MG SS ROADS OF DESTINY. PART 20--Updated page 20 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey frnds I will give you update on coming Monday. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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all 11 parts r nice
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANX GUYS PART 12 IS EDITED AS IT HAS BEEN TOO SHORT SO COMBINED IT IN NEXT POST.
SORRY 😊
Edited by nitika20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
nice update...
dev n nt r happy...all r enjoyed the party...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-12

PART 12
As they entered into Farm house and tries to Open the lights. everyone screams.. SURPRISE !!!!!!!!!
Daadi wished Dev& NT first then all wished them one by one. Dev & NT were so happy and thanked all of them.
Daadi: waise Maan I an angry on you.
Maan: Maine kya kiya Daadima??
Daadi: You all kids planned this Party and did not invited me. (Maan knows he forget.) It was Geet only who remember to call me. Geet comes there and says To kya fark padta hai agar maine invite kar liya.
Daadi thought yes Geet both of you are one soul, afterall.
Daadi : thats why You are my friend.
Armaan : Dadi sorry, we were so excited thats
why, right Maan?
Maan : hmm yes dadima, and by the way geet ne mere hi phone se caal kia tha.
Geet looks at Maan in disbelieve.
Daadi: Its ok Maan but don't try to take Geet's credit.Geet gives Dadi a hug and smirk at Maan.
Ritzy: ok, end the family drama now.Can we start the party. lets start with The dance.
Raj and Chandni bring two bowls which have chits of names, one have boys name and other have girls name on them.
NT takes a chit from girls bowl, and Dev from boys bowl.Both the person have to dance in pair. Nt & Dev will dance together ofcourse ( unke liye hi party hai bhai).
1st pair - ARMAAN & RIDHIMA. (both looked at eachother angrily but agreedritzy for the dance only. armaan for Dev & NT.
2nd pair- KRIPA & ANGAD.( both are happy after all they are real couple)
3rd pair- TANI & ANURAG.
4th pair- RAJ & CHANDNI.
5th pair - NUPUR & MAYANK ( Nupur' s BGM!! Mayank hey bhagwan bacha lena.)
6th pair - GUNJAN & SAMRAT( Gunjan got nervous and Samrat smiles).
7th pair -PINKY & ADI.
NT: and now girls are two Meera and Geet to pair with Maan virji. and Maan virji 's partner is Geet.
both smiles and thinking dont do anything stupid..
Meera says she didnt got anyone toDance Daadi says they can wstch others dancin.
[note: guys I wanted to add pics of the couple dancing but as I am posting the update from cell so no photos SORRY :-C].


All couples comes to dance Lights were dim and all lost in eachothers eyes.music starts and each pair start dancing together
Baby I can see the sun rising in your eyes baby everytime I think of you, you make me smile
Ritzy Armaan+ NT&Dev+Kripa Angad+Mayank Nupur. All boys pushed their parteners away then bring close and spin them towards right.
Baby I'll be your every dream& you should know. baby I'll never ever wanna let you go...
Raj Chandni+ Tani Anurag+ Pinky Adi+ Gunjan Samrat. Girls spins while holding their partners finger. boys hold them from their waist.all dance slowly, enjoying the dance.

(BABY)
Zindgi ki neendo ki subah Ishq hai(baby) badi khoobsurat si sazaa Ishq hai
Maan holds Geet's hand from the back and other hand on her waist.then move their hand in air making a circle.
Hamko pyar hua ,poori hui duaX2
All boys bend their partners backward while starring at eachother.
Chal chale kahin udd ke hum chale kahin Aasma Ishq hai khwahison sa khula hai.


