Maneet NEW SS Woh Pyare Lamhe COMPLETE!!

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Hello Guys, this Nilima. this is my First ever SS.just trying to write something. i am not a good writer but will try my best. Hope you guys like it.



Woh pyare Lamhee..

14th February, 2011


 

It was a most wonderful day for Maan and Geet. They were waiting for this day since they started dating. Here Maan was getting excited to go to Geet home with barat and here Geet was blushing while getting ready becuz all the girls were teasing her.

Suddenly Rajji came running, "Didi...Didi...Barat came"

All girls went to see the Barat along with Geet.

Geet stood on the terrace with all the girls looking at her handsome would-be hubby! (Just for few hours ;))who is sitting on horse and few guys are dancing on front of it. Maan looks at Geet opening his "sehera" and winks, Geet understand what he means and smiles and blushes,

Soon Every Rituals takes place and Maneet Get Married, and soon bidai happens and geet cries a lot with her family, Maan feels sad looking at Geet, when they sit in car Maan takes Geet in his arm and consoles her. Anni and Vicky smiles looking at their love.

Very soon they Arrives at Khurana Mention, Maan's Mother Welcomes them and they take blessing from All the elders and after all the Rasam of ring finding and kumkum hand print and all the most awaiting arrives for Maan, Their Suhagraat!

Maan slowly enters their Room. And looks at Geet intensely. Geet feels Maan's eye on her and feels all shy. Maan stands by the door and keeps looking at Geet. Geet thinks, "yea aise kyu dekha rahe hai? Kuch karate kyu nahi??

Maan understands it and walks forward and sits the bed and puts his hands on Geet's hand which is resting on her knees. She turns all red and understands what is in his mind.

And Maan says, "Geet kya hua? Tumhe yaad hai na maine tumhe kya kaha tha?"and smiles mischievously'

Geet understands and hides her face in her hands, maan moves forward and removes her hand from her face and says, not today geet, aja koi sharm nahi, koi rukavat nahi, aja hame ek hone se koi nahi rok sakata, na tum na yeh duniyawale.

Maan slowly moves forward and kisses her forehead and following by nose, her cheek and finally takes her lips in his. He was waiting for this day since so long. He slowly moves to take all her jewelry off of her. While doing so, he notices that Geet looks tired, so he ask her, "Geet are you all right? Tum bahot thaki hue lag raho ho!"

Geet was tired, but she knows, that Maan was waiting for this moment since very long so she denies it and says, nahi Maan, I'm completely all right. But Maan understands that she is just saying it for him. So he says, Nahi, Geet u are looking very tired, letz go to sleep, we will continue with these, aur tumhe to meri saath puri zindagi gujarniee hai aur tum meri chinta mat karo, mai to sab vasul kar luga with interest don't worry my sweety.

Geet turns all red. And stands to go to change and goes to cupboard and takes out her nightie, (wahi who pink wali Punjabi dress) Maan sees this and says, Geet do u need any help? Geet looks confuse and dosnt understands what he means and says, nahi maan thank u, apne to jewelary nikal din a vo to sabse bada kam kardia, ab to kuch bhi nahi hai

Maan's like "ohh god, iss ladki muje kitane dino se janti hai, phirbhi.. Lekin kaise bhi ho, iski yahi masumyat pe to me marata hu" and goes to look for his own dress. Mean while geet changes and freshen up and comes out looking breath taking to maan, maan also changes and comes to bed and looks at geet with all desires but controls his desire seeing her all wore out.

Geet says, Maan muje pata hai, apko iss din ka intazar tha,I am sorry that bcoz of me, app'.

But maan stops her and says, Geet maine itana itzar kiya to thodi dair aur sahi, usme kya hai, aur mere liya tumse jayda kuch bhi important nahi hai. Geet looks at him and thinks no matter since how long I have known him but he never fails to make fall in love with him more and more.

And then Maan takes geet in his arm and says, Geet officially, from today, ajj se sari raat tumse hogi aur subha tumse hogi. Jis din tumarha chehra nahi dekha vo din din nahi hoga mere liye geet looks at him and says Meri bhi Maan. And Maan says Letz go to sleep geet, kal se hamri zindagi badal jayegi,chalo sau jate hai. And softly kisses her and geet happyily responds him. And they both doses off to sleep.

