M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 8

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Reya...thanks 4 da om n emotional, intense n sad update. Poor Geet...waiting for her Maan to come home! She has this belief n trust tht Maan is nt dead and will come back. Geet loves Maan so much! Maan is in teh navy. Loved the superb Maaneet moments. Beautifully written!😛

Originally posted by: libra25

awesome..fabulously writeen..
but reya..me again crying..
i amchoked with emotions..
i wonder how you potray the pain so well..
but why always sad..

Originally posted by: Escapist

Please don't say this...why did you write such a sad os ?? I mean it was a wonderful one shot..when it came to writing but it was just too too sad and emotional for me to handle...I wish I din r ead this why I read...I hardly read anything now-a-days and freak man I read yours...

You made me cry and im still crying...can't stop my tears...and you know the reason...first thing you showed Maan as dead and second thing he was the Captain...

Someone too too close to me is the doing Merchant Navy...I pray for him daily you know...I know sab k saath aisa nahi hota...so many people are in this profession but shucks man you made me feel frightened and made me cry...

I have nothing against ur story...i don't even know you...and as a piece of writing its wonderful...it touched me but still it was I can't tell you what surged thro' me when i read Captain shit...

Sorry for the comment...I couldn't stop myself...

Take Care,
Fatima

Originally posted by: GeetHSP

I guess everyone is into sad stories now...but thats okay. It was beautifully written...just beautiful!

Originally posted by: spvd

beautifully written...
the wait is so painful...
thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

can u write one more update ... happy ending ...

Originally posted by: princess163

Katti😡

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😭 i knew it i knew it😡

madam cant let us brathe in peace!!😡😡😡 Come on aashu...how can u say that ?? 😭😭

she had to kill someone!!😡😡😡...would u rather he married someone else??? 😆

but thakn god!!!!!!!!!!1 u just managed to kill him this time and not marry him of to someone else😡 ROFLZZZ 🤣🤣🤣

but i still love ya baby😆...awww...i lubbbsss u too my DQ😳

u kno darling i read this one before...but again i read it...and my tears are not stopping...i am crying n crying..

the way u wrote just tore at my haert...sowieee...i made u cry but honestly...i loved the way this piece came out...😳

they say that we value the person we love more after we loose them...or after a disrance apart..but is it really true??

co we really need a separation to value our beloveds??? True...indeed distance makes the heart grow fonder...but one that loves from deep within...and knows the value of the gem that they have doesn;t require distance to make them realize of the love they had...

geets everlasting wait...the last line...managed to convey the depth n intensity of their commitment!ya..i loved the last line too...felt like the perfect sum up...😳

u rocked with this one babes👏👏 Thank u baby 😳

P>S> i am stiill waiting for an EPI on the other one😡😡😡 and there better be a divorce there..or a night,mrish dream😡 cough cough 😆 i have been meaning to do that...but let me tell u..u won't like my train of thought...

😆😆😆