Zindagi... Tum se hai ~OS~ - Page 4

Sonia. I read the entire OS with a bated breathe, more precisely until it is shown that Geet is in coma. I was fearing the worst. But then you saved your own life by making Geet come out of the deep slumber. Khushi was awesome and what can I say about Maan? His love is immeasureable.

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 mera psot udd gaya😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

wow wonderful OS... luved it...

I read it wid teary eyes...

TEARS DUE TO FEAR

TEARS DUE TO GRIEF

TEARS DUE TO HAPPINESS

Sonia,

That was one outstanding OS! Incredibly touching! The purity with which you portrayed their love was simply magical. It was a touching read. Khushi was a fabulous character. Initially, when Geet wasn't around and they talked only in riddles, I had a feeling that Geet was already dead, but soon that was changed. The way you've depicted life in the Khurana Mansion without Geet was sad and had a lot to tell. When Pinky brought news of Geet's revival, that moment had me in tears-literally!

Loved the way how they all stayed connected to Geet even during her comatose state. And Maan's anxiety and concern causing him to wake her up in the middle of the night to check on her was cute. And Geet's line about being 'constructive', it reminded me of a similar line in my FF almost a year ago...lol!!

Thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Cheers!
Tia

Originally posted by: esha143

This OS shows the pure n divine love of two souls...how instead of being in a coma for so much time... Geet was with Maan in all that he did...she was in him...inside his heart...a part of his soul or rather she is HIS soul...it was heart-wrenching watching Maan suffer her physical absence at the same time it was wondrous to see him so emotionally...psychologically attuned to her as though he is talking to her in person...Loved his talks to her...his only way of keeping himself sane n alive...it requires God-only-knows-how-much strength n love for someone to do something like this...I would wish to salute his spirit if he was real...n that Love is the only thing that brought her back to him... Eshu... you know u pick up the exact things tht i wish to essay😃

Exactly... he's not letting her presence out of his life... he's clinging on to the hope tht one day things would get to normal and tht everything wud be fine... she wud be back... after all when all withers away its the candle of hope tht keeps away the darkness... hai na😳

Loved Khushi totally...of course its a lovable character as u know urself...her dominance... arrogance...care for her Daadi n Papa...the way she treats Maan as a child n scold him for skipping his meals n keeping a strict eye on him all the while...it's all just like Geet...she is really her daughter...personified with her character...loved the way Pinky showers her love on Khushi...the way they all celebrated Geet's Birthday with her in her hospital room... keeping the air around her with positivity...

Yup... they keep supporting her morally and encourage her to keep fighting the battle though they know that she would not realize anything they did... but yet they do this...

Khushi has an essence of her mother and her father both... she's a perfect child... and continuosly reminds Maan of his Geet... she's stubborn like her father and caring like her mother... a child who is a fusion of her parents' true love😳

The FB of Maan n Geet's intro was really nice...the way Maan showed his arrogance n the way Geet snubbed him n left him a changed man...with a hope to meet her again...that was really good to see...

a chanced encounter that changed his life bychance😉😆

The way they all cared for each other in the absence of Geet is so touching...n then when she was back...she took her charge...I absolutely loved the entire part after Geet came back...the way she took charge...the way Maan was so attentive to her n his over-protectiveness...it was hilarious really how it pissed off Geet after sometime...n then the way she said.."

not that you do anything constructive staying awake"...🤣...the line made me roflll...it was a master piece...n resulted in the maing of another master piece...haan😉😆😆...Khushi ka Bhai !!!!

confession karu... tht was never in the original plan😕😆 i had planned to end it on the note of hope but thn changed my mind... mujhe teri bandook se darr lagta hai😆😆😆

sahi toh bola Geet ne... na sone deta hai na kuch karta hai😡... bechari won't snap kya😉😆 kab tak tolerate karegi pehle baar main chauka maara🤣🤣maine 1 yr isiliye diya tha ki... but ashu kamini was taking me to basics😆😆😆 toh 9 mnths kar diya😆😆😆

As u already know...absolutely wonderful OS...loved it...n wuwww juuu ...🤗

wuw juu too jaan...

Originally posted by: shah10

wow..superb update.

midblowing.

Originally posted by: nilu710

VEry niceee

beautiful part

ir was sooo emotionla whengeet was in coma and maan talking to her on her b'day

very nice os

loved it

Originally posted by: gangesegb

simply awesome...

Originally posted by: siroilily

Awesome os 👏
loved it.