Yeh Rishta Tera Yeh Rishta Mera/ MG / FF

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Hey Guys I m with IF from two years but became member about one year back.Lovely members always post great views much above that many members r great writers having great imagination..I m a writer two .not that great but I lov to write my views in form of Poems..short articles..But never on IF now I decided to write a FF of few shorts ..about great lov story of Maan n Geet...Hop u will lov this



Here we go for start

Characters r same nothing changed but introduction of new but most important characters

Maan Singh Khuraana : One of Most successful Business tycoons in India

Geet Maan Singh Khuraana:MSK 's Most Beautiful n loyal wife (here loyal has great importance )

Savitri Devi Khuraana : Maan's Daddi Maa most lovable lady in this whole universe

Dev Singh Khuraana: Maan's Brother

Dr Adwita Sharma: Geet's gynecologist n great friend

Addi, Pinky, Nandini , Lucky ,Nakul ..n so on according to situation

Set Up : Dr Adwita's Maternity n Nursing Home

Epi 1 : True Identity

In room number 6 Geet is laying on the Bed looking towards open door'without a blink with empty eyes..Its 6 P:M n almost one day has been past..as last evening at 5:58 PM. She gave birth to a baby girl..But where is Maan ...?.She is still waiting... why He is not here. when She needs only him much more then any other person.Even more then Daddi Maa who always supported Her ever in those worse situations

"Apki beti to jannat say utri koi pari hai such main Bilkul apkay jaise ..or who bhi Khuraana Khandaan say " Nurse's words stopped flow of Geet's thoughts .When She gave 'Her little angle in her lap after taking her back from routine check up ...Nurse left the room...Geet started to look at her lil angel without a blink...

Ya really She is a Khuraana ..A Khuraana Girl'n jst this surname is enough to predict her destiny ...which according to this world is known as ..''Sunahri Bhavisha "

But Geet is not happy why only her mind n heart knows this ...She put her one hand slowly on her sleeping beauty "Babaji Kya Likha hai meri beti k bhavishay main "... She thinks and a tear drop from her hazel eye falls on sleeping dooln might that drop enough to disturb her peaceful sleep which She has in her mother's protective lap

Baby suddenly opens her eyes partially'.those eyes same as her mother hazel...n might b same dreams which one times her mother had

Daddi was with her last evening when due to labor pains ...She was admitted to hospital..Daddi informed Maan who was in important meeting about KC's new venture ...But Maan !..he made excuses. that he has to finalize most important deal of KC with Australian clients''so it was not possible for him to come till 8 in the nite '.as Clients were in hurry 'so he had to finalise all matters in one meeting ..Many times there were Daddi who made Maan to bent on his knees by hook or crock'..Even when Maan has lost his memory n He was not ready to accept Geet as his wife '.Daddi was that bond which made Maan to be with Geet even with out any feeling for her '.Now Daddi also knows how much that project matters for her Grand child n future of KC..on which Maan is working for months '..so she asked him to come as soon as possible'.Might Geet ll take much time for delivery '

on the other hand in realty meeting was over at 5:30 pm ...All KC staff has left at 5.. Why he is sitting alone in his cabin only He knows'.when RamLal brought fouth cup of black coffee'..

At 6:05 Daddi Maa called him...Before he says a word Daddi exploded in joy "Mubarak ho Maan Batay App Papa ban gaye hai n me Pardadi..or who bhi ek pyari se pari k "

" Daddi Geet kaise hai " without expressing any joy for his baby he asked about Geet's health..when Daddi said both alrite '.

Daddi I m in meeting so will call u later" n he disconnected his pnone ..Daddi was jst able to say Maan Batay

Why Maan is not happy ...His beautiful big brode eyes have lots of emotions also questions when a tear drop came out of his eyes n kissed his cheek

" Maan Sir Coffere" Ram Lal says in hesiatation coz he knows there is some think wrong '" Who haan... Ram Lal kaffi time ho gaya hai tum ghar jayo'.tumhari Beti abhi kush dinno ki hai aur I know u want to b with ur daughter n wife '.Main bhi kush time baad ghar challa jayoga '" .Maan started to open a file sitting on his revolving chair '..so that Ram Lal will think that Maan is so busy'..Without saying other word Ram Lal left coz he knows His Maan Sir never lik to mess with any one on stupid small things .If He knows Ram Lal really want to b his family what about Geet who is on the way to bring his child in this world...Even when she has so many complication in her whole pregnancy period ...Wts reason for MAAN SINGH KHURAANA'S this behaviur toward a name Geet his wife once his lif...n A lif who gave life to some one other their tiny lil daughter...who still waiting for her father's one touch




what u think guys about this plz comment n hit lik ...that to help me for more...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it very much
Cont soon plz
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Loved it a lil confusing due to the grammer. But otherwise pleas pm me!
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I loved it...please continue...can't wait!
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nice story
it seems he cant bond with his daughter
do continue soon
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Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

Loved it a lil confusing due to the grammer. But otherwise pleas pm me!



thanx ... lil confusing I accept this..n real reason is sudden thought to write some thing made me such mad I left all rules of perfect grammar apart...I hav done masters in English...But my mother tongue is Punjabi...n to think some thing in Punjabi then to make a story in National Language ...n above all to translate in English is a big deal...coz I liv in people who use Punjabi n Hindi more often...Jst my family is a source to express emotions in English...n above all when I rite in any language I never care about grammar ...But after writing I always try to improve it ...I m so lazy so not gonna correct part one but ll try to avoid in next...😃
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Originally posted by: tpatel1303

I loved it...please continue...can't wait!



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Originally posted by: t_areeb

nice story

it seems he cant bond with his daughter
do continue soon



thanx
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thanx😳

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