for Geet one wanted revenge from Maan ,and Maan wanted to ask forgiveness from Geet.
Geet enters into party and was looking angelic. Maan see her and knew that she is nervous. And he said 'angel'. then Maan noticed that all watching Geet and jealesy crept into him.Maan drags her to dance floor and Geet tried to avoid him so kept her laces down then leave from thereafter sometime. Maan goes to bar and started drinking.Prem tried to talk to Geet and Maan smashed glass in his hand and take geet away from prem. Geet saw Maan's hand was bleeding and She said to Adi to handle the party qnd she bandages Maan's hand and dropped him to KM, Dadi asked how Maan gets injured Geet said that it happened in the party and everything is alright.And went home.

Sorry for the mistakes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prem goes into his room and throws everything down that was on table. He thought he has to do something fast... he wo'nt wait anymore . He calls pari to know is everything is according to his plan. He has to make sure that Maan is trapped in his plan.
Pari: its almost complete you can bring him here till next week. pari told him.
Prem says I love you to Pari and after he cut the call , he throws the phone on bed cause he has to pretend that he love pari just to trap Maan .
Prem: I hate you MSK to make me feel helpless.
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Next day Adi enters in Maan's cabin and says that . there is problems at shimla site, and we have a meeting there.
Maan says he will look into it. Book two tickets to shimla for me and Geet.
Adi asked Geet for her passport and booked ticket . and tells Maan that their flight is after 5days.
Maan Give office responsibility to Adi and Sasha. and told them to call him when needed.
Maan then calls Mr. Bajaj and inform him that he is going out of town for few days and he agreed.
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Maaneet Board their flight and they reached shimla ... Geet was sleeping then. Maan wakes her and they goes to the hotel. geet takes a nab and Maan work on his laptop...
Their meeting was in evening.
Maan wanted a file that was with Geet . he headed towards Geet's room . Geet had left the room ajar. Maan entered into room and Geet was drying her hair with towel. Maan was staring at her. Geet did not see him.
+ Imagin the I Love You song From Bodyguard )

R=orange]Geet tries to tie the knot of her kurti but failed still unaware of Maan ' s presense ...

Maan comes slowly neer Her. and then she realized Maan is there. Maan tied the knot . and left taking the file from bed...
Geet gets ready and comes Down and everyone look towards her.
Geet saw Maan looking at her she thought that may be she is crossing her limits si she looked down.. Maan thinks why he like Geet's so much.why he love to see her face...
Wait Love ... I Love her ... maan thinks about sammera's words that he listen in his dream. that she will never try to take my place but will respect and she will create her own place in your heart. Maan remember how Geet hugged him in his garden .How Geet helped him to keep his promise to sameera .
Light went off and in dim light Geet's face was shining .
After the meeting was finished both goes into their room.Maan goes towards window as the cool wind touches his face remember the moment when Geet was drying her hair.
Maan says Aaj Harna Utna Bura Nahi Lagata ... Aur Main Haar Manta Hoon Geet Apne dil Se ... I LOVE YOU GEET ... when i will tell you that moment will be special for us...

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Edited by nitika20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai yaar...feel very happy to see your update..welcome back..finally maan accept his feeling for geet..hope maan will protect geet from the devil prem 😡😡and know all his past deed soon..pls cont soon and take care..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg nikita.. u didnt even pm us... very bad!!! 😳

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