Maaneet OS-Destiny's Game Part 3 On Pg 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Sabz-

Twinieee 🤗

Kaun sa Twiniee ke liye dedicate kiya hai yeh jhakkas update? I hope, it's me only 🤣 ILY bahut saara for such a wonderful update ❤️
I just could not help but let my tears come out while reading this update 😭 I was relieved to know that Geet was alive but then when the kid told his dad that Geet was no longer...OMG, my heart moved a bit away 😆
So emotional and touchy part yet awesome !! I throughly enjoyed reading it =) So glad that Maneet are together now 😍 I am sure loads of romantic scenes are on the way ☺️😉

This might be my last comment in your OS baby as you know that I will be inactive soon. But, I will be thinking of you and your rocking OS =) You are the best ⭐️ Muah 🤗


Twinieee🤗Off course it was for you:) You are my only Twiny😳

ILY too sweety:)

Thanks for the lamba reply! I am overwhelmed:) Bahut saara dhanyvaad aapka is ke liye:)😃

I just didnt have the heart to kill Geet! I am planning a romantic sequence; hope it comes to be good😳

Awwieee nahiii😭😭 Last comment on my OS..How dare you do that with me...I am dead***

I will be missing you and god bless you; I have to yet reply to your pm...I will do that! Pakka!

Love
Mayuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
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Edited by shonuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Mayu🤗🤗
sowiee 4 late🤗...u knw na unable 2 read bcz of ma xams...2day only i checkd my pms...newysss as always superb update ..luvd it...
aww luv d maaneet moments...
nd luv d family reunion...
Edited by aiswaryaaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
awesome, beautiful , gorgeous updates.
loved them.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
i am happy tht u turned this to a happy story...

Its lovely this way


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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
awesomeee!!!!
i am soo happy to see maan and geet together!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Hey guys!!! It's me, Mayuuu, Back with an Update very soon!

First of all, I thank you all for liking and appreciating my work so much. Thanks a lot. It couldn't have been possible without your support guys!!!

Thank you for so patiently waiting for the update:)

Love You All🤗

Love
Mayuuu

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Holaaa😳

Hope you all are fine! I dedicate this part to Dia!🤗
ILY❤️
Part 3
Geet goes to the tent where Maan had invited her. She chose to wear a nice embroidered white colored sari. As she was taking every single step towards the tent she was just remembering all the passionate moments she spent with him. She had a huge smile across her face. She sees that the tent is surrounded by a beautiful garden; she could actually picture herself and Maan spending time on that huge swing which was there. She slowly enters the tent and is amazed to see how magnificently Maan had set up the tent. The candles were lit all over the place. There was a huge bed in the middle of the tent. It was covered with a white bed sheet. The bed was wonderfully decorated. It was adorned by the words "I Love you". Geet was just in awe of what she was seeing. There was a sweet card kept for her along with a letter; a rose was kept next to the letter.
Dear my loveliest wife,
I know I might reach late there. Please forgive me. I am so sorry for the delay. Actually I was busy setting up stuff that I didn't know how time passed. I was just thinking about you and shall always do so. I promise.
I have written all my feelings in this small poem I wish to dedicate to you my Jaan!!!
When I was alone, I miss you the most.
When I stay with others, I know the value of you.
When you are with me, I would like to miss this whole world.
Your loving husband Dusht Danav!
The letter did make her cry; tears of happiness. She didn't want to stop them from flowing. She just tapped her head and was just lucky to have been married to this idiot whom she loves more than anyone else
She is just amazed to how simply Maan has penned down his feelings. She hears the footsteps. Her heart knew her Maan was here!
She ran straight into his arms; her heaven. The note still tightly clasped in her hand. She parts and kisses him passionately.
He takes her to the bed and makes her sit down. She lay in his lap and he was caressing her hair. His touch was arousing her; but she wanted to confess to him again that what he meant to me. I am lucky to have found you!
He very carefully bends down and kisses her forehead. When he is about to lift his head she pulls him by his shirt and presses her lips. He was too amazed but responds back. All she could see in those big brown deep eyes was only and only love filled for her. She tightly hugs him and sits next to him; his arm sliding behind her back. He gets up and sits facing her. Geet takes his hands in hers and entwines her fingers. She squeezes it gently and her eyes meet his. All she could see was only and only love for her. As she is about to part her lips and say anything Maan pulls her for another passionate kiss. She is still in his embrace with his hands in hers and her head on his lap.

