Zindagi... Tum se hai ~OS~ - Page 5

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Beautiful<3

Originally posted by: jnawaz

omg sonia...were your ears burning..lol..i was just telling reya and shreya about a book called The Choice by Nicholas Sparks...the story is similar...as soon as i started reading i was like...no was everything is this hunky-dory...then...the way kushi was acting...the way Geet was mentioned...i knew...something was wrong...at first i thought death...but then you did the coma thing...and you did it beautifully...the way maan talked to his sleeping geet...awesome...and little kushi...she's a spit fire!! totally loved it yaar...happy endings rock...he he..😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome os

Originally posted by: anks_ams

awesome..beautifully written... just loved it:)

Originally posted by: mysticangel

simply beautiful

Originally posted by: heermeher

that was definetely pleasant surprise from you sonia;

awesome the way kushi was taking care of maan then dadi everyone thanks for such a beautiful OS

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Beautifully written sonia...!!
Loved the little khushi who would control her papa n badi mumma...how sweet is that..😳 😳 😳
thank god geet got fine n is back to her normal self...i was so scared to even think that geet wud nt b around...but u proved me wrong n here she is happy wid their small world...!!!
khushi is chooo chweeet...n a cutey pie...😳😳😳
awesome OS...
loved it alooot>>!!!

who else other than Khushi could dare to control her papa in the absense of her mother dearie... and ofcourse Dadi ma too... we all know only Geet has tht way around them😛

thanks dear

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Resss :)

Hello...commenting time 😃

hieee🤗

when i started reading...everything seemed well and dandy...because Geet was talking and they were having a conversation...then the talk about a certain day started...and something didn't sit right with me...i was like..."who is dead here?"😕...so i went back and read it again and i notice how Geet was talking but she wasn't taking any actions...Maan keep predicting her reactions and answered according to that,...then everything clicked when you revealed that she was in a coma 😭...

Sweetheart thnks for mentioning tht coz i really intented it to be tht way... well yes... Geet was more stationary kind when the actions were concerned... he was the one moving around and then guessing according to her likes... thn was the crash!

But Kudus to Maan for keeping her alive in his mind and her heart...and in his daughter's heart...he hang onto the hope that someday she would be back and their life would be back to normal...he hang onto the thinnest thread of hope 👏...and that's what life is all about...not giving up...At the end of it...the hope and wait paid off and Geet woke up...😃

certainly... he knew all he had was his hope and the faith tht no matter what one day she would be back and so he never let her out... he made her presence felt... so tht when she returns she would fit into everything easily and feel loved and wanted😳

Khushi was a absolute darling and i adored her character and the way you penned it👏 The way she is a child, but so much more to her Dadi and Maan...and everyone else...like she scolded Maan for not having breakfast...hehe...she filled in her mother's void to the best of her ability...and i loved her 😃

oh i loved her too... a child grown beyond her age... and so it hurt Maan to think tht Khushi was not living her childhood the way kids are suppose to for she was busy to fill in her mother's role of taking care of the house and family😊

Honey...u have written this beautifully giving us a happy ending with a picture perfect family...and i love you for that...you know happy endings rock 😃

why didn't u apply tht for VT okies.. i'll discuss this there... but u hv urself done a fabulous job there😳

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

hey soni...reya unresed on pg.2 :)