The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I

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Parisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Beautiful opti..

Very well written...Loved it...and i really hope you continue with this...
i hope Cvs show something like this..."sighhh"

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tanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wohhaaa.. opti.. good one 👍🏼

Love the flashback bit n the involuntary action of the heart.. before the head stopped him n made him withdraw..!! Fab fab 👏

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Amerra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

WOW!! This was brilliant!!! Im left speechless...👏

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Lily201

@Lily201

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

@Opti-- Its a truly lovely OS that delves into the matter of the dynamics in a relationship when one person is estranged from their life & journey together by amnesia 😃

It really touched me how each and every sentiment passing through Maaneet was extrapolated with a proper reasoning as well -- as too how one suddenly grows close and far too😳

The situation suited MG perfectly though you mentioned it as adapted--so Kudos for a great work👏

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Sumaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

A beautifully written OS...I would love to see something just like this in the show...GurTi would pull this off effortlessly and make it look passionate and beautiful...would love to read more of your work😳...

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome os dear this can be easily shown in the show hope that by chance this goes to cv's and we get a similar type of episodes in mumbai

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: misty85
It's really nice... chalo OS mein hi sahi meri rain sequence ki khwahish puri ho gayi...☺️ ❤️

If we are lucky we could still get to see another rain sequence in the show to kickstart Maan's memory recovery.

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Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sarkh26
awesome opti
lovely os

pls continue soon

i also read ur destiny's play and all the other ffs like my scenes of parineeta maaneet scenes

everything was really gud pls update maaneet scenes soon

Thanks Sarkh. At present this is a one shot. Let's see if I can think of a suitable improvisation which will fit the current track.

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Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
yes your back to writing!
plz con't this OS..it was great

con't soon

thanks punjabi princes.

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Opti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
opti, long tym but you made your absence with one shot . that was awesome . as jyothi said cv can well incorparate this . you had beautifully potarayed the unttended feelings of maan and geet . loved it .

Thanks. This was orginally written for Michi for a totally different scenario. I just tweeked it a bit to make it relevant for the current track.