Zindagi... Tum se hai ~OS~ - Page 7

Originally posted by: leverne

O sonia...u don't know what pains i had to go through to complete reading this os...sitting in a crowded bus with 4 shopping bags and wet clothes and umbrella and a back that hurts big time...but it was worth the pain...the best part was the ending...i always love happy endings...the way maan and khushi involved geet in everything was very nice...the story itself was touching and sweet...keep giving us such suprises i love them...love reni..

Originally posted by: amzu32

Wonderful Surprises..

Lovely OS!!!

Thanks Dear..

take care...

Originally posted by: Viji79

Sonia. I read the entire OS with a bated breathe, more precisely until it is shown that Geet is in coma. I was fearing the worst. But then you saved your own life by making Geet come out of the deep slumber. Khushi was awesome and what can I say about Maan? His love is immeasureable.

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved the OS.

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

I read it wid teary eyes...

TEARS DUE TO FEAR

TEARS DUE TO GRIEF

TEARS DUE TO HAPPINESS

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Sonia,

That was one outstanding OS! Incredibly touching! The purity with which you portrayed their love was simply magical. It was a touching read. Khushi was a fabulous character. Initially, when Geet wasn't around and they talked only in riddles, I had a feeling that Geet was already dead, but soon that was changed. The way you've depicted life in the Khurana Mansion without Geet was sad and had a lot to tell. When Pinky brought news of Geet's revival, that moment had me in tears-literally!

Loved the way how they all stayed connected to Geet even during her comatose state. And Maan's anxiety and concern causing him to wake her up in the middle of the night to check on her was cute. And Geet's line about being 'constructive', it reminded me of a similar line in my FF almost a year ago...lol!!

Thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Cheers!
Tia

Originally posted by: sindu555

😃am speechless .. (but abhee kuch na kuch to bolna paray ga naa 😆)

OMG lady u rock! ... to say that this was awesome will be such an understatement ... I had tears in my eyes through out ... tears of joy and pain ... I had a hard time controlling my tears while reading this at work .. thank god no one's around .. otherwise ppl wud've really started to doubt my sanity 😳 ... I cud feel every ounce of the emotions of Maan and Khushi ...

Maan's mindltalks with Geet were mindblowingly awesome ...

so many instances pricked my heart but the strongest was this one .. it portrayed a child's longing for a mother so beautilfully and the pain a father went through after witnessing this ...

She told her anything and everything about home, school, Maan, Dadi Ma, office... every little thing. He looked as she sadly told Geet how her friends' mothers would come to pick them up and drop them to school. How they would flaunt the tiffins their moms had packed for them. "Mumma, papa says you are sleeping. How much longer are you going to sleep?" she asked innocently. The words cut through him and he grappled with himself to remain strong. "Mumma, you know I'm never going to speak with Vicky" she complained. "Why so?" Maan asked gently. Teary eyed, she replied, "He says, mumma will never come back home. He says he saw it on TV." Maan silently took her in his arms and said, "Let people say what they want. Don't let them affect you. Your mumma will come back" he finished softly stroking her hair. "Sachchi?" she asked. Smiling a little, Maan said yes and then quickly wiping her tears, Khushi turned to Geet, "Mumma, I know you will come home. I love you" said that she bent to kiss Geet and then holding her face in her little palms she quietly watched her mother and drifted off to sleep beside her, holding her.

love u sooo much for writing this awesome OS ... a Biiigg bear hug for you 🤗 .. and a special hug for giving it a happy shappy end 🤗 ... yeah am a total sucker for happily ever afters 😃 ...

write another happy shappy OS soon ...

lots of love

Sana

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

beautiful os

Originally posted by: euphoric

thanks a bunch fair lady😆 i m glad tht u enjoyed the OS to the hilt😳 i m humbled...

aww🤗 i truly can understand wht ur state wud be when u cried in the office... it can get soo embarassing... it had happened to me😭

yes Maan's pain was unbearable but so was Khushi's who needed her mother desperately at tht tender age😭

i m a total fan of happy endings too... will surely write when some bug injects me an idea😃