Part 2

It was probably midnight; Maan-Geet was cuddling up comfortable. Geet 's head was resting on maan's chest and maan was holding geet by her waist, geet moves and little and turn her back to maan, maan also moves and hugs her from back.

Both are still sleeping. Suddenly geet feels maan's breath on her nack. She moves her head to see maan's face resting on her neck and he is sleeping peacefully.

She smiles and caresses his cheek.

Maan is sound sleep. Her eyes travels to his eyes, nose, his cheek and finally rests on his lips, she feels like to kiss him, but controls her urges, as he might wake up. She completely turns and comes to his embrace and put her both hands on her neck and admires him.

She remembers how they have spent their college days, she used to be a book warm and he, Maan was a college dude. He was a most popular guy in the college. And how they fall in love. She smiles at that thought.

She is recalling all their lovely moments, how he fall in love with her at first sight. Yes, it was a love at first sight for maan, but geet was too busy to look at any guy, she was scholar student.

She is remembering ever cute little lovely moments with him. And she doesn't even realize when she falls asleep.

In early morning, maan feels geet very close to him, he opens his eyes and see's geet almost hugging tightly and peacefully sleeping. He smiles and thinks of mischief and starts to kiss geet on her shoulder which is almost close to his face. She is till sleeping, he starts to give her wet kisses and even she doesn't response, and bites her,

she suddenly screams "ahhh.."

maan suddenly closes his eyes, and pretends to sleep,

geet understands his mischief and moves a little and

hits him lightly and says, "MAAN'"

and stills pretends so, she thinks of something and moves closer so her breath falls on his lips,

he thinks she is going to kiss him, but again thinks, no she never takes first steps, but still pretend and waits for her action.

She comes closer and brushes her lips with his.

She gets surprise and opens his eyes and

geet's like "caught you!!!! I knew u were awake!" "badmash''.. "Maan smiles seeing her smile widely.

He moves again a closer, there is not even an inch space btwn them.

Geet understands what is he thinking and closes her eyes and moves closer, which maan takes as her YES. And takes her lips in his.

And he moves on top of her and starts kisses her passionately and she also response to his kiss like there is no tomorrow.

He moves a little down and starts kissing her collar bone, shoulder, her neck and keeps giving her wet kisses here and there.

His hands travels to her back to unzip her kurti, right at that moment, they here a loud bell sound. (mandir ghanti) and they hear someone singing a morning bhajan.

Maan understands who is it and gets irritated. And geet chuckles looking at his plight.

She tries to move little and get off the bed, but maan holds her and asks her" bahot hasi aa rahi ha tumhe, ruko abhi dikhata hu" geet" maan plzzz muje jaldi taiya hoke niche jane dijiye, varna sab kya soche ge,ke nahi nahi dulhan kitani late ahh rahi hai.

Maan " mera naam keh dena, aue vaise bhi tumhe pata hai na,koikuch nahi kehega, tum sab ki favorite ho!"

Geet "maan,I know, lekin abhi sare mehman hai ghar me vokya soche ge???

Maan "whatever,hame kya unse?" and starts kissing her again, but she stops him and pleads him to leave her.

Maan doesn't want to leave her but seeing her making a cute baby faces leaves her.

Geet kisses him last time and goes toward bath room and starts to get ready.

Mean while maan again goes back to sleep. Geet comes out wearing a very beautiful Red net saree. And starts putting on her bangels and starts to put her sindoor and bindi but stops and looks back at maan but he is standing right back and picking up sindoor box and applying on her maag, and puts her bindi on.

She smiles widely and asks," apko yaad tha?"

Maan, "geet MSK apna vaada kabhi nahi bhlata!"

geets shakes her head and stands up and stands front of him tells him to go to sleep,

but he is like " jaldi kya hai geet, pehele muje meri energy dose medicine chahiye"

geet understands his what he mean and asks, "what are u talking about???"

maan is like ,"achha, abhi batata hu" and kisses her with full force and leaves her until they het out of breath.

