The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I - Page 5

Lovely part Opti. Bahut dreams the that CVs will give us a rain sequence. CVs ne to rain sequence nahi diya, atleast you gave a lovely sequence. Thanks.

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that was a superb part one
loved it
randomly came across ur OS
maan realising what he had done
but still coul not talk to geet
awesome👏

Originally posted by: mrk_1

wow yaaar awsome one !!

so you are back !!! why dont you continue this as an ss ????

Thanks. No this is not a SS. Just made it a two part fic.

Originally posted by: ansah

Opti that was awesome...so good to see u write after quite a time...

It was so passionate...awww

Thanks Ansah. Maaneet are one inspiring couple.

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

great ...very well explained

plz go for my FF yeh rishta trea yeh rishta mera also

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1776324

Thanks Jass. Will read it when I have the time.

Originally posted by: -Parisa-

Beautiful opti..

Very well written...Loved it...and i really hope you continue with this...
i hope Cvs show something like this..."sighhh"

Thanks Parisa. Have added another part to this fic.

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wohhaaa.. opti.. good one 👍🏼

Love the flashback bit n the involuntary action of the heart.. before the head stopped him n made him withdraw..!! Fab fab 👏

Thanks Tanu. Yeah, the problem arises when the heart and head are not in synch.

Originally posted by: Pixie-Dust

WOW!! This was brilliant!!! Im left speechless...👏

Thanks Pixie Dust.

Originally posted by: Lily201

@Opti-- Its a truly lovely OS that delves into the matter of the dynamics in a relationship when one person is estranged from their life & journey together by amnesia 😃

It really touched me how each and every sentiment passing through Maaneet was extrapolated with a proper reasoning as well -- as too how one suddenly grows close and far too😳

The situation suited MG perfectly though you mentioned it as adapted--so Kudos for a great work👏

Thanks Lily. I'm floored by your compliment. I had to modify part of the original (which was a mammoth fiction about the hero falling for one sister and accidentally marrying another) to suit the partial amnesia track of this show. Wrote a follow up to this part. Hope you read that too.

Originally posted by: -sum-

A beautifully written OS...I would love to see something just like this in the show...GurTi would pull this off effortlessly and make it look passionate and beautiful...would love to read more of your work😳...

Thanks Sum. Yes, Gurti can pull this off effortlessly and scorch our screens with their chemistry. Have added another conclusive part to this one.