OS: Silent Promises - Page 4

Hey Kal,

Hey
even i like this show but i don't visit the forum that much but today i somehow felt doing so........and i came across your OS.....this OS perfectly portrayed the essence ,the meaning of love for Geet-Maan...............PERFECT.....Very Beautiful.....👏👏
👏

Sri my darling, i am totally speechless.

First of all take a big big hug for this heart touching, heart wrencing and totally emotional piece of work. you have done a fab job dear. i enjoyed every word, i enjoyed every expression, and my fav, when NT pushed her and maan saw her ... the promises they made through their eyes .... Awesome ...

I loved it Sri ... and i would request more wonderful FFs like this one.

it was a treat to read.

and what can i say about maan and geet ... their love is eternal, their love is almighty's blessing to them. that's all i can think of.

Loads of love, K

beautiful..Sri...

i loved it...read it first on FB...but..wow...

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

I don't blame you Kal. I've done that many times now. But no.....please don't stop. I am a sucker when it comes to Geet's POV. Can you please please please continue?

Dol, Just sent you a PM with the take on Geet's perspective. I will wait for your verdict before posting it here.

Originally posted by: crazilycrazy

Hey Kal,

I loved this OS. I have seen your writing before...you wrote a short poem, I said it then and I am repeating it now,you are one brilliant writer :D

My favourite line was the bullet and sword one,though the whole OS is awesome.

I wont say continue....some things are better left to imagination but do write more

cheers,

chaz

Thanks for liking it. I do remember your thread for that is my very first post that I ever made. I loved your poems too.

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Sri my darling, i am totally speechless.

First of all take a big big hug for this heart touching, heart wrencing and totally emotional piece of work. you have done a fab job dear. i enjoyed every word, i enjoyed every expression, and my fav, when NT pushed her and maan saw her ... the promises they made through their eyes .... Awesome ...

I loved it Sri ... and i would request more wonderful FFs like this one.

it was a treat to read.

and what can i say about maan and geet ... their love is eternal, their love is almighty's blessing to them. that's all i can think of.

Loads of love, K

Kashish, I was looking forward to your feedback especially because Maan's heart and feelings are strictly your cup of tea. Thanks for liking it. Dol and you were the inspiration and encouragement behind this. So, I dedicated it to both of you on Page 3 of this thread.

Originally posted by: -honeydew-

Beautiful really ..🤗 you have captured the essence of mondays episode .. we havent watched it as yet .. but it will for sure be something on those lines ..
and with each word, you made me live each of those emotions .. that both maan and geet were going thro ..
his longingness to be with her, the pain in her eyes.. and a million unanswered questions!
i loved the bit, where you wrote about how, he decides to go get her back!! cos, that was a task he had actually set out on, but never completed.. if we know Maan Singh Khurana at all, he would never leave a thing incomplete .. and this time, it will be in full cooperation from Miss. Handa herself ...

Thanks Niha. I admit I did think about how the track can continue without destroying Maan and Geet characteristics and, yet justify Geet going to work for Yash. This is the only plot I could come up with. It was well worth going through the pain because I could become Maan in order to think from his view point at least for the span of writing it.

Originally posted by: imraana

WOW...dat was superbly brilliant!!!👏👏👏!...very soul-touching n poignantly beautiful!!!!...just hope dat mon's epi is sumthing like dis!!!!....welcome to da wrold of talented writers!!!

i TOTALLY LOVED ur descrp of their feelings n da silent commn thru their eyes!!!!..also maa'n innnermost thts abt his geet were totally heart warming!!!👏

a job truly well done by u my girl!!...hey wats ur name???

love,🤗

imu!!

add me 2 ur PM list if u plan 2 update!!!...plzz

Glad you liked it. You can call me Sri.

Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Yes He is The Maan Singh Khurana.....who redefined 'love'.... His name now to max of us is synonym of Love

Kalyani....awesome ...i loved it , though i crave to see them met -hug - cry at the very hospital scene ....but your OS has me wishing , hoping that CVs surprise us with something or exact like the one you wrote ....
You weaved Maan's emotions & determination, resolution so so beautifully in words that i can visualize the mesmerizing scene & Gurmeet & Drashti at their best enacting it ...living it
...hoping you continue giving us such sweet surprises ......

Thanks for the sweet words. Gurumeet & Drashti enacting it would be a treat indeed to watch. Hope they have passionate moments like this even if not on the same lines as I put them down.