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Posted: 14 years ago
really like the way maan developed the bond between the mother and son..
awesome part..
would love to see something like this in the series...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

love the way maan is taking care of him...he never lets her know that his mom doesnt love him or has left them...

geet went away...she was right in her own...she wanted her maan ...n he was not around...

she met MJ (manjeet),...so nice...she spent time with him...seems like he missed his mom but his dad made him understand...

maan in HP...that would be interesting...

continue soon...

PS -- di...heading me page no galat hai...35 nahi...36...
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ part 13, atleast geet knows that he is living with the memories he has of her

and he knows about HP now, looking forward
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 8
Geet is trying her best par Maan is making it hard for her...
oh hes showing all his helplessness and frustration on her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 9
wow Geet is all prepared so that Maan doesnt get to know about the major share holder thing...
Maan still thinks that its Dadima they are talking about...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 10
one more time Maan question her integrity i will slap him...
hadd hai yaar...
how could he so bitterly ask her and say those words to her?
poor Geet...
yaadash ke saath saath Maan ka dil bhi kahin kho gaya hai...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 11
oh Geet knows her Maan inside out...
wow shes pregnant with Maan's baby...
lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 12
wow such fast pace...
good now Geet is the mother of a son...
oh no ye kya Geet shes leaving?
oh man this Maan is not at all trying hard to remember his lost memory...
poor Geet...
feel very sad for her...
she has literally given up everything for this guy...
hope he gets back his memory at least now...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 13
oh thats honestly heart breaking...
Maan still hasnt got his memory back...
damn that memory...
their love wasnt that simple or light that he cant and couldnt get it back...
one of the strongest bond...
sigh...
oh good Maan at least he has made Jeet to bond with his mom...
hopefully waiting for Maan to gain his memory back...
maybe this time it will work...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

It was difficult, but he will try, he knew that she holds an important place in his heart but what? He is not able to understand, he remembered he a week before she left they had a heated discussion about all this, she was right about what she said then "Maan, what is all this? why every time when you seem to have flashes of those days you try to act ignorant and even take pills to calm yourself, why Maan don't you want to remember the days we shared together" in whole 17 months that was the first time she shouted on him, she has moved away from him as he felt very uncomfortable when she was around, she even shifted to his old room leaving behind Manjeet with him to share this room, and that day he again felt dizzy and had a throbbing head ache, and he was getting flashes of her laughing at something, he hurriedly went to the room and took the pills meant for headache and calmed his senses, she was annoyed and was shouting, but he could not tolerate this, he never talked to her in raised voice but that day he lost it, "what do you want from me, Yes I don't want to remember those days, may be I forgot them for good, and in spite of the fact that I don't remember getting married to you I am taking all the responsibilities, I am not a man who would ever turn his back to his suppose to be wife, what else do you want, is it not enough that I am tolerating you as you are the mother of my son" he crossed all limits that day, she also did not back off and shouted "yes, you are tolerating me, thank you Mr. M.S.K for telling me the truth, you are not the man who saved my life even though you hated me that time, you are not the man who loved me in spite of the fact that I were carrying someone else's baby, you are not the man who married me against all the odds, you are not the man who just to help me get justice send your own bro to prison, you are not the man who cried with me when I had my abortion, you are not the man who followed me all the way to Amritsar just to manofy me, you are not my man, you are not Maan" she was in tears and then he lost his anger, and pushed her to the wall shouting at her "so, that's it you want your servant back your slave back whom you slaved with the chains of your so called love, Geet tell you something , you don't need a husband you need a puppy who would wag his tail at your delight, and that is the reason why I choose to keep those days closed some where in my mind, you women are all same, you all want not lovers or husband but some one with a fat pocket and strong arms so that he can let you shop all day and even carry your bags, enough of your non sense Geet, you just go just leave me alone" and that's it, that's the reason she left.

Maan sat there long and when Dadi came and asked him what happened he told her why Geet left and that was then when Dadi said "Maan, I know what you are going through, your past experiences with women have not been good, but Beta ji it took Geet long to win your heart, the way you behaved wither is not new, once before also you accused her for the same, but at that time she did not dither as you were a stranger to her or say her boss, but this time it was different, this time she was hurt as she is your wife not some employee of yours, beta go and bring her back, go to HSPur, may be you will remember something there"

Maan for the first time in these 30 months went to his old room where she shifted, he went through her things to get some clue, some thing that could help, but he found none. Then he went to her room in the outhouse and searched there, and he found a photograph under the newspaper lining in the cupboard, it was a family picture, he went to Dev and asked who was who, and Dev told him "this is Darjee, her grandfather, this her father Mohinder and this her aunt and uncle, these are her cousins Brij and Rajji and this is her bro Titoo and this one is her mother Rano", then Maan asked him the details of HSPur and the time when he was there, which Dev supplied for once Maan asked him how he knew so much, and he replied that once he gets back his memory he will know because if he told him the details he will sure be thrown again "bro, I have done my redemption and am not capable of going through more punishment, so its better that you recall everything on your own" Maan shrugged and thought that he really needs to find as a lot is hidden in those days.

Next day, he told Jeet that he was going for a trip for few days and he should behave properly with every one and left in his Jeep. He did not even once glanced back at the instructions and directions given by Dev, those roads seemed very familiar to him, as he was nearing HSPur he crossed a jungle and what he saw was a girl in blue suit with her head covered running and few men with swords in their hands were chasing her, he ran behind but they all vanished in thin air; he shrugged and his head started spinning, he went to find his tablets but he had left them. He sat for a while and continued his journey he must have just crossed a km when he again saw that girl, a man from behind hit her with a khanzar and she fell down, then another man pulled his sword and was about to hit her when he shouted "NO" and ran but everything vanished in thin air; he sat there shaking; he was sure that girl was Geet, but he was not able to assemble things and fainted.

When he woke he found himself in a room and when he tried to stand up a lady who was sitting near the door shouted "Maan Babu has regained his conscious" he was surprised how that lady knew his name, and then he noticed, a photo frame hanging on the wall, it was his wedding photo with her and in the middle stood the same old man whom Dev said was her Darjee. Just then a man entered the room "Maan Babu, have some water, I will ask my wife to prepare tea and snacks for you, or will you prefer having dinner" Maan looked at him and said "tea and snacks will do, but where I am?" the man smiled and said "Handa Haveli"

sorry readers I wanted to finish it off in this part but, am not able to type more so will cover rest in next part

Precap: while Maan is in HSPur Geet comes to meet Manjeet

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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