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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

@JAZ😃

errr

i was gonna take a sabbatical here..😭😭

i didnt kno the story before i did the R.. well...thats just too bad...aab reserve kiya hai toh i demand a proper comment...or i swear...forget happy-shappy update...im going to kill them in the next 5 one shots!! 😡😡

i read on FB😡😡😡

ppl there were discussing it😡

so err...errr...😳

can i take the "r" back😳 nope...no take backs! 😛

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: mchopra
WHAT AM i dreamig abt..i meant ki maan called geet angel and u killed her making an angel..and ewww no pumpkin..i dont mind chocolate cake though...😉

give proper...and i mean..PROPER LONG comment...and ill supply you chocolate cake for 1 month!😉
JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: spvd
Jazzy u are so bad...
u always make me cry with ur stories...
they are damn but very sad and painful...

sorry for making you cry...but thank you for still reading!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
That was heart-wrenching. Amazing. Incredible. I need better adjectives! I cried :P But this was an amazing story, even if it was sad.

see...even sad stories can be good...he he...which is why most of mine are sad!! 😆😆 thanks for the lovely comment 😳
JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
WHAT THE BLODDY HELL !!!!!... i can understand if something like this happens once...but to write a reply...and it goes away..AGAIN...so damn unfair...like what did i ever do ? 😡 haila...again!? 😲...IF is not liking you are the moment is it?

dw babe...it's all a practice...u will get there soon enough 😆..trust me...so u are saying u picked nandu cause of the nickname...😆...oh jazzy...but nonetheless i adored the character...😳 ...im a total new comer...and im super lazy...i dont think ill reach your levels...he he...😉😉😉

we are on IF and FB...same time...sheesh...no patience!! 😆😆OMGG...u just did not say that...i am so very patient...okay not really 😆..but still i am pretty patient with u...telling u take all the time u need and stuff...sheesh...no appreciation i tell u 😆...dear lord woman..i said WE...as in the BOTH OF US!! i said i have no patience as well...gosh!!

moms are always the easier ones to deal with...but with daddy...it's always the sense of feeling that he's always gonna be there...when something goes wrong, my dad is the first person i ring up...all daughters are like that...what's missing is the feeling is a certain peace...idk...i hardly make any sense when i am trying to explain things...but ya 😳..whatever the problem may be..as big as it may be...i am sure it's not more than the love you share...break the silence baby...cause he's waiting for u..and u are waiting for him...
u know...i read daddy's little girl last nite after i read ur comment...cried like a baby..AGAIN..but this morning...i hugged my daddy and told him that i loved him...initially..he thought something was wrong...but then i told him that i just needed to tell him that i love him 😳...maybe you just need to tell your daddy..u still love him for everything to be okay...
but then again..i don't know the history of the issue 😳😕 i know what you mean yaar...my dad is my go to guy as well...any problems...he's the one i turn to...i was actually thinking about a one shot based on my current situation...geet fights w/ her dad ...but when she's in trouble...she calls him...as i was thinking about it...i realized i had no place for maan in the story! 😆😆😆

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: zaqxsw
U made me cry again... 😭
I was sooo happy that u were back but yahan to phir u made me cry... sorry...every time i leave i come back with a tear jerker...😆😆i cant help it...but promise...a happy-shappy os is in the works...😛
It was all so beautiful... Their first date even if it failed but still was quite close to reality as always... i try to make it a realistic as possible...i mean im not sure its possible to rent out the mess hall at the berkeley dorms...but if anyone can...it will be MSk for sure!! 😉
Btw y do u always end up writing sad stories where either Maan or Geet dies... ???? thats what everyone is asking...and i have no answer 😆
Even the beautiful relationship between Nandini and Geet was amazingly explained... i love writing about friends...girlfriends...best friends...cuz i have the BEST friends!! 😳
I fail to understand how come u always write sumthing which touches the heart sooo deeply... aww...you're so sweet!! thanks hun!!
Love u loads
Keep writing...
Missing u loads...
Thanks for the pm... missing you all too...but once computer is back...ill be back to full form...*fingers crossed*...he he...😳
Love
Sakshi

I just hope a nice romantic "Happy" idea strikes ur mind sooon... yes yes...its in the works 😉

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Jaz,

I can't stop reading this again n again. Only 2 OS's had touched my heart to this level. one is "Daddy's Little girl" and the other "Beautiful Girl". You are an amazing writer dear.. coz after reading this OS whenever I hear "Beautiful girl" Only Geet's face and their moments togather come to my mind.
Please write a happy OS..

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

jas,

u have no idea how this OS has touched me beyond words.

I am at a loss for words, completely and utterly speechless.

as i read the part that geet left and she says that she was tired of fighting, my gut told me that she was fighting for her life just like Maan's mother...but i silently prayed that it wasn't true.

But as i read her last letter i completely broke down to tears the song was beautiful and just made it worse and the tears kept on coming.

every word of the song was perfect for the situation.

"I'll never forget those eyes, that beautiful smile.

I still remember the way you said "good-bye"
No matter how hard I try I can't forget"

You bought me with this beautiful yet heartwrenching OS. I have lost myself to your writing.👏

will always remember this OS infact i am printing it out. I don't know why he has touched me so deep. Everything was just beautifully depicted and pinned out by you.

Thank you again for writing such a beautiful piece.

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Oh hello .. my comment is so "non-existent" because I need some time to pen down or shall I say type down my thoughts ... trust me you, my reply is gonna be HA-YUGE! I shall comment FOR SURE on Thursday or if I'm too sleepy after uni then on Friday cuz I'm home .

But you're still DEAD 😡 .. may the powers that be grant you an iota of happiness in your thoughts so that you end up writing something happy (past FFs excluded)