OS: Just Ordinary - Page 12

Originally posted by: flowergirl_O

I think this is your cutest story out of all of them'It makes me hopeful because I think I'm oridinary so it makes me feel like that someone as hot as maan can also like me for who I am of course...your Maan is out there somewhere...and like this story said...nothing is wrong with ordinary...cuz im ordinary too...and who cares...the person i end up with will like me for me...not the fake me...the real...ordinary...me 😉'the reason why I loved it so much was because it's almost exactly like my dreams just written in words'the other reason why Ioved this update was because maan was the one who fell for Geet even though she was considered the nerd princess'I'm sure geet thought he was hot but maan made the first move'now I feel like the guy I have a crush on might stare at me when I walk into class even though I never noticed or maybe he even likes me but just never said it to me just like maan in the beginning and maybe he even considers me beautiful even though I think I'm not'do you know what I mean?... totally!! and its my dream too...i mean...its a perfect dream...you just being yourself...and someone loving that...its the best dream...that you dont have to put on an act for someone to be with you...and thats what Maan loved about Geet...in a world where material things are what matters...Geet was different... 😃it's as if this story made me think of a few things differently cuz it was in maan's point of view instead of it being geet's point of view'if it was geet's pov it would have been like she likes maan but won't do anything about it because she think she's too ordinary'geet's pint of view is the way I think when it comes to the boys I like'so since you put it in maan's pov, I thought of it as what if that is how my crush thinks'I hope you understand what I mean'basically I loved how you put it in maan's pov and it makes me hopeful that something like that will happen to me too this story only worked because it was from Maan's POV...if i put Geet's in...it would be so depressing cuz i know on some level...all of us girls think like that...like we're not good enough...or that we need to change...but from the guys POV...she's perfect...in his eyes...she's perfect!! and thats all that matters... 😃

Originally posted by: nehapushkar

Beautiful OS , 👏 loved ur subject of ordinary. u made it a special one.

i believe u hv made use of part of Twilight by stephanie, as Bella always

feels she is very simple & Edward is god like.

keep up the good work.

lol...twilight!! 😆...but ya...i see it...bella was the most ordinary person you could find...and for edward...she was the best...perfect!! so...ya...i see it...😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Reserved

Look who is here ? The lazy Besharam 😆 lol...welcome ji...welcome!! 😃

Yaar tera kya kehna, Kahan se lati ho yeh sab brilliant ideas ?😲😳
From people's comments, ok then what if i tell you Romance doesnt exist 😛😛😛 ...ha ha...nice try...that is your opinion...and thats fine..i just didnt appreciate someone judging everyone lives and calling them boring...nice try thought!! 😛
Nah jokes apart, this wasnt just Ordinary, but a FAIRY TALE👏
Cindrella and her prince charming😃😳
Yaar u gave me some great hopes now 😆, if i get to live such an "ordinary" life , i wouldnt be any happier 😆 thats what everyone keeps saying...that now they look at things a bit different cuz they are ordinary...and their prince charming is out there somewhere...lol...i think the story even boosted my own morale!! ha ah...😳

But lets not call Geet ordinary, its just a matter of view point, someone will find her a "good-for-nothing" while some one else will find his better half in her. 😃
It's just about what qualities ur partner see in you 😉 thus the point of the story...she was ordinary to the prissy cheerleaders...but to Maan...she was amazing!! 😳

For Maan, she was the definition of beauty brain and big heart 😳😃👏

Challo lets be less philosophical and focus more on ur amazing FF 😉

Yaar first of all, your writing give the story a not so ordinary feel, it's definitely a class apart 😳👏

Then loved how it was based on college/high school lifes 😃 ...it was always my secret dream that some one would see me across the food court at school and just fall head over heels in love with me...alas...it didnt happen for me...but i made it happen for geet 😉
Maan not being able to talk to her 😳 Hayee went trough the smae sitaution, that's why i loved it all the more hehe 😆😆 but in my story the tragedy is that i talked to him after 3 years, i talked to him twice and i came to know he was not AT all interested 😭😆 It really looks like princess and Nerd and the Hotty 😆 ok let's not dig more into my life 😆 lol...hota hai yaar...hum saab ke saath hota hai...but what can ya do...its part of life and all...if only we could have geets luck...he he 😛

Loved how Adi and the whole team flooded the library 🤣 Such a great team spirit they have 😆😛 well their star player has been distracted and as Maans BFF..he had to do something...but i could just picture it in my head!! lol 😆

Poor Geet she thought that he asked her out for the prom out of pity

Hayee loved the prom and their 1st kiss 👏

Sho sweet 3 years of togetherness from there onwards 😳
The kiss ag an encouragement gesture was just too cute 😃😳

Loved how Maan explained to he what she meant to him 😆 poor him was about to bang his head 👏😳

And they live happily hereafter 😃

such an amazing story yaar. THANKS for writing it 😳

I guess now u wont rush me to comment coz u have to bear my bakwass 🤣 ...i loved the prom kiss too...i thought i was perfectly apt for the situation...vaise hi...around her maan is a little shy and all...so i figured on the prom dance floor was perfect!! and ya...he was...he was about to bang his head cuz its always the same thing with geet...she just cant figure out how maan chose her...lol...aadat se majboor hai 😛

Love ya yaar 🤗
Humi 😉 LOVE YOU TOO!! *muah*

Originally posted by: sna004

It was beautiful! It was very simple.. and ordinary. I enjoyed reading the entire story. You weave a brilliant piece of fiction. I loved how you used ordinary in the story. I don't even know how to express how ordinarily blissful I am feeling after reading this..

thanks!! glad you liked it...i had a blast doing it...and as i wrote it...i realized how much i take everything for granted...im trying to change that...😃..glad it made you ordinarily blissful! he he

JAZ