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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sksg


Dol, Kashish and you were the inspiration and encouragement behind this. So, I dedicate it to both of you. Thanks for liking it.



That is really very sweet of you to say that. Thank you.
Should we call ourselves Tridevi or better...Maaneet's angels :-P - you, Kashish and me?
We sure share a bond beyond words...even with little interaction that we've had. I'm honored to be your friend.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DD is right ... u shd write more often !!

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

You have delved very deep into their love. Sometimes silence speaks louder than words and perhaps contain even deeper meaning. The distance between 2 people is created only when their hearts are distant. If two have become one, physical distance does not matter too much. And this fact you have brought out in your writing very beautifully. You incorporated every aspect of love we discussed and very beautifully. I am at a loss of words.

I told you...you have everything a writer should have. I am really glad you have decided to write. Trust me, it feels good to be at the receiving end. I'll be looking forward to many more of these. Hope I'm not sounding greedy. Now I can take a break without feeling too guilty about it. Loved every bit to the core. Keep them coming buddy!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolphinUSA



That is really very sweet of you to say that. Thank you.
Should we call ourselves Tridevi or better...Maaneet's angels :-P - you, Kashish and me?
We sure share a bond beyond words...even with little interaction that we've had. I'm honored to be your friend.



I share the same sentiment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -honeydew-

DD is right ... u shd write more often !!



Thanks Niha. I never thought I would see Maan in a helpless state. Yet, his broken body rendered him helpless to physically reach out to his Geet. It was so heart wrenching to watch him finding, yet not getting his Geet. That is what touched me deeply and made me write this OS. My only limitation is that I can not write unless something touches and moves me very deeply. I can not write just for the sake of writing. It has to come out from the heart without effort. So, hope Maaneet will inspire me more to write more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sksg

My only limitation is that I can not write unless something touches and moves me very deeply. I can not write just for the sake of writing. It has to come out from the heart without effort. So, hope Maaneet will inspire me more to write more.



This will be your biggest strength for whatever comes, it will be straight from the heart and not from the head. And anything that comes from heart is always touching, deep with meaning and soul stirring....just like this one was. And we know Maaneet can very well deliver such scenes, so I am hoping to get many more scenes from you :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Lovely, totally adorable, awesome, thanks for the PM sweety, loved to read your OS...Loved to read strong bondness of MaanEet....

Yes they understand eachother very well that no one can apart them...

Love MaanEet...





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Posted: 14 years ago
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babe i totally get what you mean .. and unless something really pushes you from within ... one cant write .. and .. for the kinda emotions that you have brought out, one does need loads of thought out imagination ..!!
any writer watches the scene in his head before putting it on paper ...😊

Originally posted by: sksg



Thanks Niha. I never thought I would see Maan in a helpless state. Yet, his broken body rendered him helpless to physically reach out to his Geet. It was so heart wrenching to watch him finding, yet not getting his Geet. That is what touched me deeply and made me write this OS. My only limitation is that I can not write unless something touches and moves me very deeply. I can not write just for the sake of writing. It has to come out from the heart without effort. So, hope Maaneet will inspire me more to write more.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -honeydew-

babe i totally get what you mean .. and unless something really pushes you from within ... one cant write .. and .. for the kinda emotions that you have brought out, one does need loads of thought out imagination ..!!
any writer watches the scene in his head before putting it on paper ...😊



You are correct. I cried a lot while writing that piece for the pain was as poignant for me as it was for Maaneet. I am still not completely out of it. Thanks for understanding.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA



This will be your biggest strength for whatever comes, it will be straight from the heart and not from the head. And anything that comes from heart is always touching, deep with meaning and soul stirring....just like this one was. And we know Maaneet can very well deliver such scenes, so I am hoping to get many more scenes from you :-)



Thanks Dol. Coming from you, this has definitely inflated my ego. I was trying to write Geet's perspective also for the same scene, but it is getting so painful that I think I will scrap it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
I don't blame you Kal. I've done that many times now. But no.....please don't stop. I am a sucker when it comes to Geet's POV. Can you please please please continue?

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