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Heys guys I decided to add one more part to my SS. I hope u don't mind. I hope u guys enjoy it. If there are any mistakes. Plzz forgive me.

Part 6

Maan geet were enjoying their honeymoon. They didn't even step out of their house from last three days. They have made love every corner of the house. Yes, maan brought a house for them.

Flash back:

Geet went to bath room after their first night love making and maan thought of idea of be away from hotel and avoid the people knocking their room quite often.

He wanted to be away from people. He couldn't even bear waiters coming in to room to give them service.

So he called Adi and made arrangements and brought a house for them.

And gave a surprise to geet. She was also sooo happy to be just with him.

Flash back ends

It was last day of their honey moon both were not too happy.

Maan had promised geet to bring their children her.

Geet arranges a candle light for them

It was most romanctic dinner.

Maan was very impressed; geet has worn a pretty dress.

Maan was just starring at her and geet fed him, then maan fed her. just when they were about to move to room and get started with their love making session.

Geet asks maan go to back yard and sit for a while.

Maan and geet goes back yard, it was dark there, suddenly lights comes on and it was decorated very beautifully.

And there was a heart shape posture saying "I LOVE YOU"

Maan smile and looks beside him but there was no geet. He calls out o her, and geet comes in saree.

Geet comes and bends down and sits on her knees, just like proposing him.

And says, "Maan, thank you for coming in to my life. I don't know how u fall in love with me who was such a nerd in college. U did so many things to show me ur true love, but I was so stupid to think that ur such awavara and pagal, but what I realized later that ur were a deewana of me. u proposed me such romantic way, I found everything in u, a friend, boy friend, husband and will b everything later on and blushes. U have done so many things to make me feel that I am very special to u. but today I want u to know that u r also very very specaily to me. I love u and want to love u this life and upcoming many lives."

Maan smiles at her confession. And takes her in his arm and hugs her tightly

Maan says, "I love u too jaan, I love u soo much"

And picks her up in his arm and moves toward their bed room to experience another passionful night.

After few months

It was a most memorable and biggest day for maan.

He was nominated for the youngest business man of the year.

Maan geet and whole family was present there. And they announce maan sigh kurana as the achiever of the award called youngest businessmen of the year. Maan was very happy, he gets up along with geet, he hugs her tightly and kisses her on her lips(forgetting hat there are so many people in the hall, live telecast and most important family was there, but he was too happy to notice it) and moves to hug everybody and moves to stage to get his award.

Once he has it, he thanks his parents, family and most to geet. Geet is too happy and has happy tear in her eyes. Maan comes back wipes her tear and once again kisses her.

Family was too happy. Days were going by. For maan and geet love was on air.

After few days

Maan geet were on date on beach. After that they were sitting on sand. Geet lesning on maan. Suddenly maan's phone rings.

Maan sees it and tells geet that he'll b back and goes a little far to talk on phone.

Geet sees maan talking on phone. Maan also while on phone sees geets and continues on call. Their eyes meet and they smile. Geet keeps throwing rock on water. After few minutes.

Maan finishes his call and comes back to geet. And helps her get up

Geet says, "maan ek baat puchu?"

Maan, "geet bolo na!"

Geet, "ye kiska phone that jo tumhe mujse dur jake baat karni padi?"

Maan, "ohoo mrs. Kuruna, apko mera few minutes k liye bhi dur jana ab bardast nahi hota huh!"

Geet smiles sadly and looks down. Maan gets serious and

Says, "geet agar tumhe ye pata chale ke mere pyar ka koi aur bhi haqdar hai to?"

Geet says, "to me apni jaan de dungi and starts cring.

Maan says, "geet plz roh mat na, I love u" but still serious

Geet, "kya baat hai, kon hai jise app pyar karte ho mere siva"

Maan, "karata nahi karana suru karuga" and smiles

Geet gets confuse and says, "mere pyar me kya kami hai maan jo ap kisi aur se pyar karana suru kerege?" and cries hardly

Maan, "geet geett meri baat to suno… I m sure tumhe pata chelega to tumbhi use pyar karogi!" and smiles

Geet again confuse and wacks him and puts her head on his chest and asks, "maan saf saf bolo na"

Maan, "hum ek se do hone vale hai!"

Geet again confuse "maan hum already do hai, ye app kaisi baat kar rahe he"

Maan teases her, "geet I wonder how u were a scholar student in college"

Geet wacks him again maan smiles

Maan, "geet doctor uncle ka phone that, hamare ghar me ek angle ane vala hai" and hugs her tightly

Geet gets shocked and takes a little while to process the information and hugs him back

Maan and geet kisses each other like first time and geet can tell maan was very happy and so was she

They come back home. Maan's grandparents were visiting them so they were their too. They were here since a week and form a good bond with geet. They are really good and carring toward geet just like maan

Maan smiles and says, "it was good and by the way ek good news hai apke liye, app par dada ban ne vale hai" geet shys and looks down

Dadaji gets too happy and takes out money from his pocket and takes out a buri nazar and blesses her and runs around in house and screams

"Aree, maan ki dadi, bahi, anu sunate ho….. me par dada bane vala hu."

Prerena comes and gets happyand blesses her and hugs her.

Everybody is running around a house and telling each other their new position they are gonn get and maan and geet watching all this from corner and happy to see their family.

