OS: Just Ordinary - Page 11

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Originally posted by: jnawaz

if you read again and again...does that mean i get comments again and again...😆...just kidding...sort of...but glad you enjoyed it...its a personal fav too!!
JAZ

Wow... Beautiful. An ordinary story with extraordinary writing skills.👏

Originally posted by: euphoric

see see see... when u write happy happy its also becomes ur own personal fav then why not surprise us with some more of ur personal favs😡😆

tera bhi kuch nahin hosakta!! 🤣

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

im not sure what you mean but there is no "next part" this was a simple one shot..😕
JAZ

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Omg!!! me here finally!!!! this is like 1 out of god knows how many!!!!😆😆 so anways just be happy im here..

i am happy...so happy!! 🤗

omg... princess nerd?😡 wat a bunch of haters!!! just because u dont look hot like Geet... y'all are just jealous!!!!😡 but whos laughin now?! Maan chose geet and not them!! HA!😆 im so evil!! i kind of like that name...princess nerd..its mean...i know...but cute in a way...right? lol...but hell ya their jealous...she has MSK...they have nothing!! 😛

but omg i loved this!!! it was awesome!!!!! me loved it! omg.. she even went to all of his soccer games! wat a good girlfriend!!!!! thats how it should be!!!!!... shes a trooper...supporting her Maan in it all...perfect gf 😳

me liked this very much!!!!!!😳😳😳

luv u babeji!

Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111

I think this is your cutest story out of all of them…It makes me hopeful because I think I'm oridinary so it makes me feel like that someone as hot as maan can also like me for who I am…the reason why I loved it so much was because it's almost exactly like my dreams just written in words…the other reason why Ioved this update was because maan was the one who fell for Geet even though she was considered the nerd princess…I'm sure geet thought he was hot but maan made the first move…now I feel like the guy I have a crush on might stare at me when I walk into class even though I never noticed or maybe he even likes me but just never said it to me just like maan in the beginning and maybe he even considers me beautiful even though I think I'm not…do you know what I mean?...it's as if this story made me think of a few things differently cuz it was in maan's point of view instead of it being geet's point of view…if it was geet's pov it would have been like she likes maan but won't do anything about it because she think she's too ordinary…geet's pint of view is the way I think when it comes to the boys I like…so since you put it in maan's pov, I thought of it as what if that is how my crush thinks…I hope you understand what I mean…basically I loved how you put it in maan's pov and it makes me hopeful that something like that will happen to me too