OS: Just Ordinary - Page 10

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Originally posted by: ajenn

This is really Beautiful Jaz. Really Beautiful.
I got no more words to describe how much I love this.
I can tell u that, I can read this again and again.
Indeed Ordinary is Beautiful.

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

awww jaazy it was beautiful.. simple but amazing.. loved reading it..

just a req. .. its that my net is a bit and abit slow so doesnt show full pages some times wen they are long.. so can u please update the next post on some other page (if its more that one post) thanx

Noor

im not sure what you mean but there is no "next part" this was a simple one shot..😕
JAZ

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Beautiful , simple , realistic yet very uniquely 'Just Ordinary' 😊

I loved it 👍🏼 👍🏼

You should write pieces like this , you're very good 😃 👍🏼

aww...thanks 😳...glad you enjoyed it 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: euphoric

Jazzz🤗 sonia!! 😳

Happy Friendship Day buddy😃 you too luv!! 🤗

Now... the true happiness of life doesn't lies in the big events that may mark the turning points coz if we wait for the extraordinary things to happens most likely, life is going to pass by right from in front of our eyes and before we know we wud be left behind staring at what could have been... so undoubtedly its the ordinary things in life that become the source of extraordinary happiness. All we have to do is appreciate😳 exactly!! how many times have you seen/heard people say that the didnt realize what they had til it was gone...same thing...we take all these things for granted...and yes..i do too sometimes

This OS of yours is so ordinarily beautiful that it has compelled me to read it more more than twice and i intend to read it again and again... haila...saachi? 😲

Loved the fact that like always they r not the most sought after people... yes he's an athelete... handsome... a dream guy but then he has worked his way thru things... not someone who's born with a silver spoon😊 She's a plain Jane... ordinary and beautiful for the beauty certainly lies in the eye of the beholder and ofcourse in simple things... loved the simplistic approach😳 ..yup...usually its Maan who has the affluent background...but i like seeing him as a fighter who struggled for his success...cuz thats when success/victory is sweetest!! 😳

The whole path of fallin into love was so real and admirable... the kiss was something that caused me to blush for it was so heartfelt... loved the manner tht u have put things down... her insecurity is so real and could be related too😛 his good luck charm and then how he put her fears to rest was simple amazing... no one goes overbaord for at times all that matters is to be there for each other... to know that each time u raise ur head there's someone whose love is beckoning u with smiling eyes and so when the shine trickles u know... u just know! i loved their prom kiss too!! i mean...it was first kiss...Maneets first kiss...i had to make it special... 😳

Loved it when he goes to her despite being in the middle of the game... simply shows that he has put her above all... nothing matters before her... kudos! i'm just dreaming how beautiful the lapsed 3 yrs of period must have been😍 Couldn't you add some more flashback😡 Oye don't raise eyebrows at me... I'm a very greedy bachcha😉😆 and u knw i was laughing imagining him running to and fro escorting her and then back to his own class😆😆😆 ...oddly...this is one of the few pieces that doesnt have flashbacks...but then again...i guess only my SS/FF have flashbacks but the OS's dont 😆...if i added more...this wouldnt have been a one shot!! 😛...but now that you mention him running back and forth...i wanted to add some Adi/Geet scenes cuz i love them as friends...but...got lazy! 😛

And then u finally got them married😛 Ok Jaz this was a pleasant surprise from ur end😉😆 Any plans of epilogue😉😆 *rubbing hands in glee* I'm all up for it😳 ...no...no epilogue here...all is happy happy...aur kitna happy likhoon!? 😆