The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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opti, long tym but you made your absence with one shot . that was awesome . as jyothi said cv can well incorparate this . you had beautifully potarayed the unttended feelings of maan and geet . loved it .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply superb kaash cvs aisa kuch soch pate . wish u were the writer current track would hav been mindblowinggg cvs wont listen to us but u pls give us the next update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Woww what a mindblowing piece of writing Opti 👏👏 ...if CVs can show such a passionate scenario between Maaneet in Mumbai trip ,I m sure we will permanently go in swarglok 😆😳...The way u wrote it can b easily shown on Indian TV because the scene in the hotel room is written so aesthetically and knowing Gurti ,they both can oozee passion and desire perfectly in such scenes 👏👏..remember that scene between Maaneet when mSK comes out of bathroom and pins Geet against the wall asking her to confess and then the bathroom scene in Amritsar when Geet comes out wearing MSK's kurta 😳...So Maaneet hv successfully done such scenes with full grace and oozing passion ...I guess your scenario is very much possible 👍🏼...

thanks Jyo. Yes, Gurti will ace the scene if they picturise it. They'll make it passionate yet chaste. Their scenes are never vulgar. Lets see what they have in store in this track.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehek25

Wow Opti that was simply fabulous. btw do u write FFs also? Would love to read some written by u. Just send me the link if u do write them.

Have PMed you the link to my other fics.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Saruu-

WOWWW😲

I Soo Wish this Happens👏

Thanks Saruu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love your writing opti and love this os. Thanks for the link to your complete work, have bookmarked it. Shall read them soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yaaar awsome one !!
so you are back !!! why dont you continue this as an ss ????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Opti that was awesome...so good to see u write after quite a time...
It was so passionate...awww
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome written...I just loved this ...
kash CVS ne ye story follow kare...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
great ...very well explained

plz go for my FF yeh rishta trea yeh rishta mera also




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