During Amnesia (MG) EPILOGUE -52- - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ part 15
i like the way you are linking the flashbacks to the things/person he notices in HP, but i am worried how he will get the connection to canadian embassy... he may have to go again for some paper work for dev, but then who will go there on sunday for official work
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Posted: 14 years ago
very different way of during anmesia loved ur way
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice prt,so hes havng flashes of his past wid geet.cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome!! You have me hooked!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 15
oh Maan is regaining everything slowly...
good for him...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next day Maan decided to go to the place he stayed last time, he called Munshi ji and asked him to come to Handa Haveli, Sasha has not told him about his Amnesia, so he was quite unaware, Maan asked him to take him the place he stayed last and as the old man was very well aware of his Chote Saab's anger he quietly directed him, once in the cottage Maan sent Munshi ji to get some information about the present state of the land he purchased that originally belonged to Geet, the old man went.

Maan looked every where and went out and paced for a while and re entered the cottage and as he turned again to move out he heard a knock and he opened the door to find Geer standing there in a yellow suit covering her head and face, only her eyes were visible, she said 'please, please' sarcasm was quite obvious in her voice she continued 'please, give it to me, hope now your false ego is satisfied' and then paused than again she continued and then suddenly she raised her hand to slap and then fisted it and said 'you were right in saying that one should not hit the weaker, you might me far more stringer then me physically but your mentality is so small' and she left; he stood their speechless, he understood it was another flash from his past.

He did not wait for Munshi ji to return he called him and said that he was going back and then headed to the Handa Haveli, he took his luggage and loaded it in the Jeep, just then Guruwinder came "Babu, are you going?" he sighed "yes, thank you for helping me" "but Babu you look pale, I have got your medicines take some food and have them, you will feel better then you can leave" Guruwinder forcibly took Maan inside, he was feeling too weak to protest.

When Guruwinder was giving him tablets after he had food, he refused and said "Guruwinder, what do you know about me and Geet?" the man sighed "not much, only few things like, you purchased that land from the guy who illegally married her and made her pregnant"

"And"

"Then you later saved her when Brij was about to kill her"

"Then"

"After a month or so you two came back here because of that land deal and again Channi's bro attacked her and you saved her"

"Then"

"After that you two never came back, only Darjee told me that you have married her with the unborn baby and send that man to Jail"

"Who was that man?"

"I suppose your step bro Dev"

"What?"

"But, why are you asking me all these things?"

"Guruwinder, I have lost my memory"

"What?"

"Yes, and I have come all the way to HSPur in a hope that I may remember those days"

"You will, just go to Amritsar and visit the GoldenTemple you will remember every thing"

"Thank you, I will definitely go, I will leave early tomorrow"

Next day he left for Golden Temple and as he was passing the road he saw her again walking on the road wearing a white suit is dazzled state and suddenly he saw a car coming towards her and she was oblivious of it, he extended his hand but she vanished; he again had that headache but this time he prayed "Babaji, Bhali Kara" and headed to the temple; once inside he was calm and he sat there for long and returned to Delhi, he was at peace he went to Nizzamuddin Dragaaha and prayed as he was returning he saw her staring at him she was wearing an off white suit and looking at him with joy, he looked back at her and this time there was no headache, he had come in terms with the fact that he loved her, loved her more than he loved himself, why else would he risk his own life twice to save her.

He entered the outhouse and went to the room she had lived and a she entered the room everything came flashing down in his mind; he remembered each and every detail; he sat there and for a while then took out the orange spread they had fought on once and slept peacefully on the bed, it was after many months he sleepy peacefully. Nakul informed Dadi that Ram Babu came in and told that Maan was sleeping in the outhouse, worried Dadi went to see him and was thinking to wake him she withdrew the curtains, he covered his face and said "Geet, what is this? Let me sleep, close the curtains, just few more minutes Jaan" Dadi was dumbstruck and screamed with joy.

On Sunday, he took a bouquet of multi colored roses and went to the Canadian Embassy at sharp 11 am she was just coming, they saw each other and then as it always happens "LOVE IS IN THE AIR"

sorry readers but these parts are taking longer then I expected... i did not realize that there would be so much to write

next: epilogue

hope you all like my take

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whether you all comment or not I will update it as I am hell angry with the Cvs

but I 'll appreciate if you all will comment, so PLS COMMENT

feel free to even bash me

i think this matter is enough for 121-130 episodes of GHSP😆 ,

wish me for completing successfully 100 episodes😉

😆what do you all think?😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
ME FIRST...YESSS...
NICE UPDATE LV...
WAITIN 4 EPI...
CHAO
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome updates
yay finally he remembad evrifin
cnt w8 4 da epilogue x
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh man!!! it was so gud...😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful both parts

love it core cont soonnn

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