The Mumbai Trip - Part II (Final Part) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome and simply Flawless...The way you have penned it down shows that you truly know your character, Had something of this happened in the show, we know this is what Geet and Maan would both do...I could really Imagine this virtually happening when i read your OS...Brilliant piece yaar...You must send it to the CV's, Its truly inspiring...But the question is are thy ready to get inspired????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG THIS WAS AWESOME...KASH CVS MUMBAHI VALA TRACK LATAI😍

LOVED THIS CONCEPT AND THE SCENES👏👏

GREAT JOB👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajenn

Yes plz do cont writing some OS bout Maaneet. At least we could feel relieve reading it here. The serial is jst making me go mad.

ill?? What happen dear. Are you not well.. Is everything fine with you

Have no plans to continue writing at least in the near future. Yep. I was not well. Better now but still weak.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viji79

But Opti, I really miss Maaneet scenes. Why dont you restart it, these FFs are great platforms to give form to our expectations which were flying high at important stages of the show and that went unfulfilled. At least this willg ive some relief from the stupid tracks that keep springing now and then in our show.

Viji, I'm devoid of ideas to take it forward and have lost interest too. Sorry!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rickks

Awesome and simply Flawless...The way you have penned it down shows that you truly know your character, Had something of this happened in the show, we know this is what Geet and Maan would both do...I could really Imagine this virtually happening when i read your OS...Brilliant piece yaar...You must send it to the CV's, Its truly inspiring...But the question is are thy ready to get inspired????

Thanks rickks. This is how old Maaneet would have behaved. In this Devini circus, I dont recognise Maaneet anymore, especially Geet. So cant vouch for their behaviour under these CVs. Yes, that is the pertinent question. Are they willing to be inspired?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful... is the only one word which comes to my mind...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woowww... simply fab
loved it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice.loved hw maan confessd his inner tourmole to geet.really love maan more nd more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear ...
add me to your buddy list dear ...

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