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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww i loved it. it was soooo sweeet and touchyyy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats so beautiful ....u described their inner trumoil so well....both feeling for each other , so close and yet so far .....and that eyelock when he gives her strength ... that was totally amazing yaar ...too good ....all i'll tell u is u write exceptionally well and pls dear keep updating....and plz plz pm me when u do
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW...dat was superbly brilliant!!!👏👏👏!...very soul-touching n poignantly beautiful!!!!...just hope dat mon's epi is sumthing like dis!!!!....welcome to da wrold of talented writers!!!
i TOTALLY LOVED ur descrp of their feelings n da silent commn thru their eyes!!!!..also maa'n innnermost thts abt his geet were totally heart warming!!!👏👏👏👏
a job truly well done by u my girl!!...hey wats ur name???
love,🤗
imu!!
add me 2 ur PM list if u plan 2 update!!!...plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply spectacular...................

ur writing was so heartwrenching yet filled with so much of hope for happiness , love and a better future for maneet..............
speechless and flawless...........
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sksg

Distance did not matter as long as they held each other in their hearts, and now all he has to do is focus on recovering his lost health and strength so that he can go in pursuit of the woman he loved as passionately as he knew she loved him, the woman who meant everything to him, the woman for whose sake he is willing to face any swords and bullets that the world might throw at him. No circumstances can block his love now. No grief is too hard for him to bear. No task is too difficult for him to complete. No one that hurt his Geet is safe from his wrath. Even if the entire world contrives to keep them apart, he will find a way to reach her for she is Maan's Geet and he is Maan Singh Khurana.




Yes He is The Maan Singh Khurana.....who redefined 'love'.... His name now to max of us is synonym of Love

Kalyani....awesome ...i loved it , though i crave to see them met -hug - cry at the very hospital scene ....but your OS has me wishing , hoping that CVs surprise us with something or exact like the one you wrote ....
You weaved Maan's emotions & determination, resolution so so beautifully in words that i can visualize the mesmerizing scene & Gurmeet & Drashti at their best enacting it ...living it
...hoping you continue giving us such sweet surprises ......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for everyone who liked and replied to my OS. I have posted the same on Facebook too and am very happy because Geet responded to it with the following comment. This means a healthy Maan will be back on Tue itself.

Geet whoa whoa awesomeee i jus lived the moment as an wen i read
:)))
an in tue epi he ll be good i mean healthy as he is shooting frm monday!!!!
hmmmm sigh!!
it was real bliss readin yo lines:))))


Here is the facebook link for those interested:

http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?uid=109723285713002&topic=1269

Edited by sksg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You have delved very deep into their love. Sometimes silence speaks louder than words and perhaps contain even deeper meaning. The distance between 2 people is created only when their hearts are distant. If two have become one, physical distance does not matter too much. And this fact you have brought out in your writing very beautifully. You incorporated every aspect of love we discussed and very beautifully. I am at a loss of words.

I told you...you have everything a writer should have. I am really glad you have decided to write. Trust me, it feels good to be at the receiving end. I'll be looking forward to many more of these. Hope I'm not sounding greedy. Now I can take a break without feeling too guilty about it. Loved every bit to the core. Keep them coming buddy!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bravo! Maan and Geet - Their pain, their longing, their strength, their pride, their promise, their love - every emotion portrayed so beautifully by stringing together words that the emotions are palpable. Wonderful!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, i am speechless. Can you please add me to your pm list for any further writing that you do.
Thank you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

You have delved very deep into their love. Sometimes silence speaks louder than words and perhaps contain even deeper meaning. The distance between 2 people is created only when their hearts are distant. If two have become one, physical distance does not matter too much. And this fact you have brought out in your writing very beautifully. You incorporated every aspect of love we discussed and very beautifully. I am at a loss of words.

I told you...you have everything a writer should have. I am really glad you have decided to write. Trust me, it feels good to be at the receiving end. I'll be looking forward to many more of these. Hope I'm not sounding greedy. Now I can take a break without feeling too guilty about it. Loved every bit to the core. Keep them coming buddy!



Dol, Kashish and you were the inspiration and encouragement behind this. So, I dedicate it to both of you. Thanks for liking it.
Edited by sksg - 14 years ago

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