~OS Corner~ :) - Page 10

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Me first😆

I love this OS a lot.. and i love u a lot

The starting.. the urgency of the situation yet the antics of Geet, made me love her instantly..

First she got down watching a kid, and then her thought drifted to Pani puri..meri jaisi hain..she'll be distracted so soon😆

And then she got on the tracks to help the puppy😳

awww...

And then she froze?

okay i dont blame her..

it was so realistic.. and i would have done the same if i were in her place.. di two yrs back when me n mom took driving lessons and after our ten day classes were over . . . we went for practice on our car and a truck came from front and she froze . . . don't remind me how i managed to turn the steering and even the truck driver turned . . . that was the last time mamma drove😆

and then came the dashing entry 😃

kya entry tha!!!

usse bhi acha i loved his first lines..😆

Abhi se rule kar raha hain usse?😆bechara didn't know what is in store for him😆

challo karo karo kyunki in future, sab kuch uski haathon mein hoga na😆 bingo

And then their unlimited fighting...her misinterpretations, and the very guy, whom she called pervert, helping her..was so beautifully written..

not to mention the scenes i between..

like her embarrassing sessions..

talk about embarrassing moments, i can write a book over them😆had any today i mean aapke liye toh even dreams are ____ 😉

But well i never sat on a guy! thank god! i sat on a girl n that was embarrassing😭 hell the teached was staring at me wide eyed n it was like i though she'll shift as i asked her to, but she got confused n i sat on her accidentally poor us . . . But well my mumma was a teacher in the same school i studied.. okay went random again..sangath ka asar..i am influential😉

And he taking her and locking her in ATM booth..where do u get these evil ideas from?😆of course my mind . . . its twisted u see😆

And then u included something i haven't expected.. that dupatta scenei knew u would be grinning reading it . . .😆

Didn't we had some discussion over similar lines? did and my answer is that yes..it's true we wear t-shirts in which we don't cover ourselves but we' be cool with it coz we know there is no extra wear! it's like this.. if there is nothing at all, we dont have a problem but there is something and if we are not wearing it, it'll look awkward..i prefer high neck suits no chunni required😉

we do wear kurtas and jeans but we cant wear a chudidar without a chunni..

same concept..

and it's true that when it's for others, we do tell a lotta things but when it comes to us, we do the same silly mistake.tell me about it di . . . i have done loads . . . oK lets not get there😆

When we see some gundas cheding aheroine in movies, our blood will boil and we start accusing that she shud attack them instead of waiting for hero but we dont put ourselves in that situation and don't see what it feels like..so i loved the narration at that particular point.. bang on😆

But my favorite of all is definitely their conversation in car.

OMG OMG i loved their interaction..

the way he was asking her questions...and she sharing everything with him was so cute..

i toh loved it to the core..

And then comes her ways of making the brother-in-law of Meera say no to the alliance..😆

we think alike Meenu..😆we are sisters after all😉

And the end of their meeting could it be anymore beautiful?

Geet what if that guy were like me"

"Then he definitely stands a chance . . . Huge one"

i was doing this😃

And then comes Meera's entry..

that was real cute..

well i too wonder why pregnency should make women to be emotionally on edge.

I remember once i was pulling my aunt's leg and she burst into tears and i was like😲 aww . . . i can imagine ur expressions😆

anyways..then..comes the second entry and zor ka jhatka to Geet😆

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

the last intimate moments of theirs were cute..

And the ending..

"This marks the beginning of my story."

BEAUTIFUL!!

All and all one of My favorite OS !!

Originally posted by: ninand

absolutely loved it.. enjoyed another one of your crazy Geets😆.. very well written😳

Originally posted by: wifey

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a big chumma for u lol and bravo 👏

*Huga and kisses* glad u liked it

Originally posted by: t_areeb

that was really nice, her ideas for irritating that one person and yet falling for him

Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX

wow that was incredible! Amazing how fate was able to bring Maaneet together like that. It was a beautiful OS!😳

Thanks . . . glad u liked it . . .

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Meant we are getting his side of stry also na Plzplz plz plz

Cuming to OS

Jus loved it

The way u showed their meet

Geet's bak bak

Maan getting angry

His one liners

His telling all thgs of how he saw her hiding

She not taking seriously than shying haaye

It was jus fab

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

love it.

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

maar hi daala...with this OS...
it was very beautiful ...loved it...i am getting lot of surprises post my exams...
i just hope my exams come often...so that i get to read such great stuff more😆

thank u sweetie😃

reva

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Awww that was so cute! Poor chatterbox Geet!😆

Originally posted by: ananya95

omg geet must hv felt so embarrassed
maan-pervert ha ha & d tricks of geet were just hilarious
lovely
loved each & every bit
thnx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: Ramhari

very very nice OS
loved every bit of it.
Geet was too good.
Her part innocent part intelligent talk her name calling
and whatever she did was out of the world.
Her meditation on the platform and resolution not to utter profanities were super good.
She is a perfect combo of everything.
No wonder the MSK fell flat for her.
Maan was also great.
The way he protected Geet right from the beginning without even a trace of doubt and got her story out was brilliant.
He fell for her and made her fall for him.
Wonderful OS and thanks for the PM.