OS: Beautiful Girl - Page 16

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Aasu getting to work with a heavy heart😭😭😭

REYYY😡

Originally posted by: jnawaz

i know what you mean yaar...my dad is my go to guy as well...any problems...he's the one i turn to...i was actually thinking about a one shot based on my current situation...geet fights w/ her dad ...but when she's in trouble...she calls him...as i was thinking about it...i realized i had no place for maan in the story! 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Jaz,

I can't stop reading this again n again. Only 2 OS's had touched my heart to this level. one is "Daddy's Little girl" and the other "Beautiful Girl". You are an amazing writer dear.. coz after reading this OS whenever I hear "Beautiful girl" Only Geet's face and their moments togather come to my mind.
Please write a happy OS..

Originally posted by: zeynab111

jas,

u have no idea how this OS has touched me beyond words.

I am at a loss for words, completely and utterly speechless. aww...im glad you're at a loss of words...😆😆 it just makes me feel so humbled when people say my writing effects them 😳

as i read the part that geet left and she says that she was tired of fighting, my gut told me that she was fighting for her life just like Maan's mother...but i silently prayed that it wasn't true.

But as i read her last letter i completely broke down to tears the song was beautiful and just made it worse and the tears kept on coming. yeah...a few people guessed that something wasnt right when she left...many hoped it was nothing but alas...it was something major 😭

every word of the song was perfect for the situation. i played the situation to the song...i was listening to the song as i wrote 😃

"I'll never forget those eyes, that beautiful smile.

I still remember the way you said "good-bye"
No matter how hard I try I can't forget"

You bought me with this beautiful yet heartwrenching OS. I have lost myself to your writing.👏

will always remember this OS infact i am printing it out. I don't know why he has touched me so deep. Everything was just beautifully depicted and pinned out by you.

Thank you again for writing such a beautiful piece. you are too kind yaar...thank you for the wonderful comment! totally made my day!! 😳

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Oh hello .. my comment is so "non-existent" because I need some time to pen down or shall I say type down my thoughts ... trust me you, my reply is gonna be HA-YUGE! I shall comment FOR SURE on Thursday or if I'm too sleepy after uni then on Friday cuz I'm home . chal...for you...i shall be patient zster!! 😃😃😃...cuz i have full faith in you...tu vapas zaroor aayegi 😃

But you're still DEAD 😡 .. may the powers that be grant you an iota of happiness in your thoughts so that you end up writing something happy (past FFs excluded) i will...actually i am...should be up on monday...but you'll still need tissues...for tears...just not sad ones 😉😉

Z

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Aasu getting to work with a heavy heart😭😭😭

REYYY😡

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Jazzy...make her stop threatening me 😭...she keeps giving me the laal laal face.....

but i so don't feel bad for u DQ 🤣

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

You should totally do that...i mean write the OS...i would love to read it...plus u wrote Daddy's girl...and that wasn't abt Maaneet...give maan a side role in this 😆...

and still think abt breaking the silence 😊

Originally posted by: ansah

I did not cry...😕😕😕 ...there is something wrong with me for sure...I was sad for sure but then that's how life is...

Beautifully written OS