Maneet SS:**Ajnabee**:Epilogue 49!

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Hi guys for those who don't know me I'm AMNA!! 😃
I am a huge fan of Maneet and have decided to write a short story!!
I also already have a FF on Maneet called Friction........................

This is going to be very different from the show.........and defo less than 10 parts!!

AJNABEE

INTRO:

Spring the season for marriages, flowers and love'.

As he stood outside ignoring the craziness going on around him'he looked at the house decorated with lights and flowers.

"Shaadi- and PYAAR?? NEVER!" he thought smirking.

They entered the house where the lardki wale were and the sudden welcome startled him.

They started throwing roses on them!

"What type of a welcome is this?" he thought.

Then to brighten up the atmosphere he and a few of his other close friends did a bhangra.

"Yaar, abhi bhi waqt hai bhaag ja!"

"Maan tu bhi na, I know you and LOVE NEVER go together, bas tujhay to dil todna aata hai" Rohit one of his best friends and the dulha whispered.

He came outside to get a bit of fresh air.

He walked along the garden when he saw a dupatta flying?

He walked over to the girl whose back was turned towards him. Her hair was flying and she was struggling with her sari''the wind blew the pallu away from her reach.

He saw her and walked even closer.....

Tell me if you guys liked it and if you want me to continue 😃

If u want to be pmed press the like button at the bottom and add me to your friends list!!!




INDEX
Part 1: pg 2
Part 2: pg 8
Part 3: pg 13
Part 4: pg 19
Part 5: pg 24
Part 6: pg 30
Part 7: pg 36
Part 8: pg 40
Part 9: pg 42
Epilogue: pg 49



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puja360 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiii i read ur friction ff it is the best i go to the post every hr to see if u have posted a new part and if not i read the hole ff over lol i kno i dont comment but i love it now im going to read ajnabee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep writing

i just loveeeeeeeeeeeee ur fanfics
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: puja360

hiiiiii i read ur friction ff it is the best i go to the post every hr to see if u have posted a new part and if not i read the hole ff over lol i kno i dont comment but i love it now im going to read ajnabee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep writing

i just loveeeeeeeeeeeee ur fanfics



U dont know how much that means to me!!! AWWW thanks babe!! i love u for saying sooo!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ps continue soon Brilliant Beginning,,,!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy
nice start
cont soon
do pm me da next part

luv harneet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sounds interesting.......... Do continue as we all know u r good.........i love ur writting specialy ur sense of humor....... So i know this is going to be fantastic SS........ So plz do pm me........ Eagerly watting 4r ur updation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u r too goodd in writing ......

so plzz continue...
awesome start....
plzz cont son
and me to ur PM list
i am loving this
melody
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey please add em to ur PM list
I really LOVE ur FFs
You have awesome ideas
Please start soon
Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG! is that geet? and she is wearing a sari! AHH! omg omg! can't wait! please cont sooon..
I wanna know what happens next!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arre yaar...shuru hi kiya tha aur khatam bhi ho gaya Update soon and make it LOOONNNGGGEERRR hehe

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