And then he looks at her and asks, "smaja me ya ki aur batau" Geet who is blushing gets red and

say " nahi, abb ap jayiye and taiyar ho jayiye"

he asks "geet, can u give me shower?? w/ cute baby face!"

geet say, "NO, ur not a kid, now go"and pushes him to bath rm and turns and

self talks, "I wonder, how will I manage when a little maan will come?"

maan who is looking at her hears it and says, 'ohooo Geet,itni betabi hai jr ki, cholo abhi se taiya suru karate hai, I promise mai bada ho jauga jab tak vo ayega!"

geet s turns and looks at him and gives him fake angry face and Maan goes to bath room.

She smiles to herself and takes out maan's cloth and one last looks at mirror and goes down stairs, where every body are present and moving toward dinng table to get break fast.

Maan's Mom says, "bahot pyari lag rahi ho, beta!"

One of the bua sees her and says" oho nahi malkin aa gayi,bhai phool bichao koi inn ke liye! Kyu geet bahot jald ahh gayi tum,maine to socha tha ke ajj to lunch ke time pe tumare darshan hoge!" geet feels bad hearing that and has tears in her eyes. Maan's mom sees this and immideatly goes to rescue her,and says, " kya nandaji app bhi, bechari thak gayi hogi, pichare 1 week se kitani busy thi, marriage preparations and rasam me, akha lag gayi hogi!

Looking at geet,"geet beta koi baat nahi, tum chalo mai tume agali rasam batati hu" and takes her away.

Bua makes faces, and says"hum ne bhi shadi ki hai, sasural gaye hai , hamene to khabhi aisa nahi kiya!

But geet and maan's mom ignores her and goes to kichen. Maan's mom to geet , "bata tum bua ki baat ka bura mat mann na, vo to aisi hi hai! Im sorry behalf of her"

geet stops her and say,"maa ye app ky akeh rahi hai, I understands, she has full right on me that's y she said that na,it's okk, now tell what I have to do!!!

Maan's mom smiles and one again appricited maan for choosing geet as their bahu.

And says, "beta u have to make something sweet to make all these people's bitter mouth"

and both sas-bahu giggles. Maan Mom's goes out showing her all the utensils and stuff.

Geet decides to make "khir" since maan love it. and starts making it. Every body is waiting for it.

And maan comes down, he decides pretend to look all upset front of geet.

He comes and sits in middle sit which is for head person. usually , on the other side, his dad sits and other maan.

Maan asks everybody, "good morning, hows everybody?" everyone smiles and says "Goodmorning"

mean while geet comes and serves every body khir and break fast and maan is trying to steal glances from her to show her that he is angry/upset,but she is not even looking at her, then he realizes that she is sad.

He thinks, "subha to think thi,isee kya hua, abhi preganant bhi nahi hue ki mood swing ho and slightly smiles."

And then he understands that something must have happened, he decides to ask her later.

Finally geet comes tohimand serves him khir w/smile.

He looks at her and smiles and asks her to have it for herself and sit by him, she shooks her head for No and looks at everybody, so he can understand,

just by then bua intervenes their little eye conversation and says , "tik hi hai, kuch khass nahi hai,khir" and maangeet comes out of their eye talking looks up.

Maan's dad says, " nahi koki( maan's bua) khir to bahot acchibanni hai.to geet, "bte geet apne to bilkil apki saas ki tarah khir banae hai and looks for money to give her as sagun.

And maan'smom smiles and says, "kyoki vo meri bahu nahi beti hai, kyuo geet beta!" geet smiles and has tears inher eyes and immidiatley wipes it, b4 maan notices it,but he does see it. Maan'sdad gives her shagun, follow by maan'smom and dadi, " who blesses her and gives her their khandani gift.

This little session is going on,and while this blessing session is going on,maan sees bua making faces and understands what might have happen and feels like to kick her out of the house but hold back himself tofind out whole truth.

And looks determine.

Maan Father-Mother: Anurag and prerna khurana

Bua: Kamolika



INDEX

Part 1 on pg 1

Part 2 on pg 1

Part 3 on pg 1

Part 4 on pg 1

Part 5 on pg 3

Part 6 on pg 5

Epilogue on pg 5



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Part 3

Maan sees the love geet is getting from his family, (except from bua and her family). He smiles and Geet looks at him and both smiles at each other. geet leaves for kitchen to clear up the dishes and maan looks for excuses to go near her. While everybody was moving to living rm, maan is sneaking to kitchen. And bua notices that maan is not coming with them.

Bua- maan bte tum kaha ja rahe ho, chalo na living rm me bedte hai!

