During Amnesia (MG) EPILOGUE -52-

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dear readers

as I am not happy with the present track of GHSP

I am starting my take from the episode when Doctor tells all that Maan is going through Selective Amnesia

hope u all will like it

will wait for your responses

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes dear will be waiting

plz update soon
what about ups n downs
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After the doctor Left every one was confused as to now what will they do, Dadi was in tears and Dev was confused thinking 'now that bro has lost his memory of my good times, will he bash me, how much has he forgotten, does he remember that I lost a huge amount in gambling, oh God now what will I do, will bro throw me out of the KM' at the same time Lucky was confused and so was Nandini, every one was worried about themselves, as to once the old arrogant angry Maan returns what will they do? Geet was in deep thought, she called Nakul and asked "Nakul, just find out how much has he forgotten" poor Nakul said "but, how Madam ji" she smiled "simple just wish him and ask him about the date today, that ways you will know" trembling Nakul went to Maan's room and talked him in finding that he assumed it to be 2nd Feb 2010, Geet praised her, and Dadi was confused as to what was she up to, Dev and others have gone to their rooms as they were fearing his anger. Geet assured Dadi that all will be fine, then she called Adi "hello Adi Sir, can you arrange me the schedule Maan was following in Feb. 2010, it must be in the secretarial records" "yes, Geet I will just arrange, is every thing ok" he asked "you come to the outhouse, I'll tell you everything".

Adi came in with the records wondering why Geet called him here instead of KM, she was waiting for him lost in her thoughts, "Geet, here are the records, what happened is everything ok" she explained him everything and he was shocked she asked for his co-operation and looked into the files and found that on 28th Jan Maan had met for the first time with Mr. Chopra regarding the Noida project, she got what she wanted "now, Adi sir, first thing you will go and brief Maan that he has gone through selective amnesia due to an accident and during the time that he has forgotten the Noida project has gone under construction and as the knowledge of his forgetting the things can create problems so it would be nice if he visited the undergoing project sites and went through the details" Adi was quite afraid but remembered how when they met last time he had hugged him and that gave him courage and he went to Maan.

He slowly briefed Maan about everything, at first Maan was taken aback, but when Adi showed him the newspapers and all of the different projects he agreed that due to his accident he had forgotten many things, he then asked "Adi, how did I get hurt on my head?" Adi replied "that's not known sir, you were kidnapped by Pammi ji and when Geet and Dev sir went to rescue you, you were not there, you had escaped, out of frustration she tried to shoot Geet and in all this Dev sir got shot, and later Geet and Lucky found you in the Gurudwara unconscious and brought you to the hospital" Maan listened to everything and asked him further "but why did Mummy ji kidnap me and who is this Geet" Adi replied "she wanted the property to be transferred in her name or Dev sir's name and sir as for Geet she had been with you for long, is all I can say" "hmm" said Maan and went to visit the sites with Adi.

Meanwhile Geet arranged for her things to be shifted to the outhouse and made sure that their room looked exactly the way it used to look before she came in picture. She then called Sasha "hello Sasha come to the KM now" Sasha who by now has been aware that it was Geet who was the boss and Maan was just a signatory authority dared not question her and came running to the KM.


girls I am quite depressed with the way they are handling situations sorry CVs but can not help myself

hope you all like my take

please hit the like tab and motivate me

whether you all comment or not I will update it as I am hell angry with the Cvs

but I 'll appreciate if you all will comment, so PLS COMMENT

feel free to even bash me

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Superb well written love it want more 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part way of potrying same thing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratulation for new ff
awesome start and interesting.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice ...👏👍🏼
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow didi ...we got to get a new version !!!
update soon ...

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even i am depressed with the current storyline of GHSP..😭😭..looking forward for your story...

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