Maaneet OS-Destiny's Game Part 3 On Pg 14

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

wowww

u made geet aliveee

thank uuu

it wasa wonderfulpart

plzzz update a eilogues

full of maneet romance and a their family time

update soonnn

thanku for p.m.

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@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Read both updates in one go and loved it! After first part was so sad about Geet's death but reading the second part calmed me down.

The plot of your OS is very nice and I like how you have described both Maan and Geet's feelings. Please do continue soon. Want to read more.

Sorry for my very late reply but I kept my promise of reading your OS as soon as I got time.

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Amazing... wow geet survived... luved the reunion... cant wait for the next one... continue soon

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

hey nice update dear...
finally maaneet r reunited 😛...this part was sooo sweet...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

lovely OS...

i was so sad after reading the first part...

but thank god..geet survived n the whole family is now together...

loved the 2nd part...

do continue soon...

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red135b

@red135b

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

please pm me on your next part thanks

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tanya94

@tanya94

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Waaoo..nice update .geet ko zinda rakhne ke liye thankuji..u know i read ur entire update on my baba adam wala phone..which proves dat u have made it very interesting..trust me it was very tough to read on my cel but i cudnt wait.n ya pls continue..itne action ke baad thoda romance to banta hai humare aur maneet ke liye..thanxs for d pm.

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Mayu 🤗...awwwesome update 👍🏼...Maan finally met his children...so glad Geet survived ...thank u so much for the Maaneet reunion... happy Dadi is back from coma...waiting for the last update...plz continue ...TC 😊