Maan- umm'.bua me'.umm ap logo ko join karata hu, me pani pi k ata hu

And b4 bua can say anything he quicky leaves from there, prerna (maan mother) understands and smiles

In the kitchen:

Geet looks a little bit happy after prerena(maan's mother) and anurag (maan's father) and dadi's love.

She is taking out the left over khir in a bowl and smiling. Maan is standing on the door and looking at her.

she self talks, "maan ne to kuch ka kaha bhi nahi k unko khir achhi lagi ke nahi, unko shayad acchi nahi lagi" but maan comes there from behind

and

says, "kya baat kar rahi ho geet, muje to geet itni achi lagi k'.

geet says, "k'?

maan moving toward her and geet getting drawn into maan

Maan, " k muje'..

Geet. "k apko'..

Maan, "k muje tere'.

Geet, " k apko mere'''.

Maan, " hoth chune ka maan kar raha hai!"

Geet takes a sec to take in their little talk

And she realizes and blues really hard and says

Geet, "kya??? Maann'. normally log aise mouke par hath chute hai, naki ho'. But stops and looks down blushing hard. Maan smiles and puts his hand under her chin and makes her look up in his eyes

Maan, "abb me kya karu, muje hoth chuk maza ata hai, lekin ha,sifr meri bivi k huh!" and geet smiles shyly so maan takes that as yes and moves forward , he was almost there just at that time,

Anni (Maan's sister) came and closes her eyes and says, "maine kuch nahi dekha bhai"

They look surprised and sees who is it

Maan slowly mumurs geet hears but anni cant hear is "GR8 isi ki kami thi, subah se yeh log mere romance ka band baja rahe hai,lagata hai muje honey moon ka jalda hi intezam karana padega!"

Which gain makes geet to blush'and slightly hits him on his arm

Geet quickly moves away from maan and tells to annie, "are anni, avo na, vo maan to aise hi kuch dudne aye the (to find something).

Annie, " kya bhabhi, KM ki hava o ko bhi pata hai ki MSK kabhi bhi kichean me nahi ata, aur ajj unka pura ghar chodke kichean me hi kuch khogaya!!!strange na'''.!

Maan geet understands what she means and maan looks at her with stern face and anni looks scared then maan smiles and annie is relieved.

Just then Prerena calls them and they all move toward living rm and maan is trying to hold geet's hand but she doesn't let him, and maan pretend to get angry,but geet softly kisses him on his cheek and moves a little ahead, and Maan smiles. .

In afternoon:

Geet enters in their bedroom and immediately was brought in maan's embrace, geet gets surprise and maan slowly bolts the door.

Maan, "kitani der lagadi geet!me tumhara kab se intezar kar raha hu."

Geet. "sorry janu, vo niche der ho gayi, vo bua nikal ne hi nahi de rahi thi"

Maan gets furious and says, "ye bua ki to me'.."

But geet say, " Maann'' jane dejiye na,ab me aa gayi hu na, bolo kya kehna chahte the app?"

Maan smiles naughtily and says, "kehena nahi karana chahata tha." And hugs her passionatley

Geet, "kya?" (meri buddu geet)

Maan, "ye'.."

And starts kissing her passionately, and blocks her on wall and starts giving her bites on her shoulder and neck!

Geet is loosing her self but controls and pushes him and says, "Maan, ye kya kara rahe hai aap?"

Maan, "apni bivi ki pyarr'." And starts moving toward her again

But geet, "Maan abhi nahi, dekhiye aise din me'" not able to finish and starts shying

Maan understands but teases her, " din me kya?, infact mere liye to accha hai, me tumhe acchi tarah dek''" but geet puts her hand on his mouth.

And says, "Maan aap bhi na!"

