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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

I had a lump in my throat and a layer of water in my eyes..hmm does that show how much I liked it 😳

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Loved this OS! First the sadness, then the slowly changing to happiness. Loved it!! Thank you so much!

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome..beautifully written... just loved it:)

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Awesome...very well written..
Khushi,the sweet little girl taking care of her father...
And yes,Thanx 4 happy ending...

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heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

that was definetely pleasant surprise from you sonia;

awesome the way kushi was taking care of maan then dadi everyone thanks for such a beautiful OS

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Beautifully written sonia...!!
Loved the little khushi who would control her papa n badi mumma...how sweet is that..😳 😳 😳
thank god geet got fine n is back to her normal self...i was so scared to even think that geet wud nt b around...but u proved me wrong n here she is happy wid their small world...!!!
khushi is chooo chweeet...n a cutey pie...😳😳😳
awesome OS...
loved it alooot>>!!!

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

omg!!!!!!!!!!!! it was one of the best piece of writing i hv ever come across...it was sooo beautiful...i actually had tears in my eyes while reading it...soo much of pain and that too written soo beautifully...hats off to u girl!!!! u r simply incredible...

finally the last bit made me smile..."something constructive"...hahahahahaha...that was something!!!

i m glad that u hv written this OS...i guess being "not well" makes ur brain more creative...hahahaha..just kidding...i hope u r fine now...

take care dear...

and ya we want more OS of this kind...sooo cont writing but without falling sick again...

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's superbbb👏 n full of love n life of maaneet...
i loved it...

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tanya94

@tanya94

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

👏👏👏👏loved it...the best part about it was that though maan n geet were seperated in a way...they still had a bond btw them of their mind talks...i wish we saw soemthing like that in the show nowdays as in a way they are seperated but cant feel anybond btw them...sad...anyways loved khushi'scharacter.thats how msks daughter shud be...poor msk...biwi aur beti mein phas gaya...but as the title of ur os says...his life was wid both of them n bec of both of them...n the one who came at the end...very sweet...n thanxs for giving it a happy ending...i felt reeally sad seeing yesterdays epi n everyone in the forum was also writing about ml n all that...so nice to see maneet together in this