Everybody taking care of geet

Dadaji goes to walk with geet in morning. Dadi smiles and happy to see this that her husband is going to walk after so many days and blesses geet

Anurag-prerena takes care of geet like her parents

On each saturnday Sunday family plan something new and new

They go to picnic or play cricet or wach movie in home theater or something every week end

One morning

Everybody is sitting in living room.

And Vicky comes and prerna asks, "aree vikcy tu itani subhe kaha gaya tha?"

Vikcy, "mom, meine suna hai in pregnancy women jiska photo dekhati hai baccha aisa hi hota hai, to me bhabhi ke liye dhoni ka photo lene gaya that"

Anni is also sitting there. She says, "what nonsense, agar baccha dhoni ki tarah pida hua to idhar udhar bet marata firega aur bade hoke match fixing me pakada jayega, no way, bhabhi ke kamre me salman khan ka picture rakhate hai"

Vicky says, "no way dhoni ka"

Annii, " salman ka"

They both are fighting and geet smiles

Prerna says, "tum log bacche ki maa ko to puch lo ki use kis ka pic rakana hai"

Geet is eating mango and looks at them

Anni and Vicky are pleading pick their choice

And geet laugh and says, "y are u guys getting all hyper, maine to apni pasand ki pic already laga di hai"

They both says, "kya??? Kiski???"

And prerna and dadi smiles along with geet.

And dadaji comes from behind and says, "tuhare bhai ki"

They both makes sad faces and looks down

Everybody else laugh at them

The following evening

Geet is in her room and looking at maan's pic in her room's wall and strokes her belly which has a cute bump. And smiles

She starts to dance and moves her hand imaging maan with her dancing and at the end. She takes a rose from vase and touches her cheek and smiles and bends down and says thank u like she is performing a act front of the people. And people are claping

Maan comes at witness everything and smiles

Geet notices him and blushes

Maan comes and hugs her, geet hugs him back. And she moves so that her back is facing his chest

And maan caresses her belly loving and says, "howz my baby doing?"

Geet smiles and says, "perfectly fine, but missing his papa"

Maan, "his? No geet it's not his its her, papa's angle!"

Geet gets all mad and says, "its his , mama's boy not papa's angle!"

Maan, "will see that tomorrow, y now destroy our romance"

And geet smiles

And both move toward bed and maan asking her about her day and vise versa

Epilogue

After few years (3 or 4 yrs)

Geet is running around the house after her two little children.

They are twins. Eventually maan and geet both were right.

It was papa's angle and mama'a boy at the first time.

Geet with glass of milk running after them.

Their angles "Ansha and Ashi"

Maan named his angle "Ashi = smile" becuz after witnessing geet's pain in delivery room, a smile form in his face when he saw his angle ASHI

And geet got to name her boy mama's boy, "Ansh = a symbol of maneet's love"

And they are one year and a little over it righ now.

They are on vacation. So geet has to run around them for their break fast and lunch and dinner. Becuz at home prerna or anurag or dada dadi takes of their little brates

Geet screaming and running after ashi, "ASHI come back and start drinking like ur brother"

But she is not listning and running aroung

Geets sees no option and calls maan, "MAAN ……… MAANnn come here"

A little angry and tells him to take of his angle

Maan , "angle come her honey, come beta letz drink mil and have lunch baby, see mama is so tired, its not good to trouble mama beta. "

He makes his angle have her lunch and geet to her boy Ansha

Ansha always listen to geet and Ashi always to maan when it comes to them

Other wise at home, family doesn't even let them come near thm

After having lunch

Maan goes back to room and geet puts kids to nap and comes to bedroom, where maan is working on laptop

Geet sees this and sits on bed the other side and steaches her neck and body.

Geet says, "I wonder how mom and everybody puts up with this brates."

And smiles, "maan even after having kids it doesn't even feel like that there is difference in our life na, ma and dad and everybody takes so much care that we still gets to spend time with each other."

And maan says, "hmm.."

Geet notices this and gets mad, "we are here on vecation and ur doing ur work we shouldn't even have come here" and starts to get up

Suddenly maan catches her hand and makes her sit on bed again

And closes the laptop and says, "sorry sorry sorry baccha.. kya hua tumhe? Tired?

And moves to geet's side of the bed and sits behind her and pulls her between his legs

Geets moves behind and now geet's beck is against his chest. Geet rests her head on his chest.

Geet says, "ha, ur angle made me tired!"

Maan, "do u want massage, let me massage u? "

And starts to massage her shoulder and back, suddenly maan thinks of something and smiles mischiviously

"geet bacche so gaye kya??"

"hmm…" geet is feeling good and gets she gets comfortable in his arm but anware of her position that she is arousing maan.

Maan asks, "geet how long they'll b asleep??"

Geet, "4 to 5 hour. They are tired becux they woke up early today and were playing in swimming pool so may b more.."

Maan smiles and starts to put the sleeves of her shirt off her shoulder and starts kissing her

Geet, "maann…. Kya kar rahe ho… massage karo na.. badmashi bad karo, kal raat ko bhi sone nhai diy aur baccho ne subha udha diya abbb tum.."

Maan is not listning and strats giving her wet kisses on her shoulder then neck

Geet also gets aroused and both starts kissing each other.

Geet can never deny maan

And both again gets lost in their love making until kids gets up and starts baging on their door.

They lived happily ever after

Hope you guys like this SS. it was a my first attempt to write something. please press LIKE button. and give comments.

Originally posted by: madhavipatil

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