Maan I am blessed. Destiny had bestowed so much of happiness when I married you. I just sometimes can't figure out the exact words to tell you how much I love you. But one thing is certain that you are my universe; my centre of attraction. Without whom I cannot live now. Can't think of a day without seeing your face when I wake up or without hearing to your rants of I love you. The day seems empty. He was listening to all this with equal amazement and adoration. This marriage is the only bond that gave me strength to face all odds and be with you. She was opening up to him, revealing everything to him as their trust that had settled in between them. She blindly trusted him. She takes a pause; stares at his charming yet innocent face and says Maan after what life threw at me I thought I was never meant to enjoy happiness of life and hence preferred death over life with you. I know I was doing injustice with you; even after you promised me that we both shall take steady steps to build our relation. I know that was a drastic step of mine which left you numbed; totally emotionless.
He didn't utter a word; and kept staring at her. He got up and went behind her and sat down. He slowly removes her hair lying on her neck; his arms encircling her waist line. He kisses her nape and moves upward to the jaws. Just when he is about to press his lips she withdraws. She slowly gets and kneels down on the floor.
Geet: "Maan Singh Khurana kya aap hamesha mere saath rahenge? Kya aap mera zindagi bhar saath denge? Maan aapke bina aapki Geet adhoori hai.
"You complete me in every sense. I don't know a life without you".
Maan was listening to all this with tears in his eyes. He makes her get up and takes her in his arms. He was just so ecstatic. She lifts her head and asks him-
Geet: "Maan Singh Khurana; bolo kya aap mera saath denge? Kya aap mujhse dobara shaadi karenge?
Maan didn't know how to express his happiness. He pulled her in a tight hug and she reciprocated. He could not stop a few drops of tears that filled his eyes. Even though they were tears of happiness, he did not want to alarm her. So, he wiped them off before breaking the hug and looking at her adoringly.
Maan: "Geet main tumse shaadi karoonga; aur meri ek shart hai. Agar use kabool karogi to main shaadi ke baare main sochunga." He teased her. Gosh how much can I love my Mishty!
He left her there and opened the slit of the tent. He saw that it was raining! An idea struck him! He looked at her; and tried to ignore her; which was impossible. But he had to get her near him. He wanted to have a rain dance with his wife! He just stood there; watching the rains lash on the ground. She came and almost pulled him by his shirt and asked;
Geet: "To bataiye Maan Singh Khurana kya shart hai aapki?" she played along!
Maan: "Kuch zyaada papad belne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Bas ek baar mere saath dance karlo. Phir main abhi aur isi waqt tumse dobara shaadi karoonga. Aur yeh vaada hai; tumhare Maan ka!"
Oh she said and turned to walk inside; trying to soak in his cheeky lines. This was the time I was waiting for. She stared at him; only drinking his presence to her content. It had been 10 months she was away from him. She wanted him as much as he wanted her.

She turned again. Maan looked outside and sensed her coming. He went outside, enjoying the rain. He was soaked within minutes. Geet was surprised to see maan enjoying the rain.

Maan: "Geet bahar aa jao; bahut mast mausam hai. Tumhe bahut maaza aayega!"
Geet: "Maan aap andar chaliye. Aapko sardi ho jaayegi. Phir mere paas mat aana; geet dava dena; sar dard kar raha hai; badan dukh raha hai; aur upar se bukhar bhi hai. Main aapki koi seva nahi karne waali! Samjhe aap?" She said as taking a step backwards!

Maan was fast enough for her and he caught her hand and pulled her towards him. She bumped into his chest and was also soaked in a few seconds. She stood back and glared at him.

Geet: "Maan aap bhi na; dekhiye main ab geeli ho gayi hoon. Hamesha aap aisa kyun karte hain?"

Maan: "Dekho na; mausam bhi acha hai, mood bhi acha hai; aur larka bhi acha hai."

Geet glares at him for a second then laughs out. Maan gives him her hand for a dance.

Geet: "Dance? Abhi?"

He nods again.

Geet: "Aap saach main pagal ho."
Maan: "Kya karoon geet; tumhare pyaar ne mera kya haal bana daala hai. Dekho; ab tum bhi mujhe paagal kehne lagi!" he said with a huge smile across his lips!
Geet: "Maan bate banana to koi aapse sikhe. Inhi baatin main phas kar maine aapse shaadi ki. Bahut badi galti kardi. Us waqt kya pata tha ki pati paagal niklega?" She said as she tried to suppress her laughter!
Saying this she slides her hand in his.

Maan smiles slightly and then puts a hand on her waist. They slowly begin to move together. Then Maan twirls her around and she laughs. She puts her arms around his neck and they come really close. Their foreheads slightly collide and they keep it that way, moving together very slowly, the rain spattering around them. Maan slowly puts up a hand to Geet's loose locks and pushes all of them on one side, leaving her neck bare. Geet closes her eyes at his touch; as he slowly bends down to kiss her shoulder and neck. She shudders with the close contact that she had experienced after a long time. They hadn't been this close since she had left home.

Maan slowly kisses the whole length of her neck, and then kisses her forehead and her cheeks. They were in a close embrace by now, and had stopped moving. Geet opened her eyes to see Maan looking down at her with all the love in the world stored in his eyes. She blushed, then slowly came forward and kissed the side of his neck. Maan smiled. This woman could do wonders for him. He cups her face with his two hands, bends down and kisses her on her lips. She responds with full passion, and soon they are embraced in a very passionate kiss. They come up for air, and Maan looks down at her swollen lips. Then in the spur of the moment, he picked her up and went inside their tent. Very carefully, he landed her on the bed and settled down upon her. As Maan comes closer, Geet slightly moves over and switched off the light. Even in the darkness his eyes caught hers. She asked him one last question before she could be with him all night!
Geet: "To boliya Maan kya aap mujhse shaadi karenge?"
He just smiled and caught her in a deep kiss! All she could do now was melt in his arms and submit to the man she loves!
The End!
So how was it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the Maaneet fans!
Positive criticism is always welcome!
Please press the like button!😳
Love And Luck Always!
Mayuuu
Edited by -Mayu- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Awesome
realli enjoyed the OS
thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
da perfect ending
plz do a epilogue
cant wait
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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