FF A Moment Lasting a Lifetime Pt 6 Up Pg12 22/11

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Awesum FF

Jus loved the way Maan was faling in love wit Geet

His routine was fab

Rajji jus love her

She played the best cupid here

Liked the way Geet culdnt c but still saw all thgs frm her eyes

I wish wat Maan said cums true

The way stry is proceeding is fab

Loved it

N haan the lines u write at last n strt are fab

Update soon n plz add me to ur pm list

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Read it before your PM. I guess you haven't sent it as yet....

I loved it😊

I wonder why were you so unsure of this part. It was really beautiful.

Geet is truly bringing the different side of Maan to the forefront😊

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Sigma

@Sigma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Pooja, your story is soo beautiful, I love it, it's cheered me up

I love the lines at the start, they are perfect, love is the only thing in the world that can overcome any pain, no matter how big, deep or old the pain is love conquers all as they say

I really wanna know what Maan means when he says to Geet she will see the next time, I can't figure it out, it's driving me mad

I love how Geet made him dance and what he said to her when she complimented him

Geet kisses him first on the cheek, I think the real Geet should follow this Geet's example and it paided off as she got a kiss back in return

lines at the end are great too

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Its very bad that you don't even inform that you updated the FF...I happened to chance on this...😡😆..Next time please PM!

Thank you for the much awaited update..and it was beautiful...Is he going to try and do something to restore her eye sight or her being able to see was symbolic?

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Pooja 🤗

This is a perfect end to an almost crappy day. I couldn't have asked for anything better. 😃

Lovely update. I am liking the way you are taking it slow - their relationship. The dinner and the dance put a smile on my lips. Looks like Maan is making promises he intends to keep. And Geet is expectant. That's a good sign.

And I absolutely love your words. You are right. Love is truly a beautiful thing. Its the emotions that it creates that makes it difficult to handle. Seems like a story is being told here - something more close to heart than the story itself. I pray that it heals soon. 🤗

Waiting for the next update. Hope its a bit sooner if you manage it.

Love always,
Ash