M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Reya...thanks 4 da om n emotional, intense n sad update. Poor Geet...waiting for her Maan to come home! She has this belief n trust tht Maan is nt dead and will come back. Geet loves Maan so much! Maan is in teh navy. Loved the superb Maaneet moments. Beautifully written!😛

Yes...she will wait for him till she dies because she believes he will fulfill the promise he made to her...thanks for liking it hun :)

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

I cont believe that maan is dead... but i loved it...

If u read me on a daily basis...then u would know that killing is the most normal thing for me 😆..Glad u liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: libra25

awesome..fabulously writeen..
but reya..me again crying..
i amchoked with emotions..
i wonder how you potray the pain so well..
but why always sad..

i am sorry sweetie...i don't know why i always write sad pieces...they just have a beauty of their own...😳..i just write from the heart...iminaging what i would feel if i were to go through this...and that's what i write...
i am glad u liked it..😳

Originally posted by: cutee987

u made me cry ... 😭.

sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Escapist

Please don't say this...why did you write such a sad os ?? I mean it was a wonderful one shot..when it came to writing but it was just too too sad and emotional for me to handle...I wish I din r ead this why I read...I hardly read anything now-a-days and freak man I read yours...

You made me cry and im still crying...can't stop my tears...and you know the reason...first thing you showed Maan as dead and second thing he was the Captain...

Someone too too close to me is the doing Merchant Navy...I pray for him daily you know...I know sab k saath aisa nahi hota...so many people are in this profession but shucks man you made me feel frightened and made me cry...

I have nothing against ur story...i don't even know you...and as a piece of writing its wonderful...it touched me but still it was I can't tell you what surged thro' me when i read Captain shit...

Sorry for the comment...I couldn't stop myself...

Take Care,
Fatima

Firstly hun..i am extremely sorry for making u cry...as a writer...there are times we hit close with personal stories of readers when we have no intention of harming one's feelings...but we do...but it's not intentional...
Honey...i shall pray for the safety of ur close one...and that one day the person is able to return to you...
i appeciate u liking the piece and once again apologize for the tears u shed with this story..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: GeetHSP

I guess everyone is into sad stories now...but thats okay. It was beautifully written...just beautiful!

Lolz...😆..i am always into sad stories...it's what i do best...
thanks for liking it hun...

Originally posted by: craziekudi

wow... that was so sad...

heart trenching...
these days all members are making us cry!!!
so beautiful... keep writing yaar!!!😭😭😭😭

Haha😆...all the members are only getting sad ideas...but sad ideas are the usual thing for me...😳...thanks for liking it though..
p.s if i keep writing then u will keep crying...i hope u are ready for that..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: spvd

beautifully written...
the wait is so painful...
thanks for the pm...

Thanks for liking it Deepa 😊

Originally posted by: ajenn

Oh Reya...tHis is really touching OS.

Captain Maan Singh Khurana left his life behind to serve his county.
Geet waiting for Maan's return which he promised her.
Loved ur idea of Geet's writing Maan letter n threw it into the sea...
I've always liked tat idea n even did it..😊

Yup...before he is a married man...he was a man of the Navy..
ohh...u actually tried it...i always wanted to that...i will someday..😳
Thanks for liking it hun 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

can u write one more update ... happy ending ...

Thanks for liking hun...but there won't be another part to this..i kinda left u ppl hanging

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

well u r back to ur forte isnt it...
well i must say i liked it...
i knew that it was going to b a sad one but there is this hope left that he wud b alive somewhere and will b back to his geet one day...

Haha 😆..ya...like i said..pretty much back to what i do...😳..thanks for liking it...hope is what keeps the world going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
😲😲...why why??? sniff sniff 😭

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

lovely os,,
thanks for pm dear..

Thanks hun :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow I dont know what to say.This was exceptionally beautiful and amazing.Geet's love and the wait for Maan was so touching.You're an amazing writer.Great Job.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG I am crying😭😭😭 that was beautiful👏 If you write so well...can you write a happy one bc I cant stop crying for now😭 Geet has such strong determination and I am going to go with Maan is still alive😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😭 i knew it i knew it😡

madam cant let us brathe in peace!!😡😡😡 Come on aashu...how can u say that ?? 😭😭
she had to kill someone!!😡😡😡...would u rather he married someone else??? 😆
but thakn god!!!!!!!!!!1 u just managed to kill him this time and not marry him of to someone else😡 ROFLZZZ 🤣🤣🤣
but i still love ya baby😆...awww...i lubbbsss u too my DQ😳
u kno darling i read this one before...but again i read it...and my tears are not stopping...i am crying n crying..
the way u wrote just tore at my haert...sowieee...i made u cry but honestly...i loved the way this piece came out...😳
they say that we value the person we love more after we loose them...or after a disrance apart..but is it really true??
co we really need a separation to value our beloveds??? True...indeed distance makes the heart grow fonder...but one that loves from deep within...and knows the value of the gem that they have doesn;t require distance to make them realize of the love they had...
geets everlasting wait...the last line...managed to convey the depth n intensity of their commitment!ya..i loved the last line too...felt like the perfect sum up...😳
u rocked with this one babes👏👏 Thank u baby 😳
P>S> i am stiill waiting for an EPI on the other one😡😡😡 and there better be a divorce there..or a night,mrish dream😡 cough cough 😆 i have been meaning to do that...but let me tell u..u won't like my train of thought...
😆😆😆

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