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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Opti
Thanks Shivi. I did not take this story any further because then I would have to write more than just another part for I need to bring in how Maan 'rises' in love with Geet which would tax my brain too much. Thanks. I hope those are happy tears.

they were happy tears😆😆cause it was brilliant👏👏

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
they were happy tears😆😆cause it was brilliant👏👏

I'm happy they are only happy tears.

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

...😛

1stly me so angry wid u...why donn't u pm me yaar......

u did a ...😳

as well as dear...👏👏👏

dear...4 ur updates dear...😃

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just ..

...😃

really ur updates...😃

4 ur future updates dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️... tons of ...4 u dear...😳 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕 Note: guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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Sumaiya

@sumaiya-kay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Loved this concluding part...I loved how you brought out both their emotions and their resulting conversation at the end...This is definitely what makes Maan and Geet so special...their deep understanding of one another...thoroughly enjoyed reading it!😳

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Hey, long time. Loved it as always... I am glad I found it though :P

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sukklover

...😛

1stly me so angry wid u...why donn't u pm me yaar......

u did a ...😳

as well as dear...👏👏👏

dear...4 ur updates dear...😃

...

just ..

...😃

really ur updates...😃

4 ur future updates dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️... tons of ...4 u dear...😳 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕 Note: guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

Thanks for this colourful and animated compliment. Sorry for not sending the PM. I did not send any one the PM. I do not have time to read any fics. So sorry if I did not comment in yours. No offense.

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -sum-
Loved this concluding part...I loved how you brought out both their emotions and their resulting conversation at the end...This is definitely what makes Maan and Geet so special...their deep understanding of one another...thoroughly enjoyed reading it!😳

Thanks sum. Yes, Maanet have a deep understanding of each other.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
Hey, long time. Loved it as always... I am glad I found it though :P

thanks Priti. Yes, its been long. You are hardly there in the forum.

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hegdemedha

@hegdemedha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Opti, I am glad that this scenario got you back to writing fiction again.

I have only two words after reading both the parts -- If only!!

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

WOWW Opti wonderful piece of writing 👏👏👏

I loevd the way how the whole situation resulted in MSK forced to tell Geet about his past affair which was just infatuation and not love ...CVs this way can actually close the Sam chapter in the show by telling us the reason why MSK turned all bitter towards love and relationships and why post ML it was difficult for MSK to believe that he fell in love with Geet 👍🏼...this is a perfect matured screenplay which CVs can implement in the show which gives way for a matured Maaneet conversation as well 😳...

I will really love to see such a high point between Maaneet in the show knowing that Gurti r fab actors who will do full justice to this complex scene 👍🏼

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