Maan, "Me bhi na kya?, ha...! bahot sexy aur irresistible hu na, I know, MSK ka charm hi kuch aisa hai.tum to chanti ho na, college me kitani ladkia muj pe marati thi, mere ek touch k liye, lekin ye kambkat dil tumpe aa gaya"

Now geet faking upset and say, "accha, tochale jate na unke piche, maine thodi apko mere piche piche ane ko bola tha" and moves away

Maan self thought, "aree yaar ye to upset ho gayi, manana padega"

And goes after her to manofy her

And says, "oo meri jaan to bura maan gayi, sorry sweet heart, me to aise majak kar raha tha,

tumhe to pata hai agar, tum na hoti to iss sine me jaan na hoti, aur iss duniya me maan na hota"

Geet suddenly stops him and hits him lightly on his chest "MAAN, ye app'"

And starts crying

Maan, "aree geet, tum kyu ro rahi ho, sorry baba, I am sorry janu, see i am also doing this and starts push-ups"

But geets turns away and maan counts but soon geet turns and hugs him and cries

Maan sees this and says, "sorry na sweet heart, aaj se kabhi ais nahi kahuga, tumhari kasam" and geet smiles and he returns to his mischief and starts kissing and falls on bed

and geet surrenders herself, just when maan was about to open her blouse hook at back, anni knock the door and says, "bhabhi'. Bhabhi bua apko bua rahi hai" and maan-geet comes out of their act, and geets blushes

Maan gets frustratd and says, "ye bua ki to kal hi tickets katavani padegi patiyala ki, nahi to ye MSK ko bahot bhari padne vali hai" while geet is escaping maan says, "geet abhi to tum bachi gayi, lekin ajj rat ko me tuhe nahi choduga"

and also moves toward door, since geet went to bath room to set up her saree, and after that they went down stairs!

In the evening:

It's Mannet's reception.

Lots of people have come, Maan's and geet's college friends, their family frends and relatives. Everybody is coming one by one on the stage and congratulate them. After that they have a couple dance and then everybody is busy in chatting, and maan sees his chance and keep giving geet pecks on her cheek and sometimes on lipes, but being careful that nobody sees them, becoz he doesn't want to make geet embarrass.

At the end when they everybody was about to retire to their rm maan was getting excited to go to rmbut dadi stops them, but

maan says, "dadi abhi nahi bahot nind aa rahi" and pretend to yawn

but dadi understands and says, "bete, muje pata app natak kar rahe hai, lekin hum bhi appki dadi hai, ye to app k fayade ki baat hai, lekin agar app nahi sunna chaht to'.."

but maan immidealy comes and says, "kya dadi, apitana keh rahi hai to batae yeh"

dadi smirks and gives him a envelop. Maan looks disappointed and says "dadi''"

but dadi cuts him and says, "ander kya ye to dekhi ye"

maan disinterstly looks in it and after he reads a papers and sees tickets he smiles widely and hugs dadi immideatly and says "Dadi, U R JUST GR88888"

and geets thinks "iss me aisa kya hai jo ye itna kush ho gaye"and goes in look in the paper and reads and understands and looks down shying

dadi hugs both maan and geet and says "Yes, it's ur honeymoon tickets and u guys are leaving now, anni and Vicky ne apke kapade sab pack diye hai and vi sab apke gadi me pahoch gaya hai app sirf fresh hoke jayi varna.

Maan and geets both smiles and does what dadi says them to do and wishes her good night and geet takes blessing from her. and both goes to their RM to get ready to leave. Maan is on the 7th heaven and drags geet to rm and asks her to hurry up. Maan is Very much excited and thinking about his naughty thoughts.


Part Four


The whole family comes out to bid them good buy.

Dadi hugs maaneet, and geet bends to take blessing, but dadi stops her and says, "jiti raho beta, and All the best!"and geet shyes.

Then they move towards mom and dad, and they both hug them. Prerena touches geets cheek and "enjoy beta and maan, be good, meri beti ko jyada tang mat karana" and smiles mischifly looking at geet and winks

Dad also hug them both and says, "geet agar tumhe ye jya pareshan kare to muje ek phone kar dena, dekha phir me kya haal karata hu iska" and maan says , "kya' dad app bhi?" and everybody laughs

Anni and Vicky hugs them and says, "ALL THE BEST, bhaiya and bhabhi"

Maan hits both of them on their head. And finally they move toward bua.

Bua makes faces and geet looks a little scared of her and bends to take blessing from her.

Maan thinks, "it's a time"

And says to geet, " geet , acchi tarah se bua ka ashirvad le lo, kyoki jab tak hum vapas ayege, bua to jaa chuki hogi unke ghar, kyuo, bua?" bua looks surprised and says, "aree nahi nahi beta app log'"

But maan cuts her in middle and says, "nahi bua we understand u also need to go ur home, we understand don't worry"

And to Vicky "Vicky, Mene tumhe tickets di hai bua ki, bua ko achhi tarah airport pe chod ken a huh"

And before bua can say anything, they go to their car.