Maan lifts geet into air then put her down slowly,Geet's back touched Maan's chest.

mujhko choo gaya ik ehsaas anchoowa jaise koi nasha aasma mein ghula hai
Maan push Geet away then pull her back
All the pairs dance like waves.
Humko pyar hua poori hui duaX2
Geet was trying to avoid Maan's eyes who are starring at her constantly.Maan was trying to read her eyes.
khwabon mein kabhi maine socha tha nahi.
Maan picks Geet in his arms andtwirls her in air. then put her back on her feet.
chahton ka khuda mujhko itna yoon dega befikar chala apni ye dagar chala kya pat tha ki dil teri khatir rukega pyar hua Humko pyar hua poori hui dua... humko pyar hua poori hui duaX2
All couples turns towards left at the angle of 180 degree with their hands jointed then leaves eachother' hand slowly.
Kahe mujhe mera ye rasta hai... kyun na zara sa tu bhatakta hai... ab to hai nayab ye safar
All boys were ontheir knees their partners moves around them holding their partner's hand
Zara kaho to meri manzil se dekhe meri woh raah sahil se

All girls facing their back to boys and bend completely on their partners knees.. like surrendering themselves, lost in eachother.

tu hai to hai khwab ye safar kari dil ne thodi si bemaniyaan Di hai khoobsurat si paresaaniyaan


All boys lift their girls in air holding them from back girls.hands on their partners sholders Gazing at eachother..

Humko pyar hua poori hui duaChal chale ...poori hui dua..
Boys again twirls girls then put them on their feet... as song finished...

Daadi ma and meera claps their hand..
Daadi : all of you guys were dancing like made in heaven.
Meera: well Dev & NT please cut the cake I Am starving. serwant bring the cake
Dev & NT cut the cake and feed eachother, then girls take few pieces and moves towards their partners and smiles innocently and smashed the cake on their faces... only Geet did not do it as she goes to feed cake to dadi.
but Maan has other plan in his head he take a piece of cake and smash it on geet's face and laugh like a small kid and says Revenge!! everyone looks at him.
Dev: Good job Bro...
Maan wink at Geet and Geet make baby face then smashed the piece of cake which she had in her hand and tries ro run but Maan held her hand and other boys also do the same and rub their caked fave on girls face...
Meera and Dadima laughs at their childish act.. dadi think all look like made for eachother and she was happy that Maan is opening himself again... the party gets over and they went to thier home back...


Sorry for the mis takes and .. I love maaneet kurbaan hua dance so Imagine these couples dancing similarly.
Have to go bye
Edited by nitika20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updating nex part in few hours. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 13
Angel and fairy:
Angel: Toady we had fun, we made some more couples along with Maan & Geet.
Fairy: You are right I was anable to blink.they look perfect together.
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Geet and pinky slept in Geet's room.
Pinky: Geet party was nice. Isn't it?
Geet: Yes Pinky and MSK sir was so happy.
Pinky: Why youcare for sir so much.?
Geet: He is the person I met in that Hotel.
Pinky: What!!!! He is that man ? ... thats why he is comfortable with you.
Geet : I am sleepy will tell you later about it good night.
Pinky: Ok. Good night.
Both went to sleep.
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In KM
Dev: Bro you rocked the party, no one knows that you will play pranks. you saved the reputation of boys.
NT:Ji virji party was good andhappy to watching you and geet dancing and playing .
Maan: ok. now both go to sleep its pretty late. All goes in their room.
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Maan comes out from shower ready to sleep.Dadi enters inside Maan was drying his hair from towel.
Dadi saw tabiz and ask from where he get this.?
Maan: Dadi it fell in my neck from somewhere and nobody was there. I like so kept it like this.
Dadi: ok.I am so happy to see my maan again. I missed ur smile so much beta...Wishing maan good night she went back. Maan goes to sleep with remembering his dance with Geet And a smile kile krept on his lips.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys tommorow will edit last two updates and post one more... thanx for liking the story. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FRNDS NEXT PART WILL BE UPDATED TONIGHT AS I HAVE SOME OTHER WORKS.


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Edited by nitika20 - 11 years ago
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nice update part 13 but very short

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