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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev fann

omg!!!!!!!!!!!! it was one of the best piece of writing i hv ever come across...it was sooo beautiful...i actually had tears in my eyes while reading it...soo much of pain and that too written soo beautifully...hats off to u girl!!!! u r simply incredible...

finally the last bit made me smile..."something constructive"...hahahahahaha...that was something!!!
i m glad that u hv written this OS...i guess being "not well" makes ur brain more creative...hahahaha..just kidding...i hope u r fine now...
take care dear...
and ya we want more OS of this kind...sooo cont writing but without falling sick again...

thanks dear... its one of my best too😳
i'm glad tht u liked the write-up... and so sorry to have made u feel bad but thn i did compensate😛 i m humbled dear😃
"something constructive" well wasn't tht completely 'Geet'ish😆😆😆
actually had begun with this much before but then it went on a halt.. so got delayed with the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃am speechless .. (but abhee kuch na kuch to bolna paray ga naa 😆)
OMG lady u rock! ... to say that this was awesome will be such an understatement ... I had tears in my eyes through out ... tears of joy and pain ... I had a hard time controlling my tears while reading this at work .. thank god no one's around .. otherwise ppl wud've really started to doubt my sanity 😳 ... I cud feel every ounce of the emotions of Maan and Khushi ...
Maan's mindltalks with Geet were mindblowingly awesome ...
so many instances pricked my heart but the strongest was this one .. it portrayed a child's longing for a mother so beautilfully and the pain a father went through after witnessing this ...
She told her anything and everything about home, school, Maan, Dadi Ma, office... every little thing. He looked as she sadly told Geet how her friends' mothers would come to pick them up and drop them to school. How they would flaunt the tiffins their moms had packed for them. "Mumma, papa says you are sleeping. How much longer are you going to sleep?" she asked innocently. The words cut through him and he grappled with himself to remain strong. "Mumma, you know I'm never going to speak with Vicky" she complained. "Why so?" Maan asked gently. Teary eyed, she replied, "He says, mumma will never come back home. He says he saw it on TV." Maan silently took her in his arms and said, "Let people say what they want. Don't let them affect you. Your mumma will come back" he finished softly stroking her hair. "Sachchi?" she asked. Smiling a little, Maan said yes and then quickly wiping her tears, Khushi turned to Geet, "Mumma, I know you will come home. I love you" said that she bent to kiss Geet and then holding her face in her little palms she quietly watched her mother and drifted off to sleep beside her, holding her.
love u sooo much for writing this awesome OS ... a Biiigg bear hug for you 🤗 .. and a special hug for giving it a happy shappy end 🤗 ... yeah am a total sucker for happily ever afters 😃 ...
write another happy shappy OS soon ...
lots of love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanya94

👏👏👏👏loved it...the best part about it was that though maan n geet were seperated in a way...they still had a bond btw them of their mind talks...i wish we saw soemthing like that in the show nowdays as in a way they are seperated but cant feel anybond btw them...sad...anyways loved khushi'scharacter.thats how msks daughter shud be...poor msk...biwi aur beti mein phas gaya...but as the title of ur os says...his life was wid both of them n bec of both of them...n the one who came at the end...very sweet...n thanxs for giving it a happy ending...i felt reeally sad seeing yesterdays epi n everyone in the forum was also writing about ml n all that...so nice to see maneet together in this

Hey Tanya... don't be disheartened dearie...
i m glad tht u liked this piece of my work😳... yup they were separate but that was only physical... their minds and hearts were attuned and he knew and functioned as per her likes... where as in shw he has lost the memory of her... how can he relate to her so soon... patience dearie😛
well i can't imagine MSK's daughter to be anything less than tht😉😆 bechara phasega nahi toh kya karega... thy r his princesses😛
glad the OS took ur mind off the sad stuff... thanks😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

lovely update and was very touchy .

thanks dear
glad u liked it😳
thanks dear😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Parisa-

Awww sonia...this was BEAUTIFUL surprise 🤗
I loved it when i was reading Ripped aprt...i thought maan and geet are going DO IT and thats your surprise 🤣🤣🤣

This was soo cute...Specially the last part 🤣...anything constructive 🤣🤣🤣...Loved it...keep giving such sweet surprises 😍

Thanks a bunch Pari🤗🤗
glad to see u r coming to trust me again😆
haila u thot they'll do it in RA😕 no never... don't u remember with me writing things... Robbie Kasturi never had a SR even though thy were married🤣🤣 oopss shouldn't hv said tht aloud😆
glad u liked it sweetheart...
loads to love😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Haaye that was damn sweet OS

Loved it to the core

Thanks a bunch Afsha😃
glad u enjoyed it

Originally posted by: sunshiner23

nice os dear.khushi so cute.thanks 4 a lovly dovly update.

Isn't Khushi a sweetheart😛
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Krati😊

Originally posted by: angelina_2005

sonia loved it>>>>>>>>> thanks for such a wonderful os

Thanks Angelina😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks bobby😳
Thanks Riz😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi there...just read ur OS...It was awesome n beautifully written...full of love, emotions, sadness n happiness. Loved Khushi...replica of Geet! GLad Geet woke up...had they had a son. Please wrie something new n pm wen u do!

Indeed Khushi was a replica of her mother having perfect traits of her father as well😛
have already PMed u the link to the works...
thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: amita5

nice story...please pm me on other stories you write

Thanks Amita😃

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