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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

awesome os...

please continue it...please...

it is superb...loved it...

thanks for pm...

please continue...

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

very very nice OS
loved every bit of it.
Geet was too good.
Her part innocent part intelligent talk her name calling
and whatever she did was out of the world.
Her meditation on the platform and resolution not to utter profanities were super good.
She is a perfect combo of everything.
No wonder the MSK fell flat for her.
Maan was also great.
The way he protected Geet right from the beginning without even a trace of doubt and got her story out was brilliant.
He fell for her and made her fall for him.
Wonderful OS and thanks for the PM.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

AMAZING! In the middle of the third part, I finally figured out that Maan was the guy. lol That was amazing! It made my night. Now I'm off the dream[sleep] lol Thank you so much for this beautiful OS. I thoroghly enjoyed it!

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rohini

@Rohini20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

God DAMN... u killed me with ur OS...me dead officially...🤢..i knew it was maan...but the last parts of their proximity...really i was flushed...☺️..Luved the os..best one...!!

rohini

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

This was just so Awww...

I guess the moment he said that no one else had rights on her- That cat was out of the bag...but it was still so much fun reading right through the end...and though you say it was looong...I still didnt want it to get over...Sigh!

Loved it!

btw I hope you do post a part 2- His side of the story...would be lovely to revisit their meeting and drive again- from his Point of view...how did he handle and what did he think of chatterbox Geet!!

btw btw Jammu Railway station has no place to walk around not if you dont want to be run over by a minibus..but the ATM location was bang on..LOL!

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

loved it...😛

so there is a his story too😉

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Awww i loved this 😆

It was extremely Cute 😆...it happens quite alot of time when you tell a stranger your secrets thinking is mai kya jaa tahi you are not going to meet him agin 😆 and then ta-da you meet him/her again 🤣

happened alot of time with me so i can understand Geet's situation 😆

Enjoyed reading it...and this one deserves a sequel a HUGE ONE 😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Hey dear...thanks 4 da amazing, superb n mindblowing OS! Loved the update! U rock! Manmeet monets were magical n beuatiful! Update soon n thanks 4 da pm. Wonderfully written