Maneet SS:**Ajnabee**:Epilogue 49! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooow Amazing loved it plz plzz do continue soon
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hey amna its lovely
very gripping
do continue n update soon
loved it
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Part 1:

He saw her pulling the pallu towards her but it wouldn't budge, it was like the wind played a game with her.

He unknowingly walked so close almost touching her back.

She gasped, and froze.

He pulled the pallu down now walking around her wrapping it across her shoulders.

She had her eyes down then just when his fingers touched her shoulder she lifted her gaze.

He saw a captivating pair of the most beautiful eyes he had ever seen.

"How can one's eyes be so attracting?" he thought.

However, he was unable to see her face because her silky brown hair blew past it making only her eyes visible.

She too stared into his honey coloured eyes, not being able to move. His touch sent waves through her entire flesh.

With that she turned around her hair slapping across his face.

His eyes closed; when they opened the girl had gone.

"Who was that? Strange huh?" he thought, but shrugged it off.

She walked into the house and sat beside the bride.

"Itni der?" Mehek asked

"Arre yaar, chod na'waise bhi tune to ab is ghar se chalay jaana hai. Ab mummy papa mujh par zaida dehaan dain gay!" she said teasingly but heavy-heartedly.

The two sisters hugged.

"Arre-yaar Maan tu ab aa raha hai? Sun'lardki waalon ne jootay chupa diye hain'" whispered Ajay into his ear.

"Aur main ek lardki ko upar lekar jaatay huwe abhi dekha" said another friend.

"Tum log na bilkul kisi kaam ke nahi ho, main jaa ke dekhta hoon" he said while sneaking up the stairs.

As he entered a room he saw the same net sari, magenta with heavy bead work on top.

He walked close.

"Kaun hai?" he said startling the girl.

She turned around and bumped into him both falling on the bed. He was on top of her.

Her hair covered her face again. He smirked, laughing inside.

"Yeh jo koi bhi hai, MSK pata laga kar chode ga"

Her breathing stopped but her heart pounded.

Suddenly, she gasped when she felt her hair slithering across her face. She opened her eyes to meet not only the same pairs she saw before, but this time she observed a solid jaw-line, a sharp nose, and perfect M shaped lips.

"WOW" her mind screamed.

He discovered glowing beauty behind those strands. Her big twinkling eyes, her petite nose, her glossy sheer lips. He lay on top of her frozen. For the first time MSK who never paid attention to girls, was truly speechless. He who attracted many, but none actually attracted him except-

His body was crushing hers and she felt her body temperature rise.

She tried pushing him off of her, but he was too heavy for such a delicate frame.

Realizing her struggle and smirking he got off.

She gave him a glare then dashed down the stairs, while fixing her hair, and clothes.

He ran a hand across his head, blushing?

"Wow Maan this is too much I don't even know her and already- relax, take a deep breath, find the shoes-that are now somewhere here, and go downstairs" he instructed himself.

As he came down the stair case waving the shoes the guys from the groom's side cheered.

He scanned through the room to again find those pair of eyes that were now bursting fireworks.

"Damn! Such a small thing and such a strong temper" he thought while flashing one of his charming smiles.

He handed the shoes to Rohit.

"Yeh lo mere dost, ab pehen lo" he said.

"Jij I'm not moving an inch and letting Di move unless you answer my question!" she said her hands on her hips, demandingly.

"Achaa saali sahiba hum hare, yes main har saal Mehek ko India le kar aaunga" he said smiling.

She hugged her sister.

"Geet, chal ab jaane dete hain, dekha nahi kitna betaab ho rahe hain jijuuuu" said Roshni, one of her friends.

"Geet" he said it to himself.

The car dashed out of the Handa Mansion leaving the bride's side teary.

He watched her silently wipe a tear away.

She turned around to see him leaning on a tree looking at her.

She had enough.

"Aakhir yeh hai kaun" she said as she walked right to him.

"Excuse-me magar why the h*** are you staring at me constantly? wahaan bhi tum mera peecha kar rahe the aur ab bhi" she said sternly.

He smiled then said'

"Were you not looking at me?"

She fell silent.

"Tum mujhse sawaal pooch rahe ho jab maine tumse pehlay poocha" she said running her hands through her silky hair and resting her fingers on her waist.

He smirked this time.

"Tum jaisay lardkon ko main acche se jaanti hoon, pehle peecha karte ho, phir pareshaan karte ho! Magar main waisi lardki nahi hoon!" she said widening her eyes.

"Pardon me magar main waisa lardka nahi hoon aur na hi mujhe shauk hai aap jaisi lardkiyon ke peeche aane ka!" he said amused.

They were interrupted.

"Geet, idhar aao bete!" said one of the guests.

She glared at him then walked to the woman who had called her.

He smiled.

Guys do comment if you are reading it!! and tell me how it is and suggestions are welcome!! 😉

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update....... ll be updating some more ????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey was that maan's dadima who called geet??
ur ss is getting interesting
n maan fullon flirting with geet😉
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u r a good writer😍hats off to u👏 please continue 😆i just want to read it😳

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Its really nice add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant update...awesomeeee!!!
I luved this maan 😆
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update....

that was adorable...
loved it dear
plzz continue soon
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hey that was awesome...lol that was so cute...!!:) maan is attracting to geet..Update soon!

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