OS: Beautiful Girl - Page 17

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Jazzy...make her stop threatening me 😭...she keeps giving me the laal laal face.....

but i so don't feel bad for u DQ 🤣

ohh n PS...MSK does not allow his sistre to touch or HUg him!

Originally posted by: jnawaz

good...cuz im waiting...and quit bugging my stalker...😡...😆
😆JAZ

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😡

u just remeber baby..

i will take revenge here😈

there is a sequel coming up very soon to the OS...in which MSKs long lost sister from CANADA...cud come back to take him home...😉

ohh n PS...MSK does not allow his sistre to touch or HUg him!😡

Originally posted by: kumari3

OH MY GOODNESS, how did I not know that you wrote fan fic on this board...? Ahhh. Talk about beyond out of the loop. You are an absolutely amazing writer. And I was not prepared for this story. At first I was like, oh, a really nice, well-written romantic comedy... Like, I loved Maan's back and forth with Nandini. lol. I wasn't ready for the emotional parts with Geet's letters and her condition -- very emotional and well done. And that ending, how moving and beautiful. Terrific job, you are extremely talented. :)

P.S.: If you have a PM list, please add me!

Originally posted by: Sameenaas

I knew it...!!! I knew it that U wud do something like this...!!! Do U even realise U had almost choked me reading Geet's last letter... I shud not hav expected a sweet N happy OS from U...lol aww...sorry hun...but what can i do...the idea was so stuck in my head...i just had to kill her to make the story flow the way i wanted it too 😳
Why did U hav to kill the poor soul... But I must say...the story was awesome !!! as always...
It was indeed the longest OS U hav written...!!! Infact any one cud hav written... i got carried away a little...i wanted to give every scene/interaction its due justice...i tried to tone back with out compromising the story or relations between the characters...but still it was so long 😲
Their second date was mind blowing...esp the kiss on Maan's cheek...haaye !!! cute naa...thats all geet wanted...something of who he was as a person 😳
I loved Nandini also... She was a good frnd indeed... It actually hurt me wen they wer gonna be engaged in the end... Who wud hav known the first time they met that something like this was gonna happen to them...!!!! yeah...originally it was supposed to be another random girl...but then i thought...why not Nandu...they share a bond that no one else understands...geet's loss left them both broke...😭 U really kept the title alive till the end of the story...!!! Thanx for making me almost cry with such an emotional story...!!! i love that song!! been listening to it for months...and ever time i did..i pictured Maan and Geet in this story 😊