Everybody understands about maan's plan and smiles. Nobody likes bua but bears w/her as she only daughter of khrurana.

And everybody says, "BYEEE''''''.."

And they both sits in the car, and car leaves toward airport.

And maan takes geet in his embrace and holds her hand and says, " R U Ready baby?"

Geet smiles and looks down blushing indicating as YES

They finish all there required procedures and boards their flight

There Honeymoon place: Caribbean


And as they are going destination, geet rests her head on maan shoulder, as time passes maan also doses off and put his head on geet.

They arrive at their hotel.

Geet is looking through the their honey suite

There rm is like this (rest u can imagine as u like)




While geet is discovering her room, maan is admiring looking at geet

And while geet is looking out of the window to see the view, maan comes and hugs her from back

Geet smiles and maan asks, "baby, kaisa laga apna honeymoon suits?"

Geet turns and says happily, "bahot accha, I love ittt"

And both hugs each other.

Maan says,"so sweetheart r u ready for tonight?"

Geet blushes and says, "umm''.. nahi I am very tired!"

So Maan says, "koi baat nahi, uska bhi solution hai mere paas, pehele tum fresh ho jao, hum kuch kha lete hai,baat ki baat baad me dekhe ge" and geet nods, and looks for their bag for fresh cloths, but gets shock to see her cloths, and maan's and blushes and maan also turns to see what cloth geet is taking but he also gets surprise.

Maan see the clothes and says, "aree wahhh''. Maan na padega mere bhai-beheno ko kya packing ki hai" and geet hits him lightly "MAANNN'''" and hides her face in her palm.

And maan smiles and continues to tease her, "but geet hame to in kapdo ki to zarurat hi nahi padegi''." And geet looks at him confused and maan continues "kyuo ki hum sara din bed me hi to rahege''.." and geet again blushes and hits him and says, "aahhh geet, dheere se'''"

Geet asks, "itni zor se lagi?... Aur ye kya apko itne me hi laga gayi?" hahaha and laughs

Maan says, "geet mera hota to koi baat nahi,me to tumhare liye keh raha tha"

Geet look at him confused so maan continues, "kyoki mere dil me to tum rehti ho na, tumhe chot lag gayi to me ye bardast nahi kar shakata na!"

Hearing this geet looks at him lovingly and side hugs him

(BTW let me tell u what cloths did anni peck for geet, it's all short and too much reveling cloths and lingeries. And for maan all shorts and t-shirts)

Now geet comes back to the topic, Clothes!!!

And says, "abb me kya pehnugi?"

Maan says, "geet, it's okk na'.. it'not that bad, aur vise bhi tum shadi se pehele college me to pehen ti thi na to abb kya??, yaha pe dadi aur koi elders bhi nahi hai to kya and (huskily) muje bhi tumhe inn kapdo me dekhana hai" plz geet

Geet smiles and nodes and leaves for bathroom to fresh up

Maan orders dinner and they both eat and after they are done, maan is about to stand up, but geet stops him and again makes him sit and moves closer to him and says, "I know maan, mene apko kaha tha ke me tired hu, but I am ready, me to apko aise hi '''."

But maan stops her and says, "geet I know lekin tum sach me tired lag rahi ho, ajj hum sojate hai, baki kal se me tumhe aram nahi karne dunga"

And geet smiles and kisses him

follow by a hug

and says, "I love you maan"

And maan says, "I love you too shona"

And picks her up and put her on bed and takes her in his arm and both doses off in little while.

 

Next morning:

(plz image this couple as Maaneet)

Edited by nilu710 - 14 years ago
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Hello Guys, This is my first attempt to write something.
i hope you guys like it.
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fabolous ss

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awesome
love it
uff hate bua
maaneet scenes are cute
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Do continue soon
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nice story...please pm me on the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
awesum ss dear
amazing
superb
too romantic
fantastic
i love all maaneet scenes
do cont. soon
plz do pm me
wen u upd

Love
Deepa


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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
love your ss pls ADD me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
nice updates
plzz add me to the pm list
love
Sana

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