Maaneet Fanfic - Part 8 Page 7 Updated!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
nice ff
add me to your pm list
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

hi loved it ................. can i get the pm too............... give some name to this ff like .. jeewan sathi.......... sacha pyaar..................... hum sath sath hai....................... love u hamesha..............................pagal deewaney

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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Nice FF
Loved Maaneet a lot
Update soon
N plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Awesome update..!!!
Cant wait for the next part..!!
Please continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
i read ur ff in 1 go...
i loved the FF...
plzzz add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys heres the update...I think i'll be able to update atleast once a week from now on. Sorry for the major delay 😊
"Geet tum theek ho na?" Maan asked, he had been watching her for quite sometime. He saw her look at him, as though she was trying to understand something. Her tears were still flowing but she seemed to not notice them. He watched one tear flowing slowly down her cheek, and could not stop himself from wiping it. As his hand made contact with her skin, Geet's eyes grew wide, she looked shocked. Maan grew worried at her reaction. He went forward to cup her face but she pushed his hands away. "Haan sir main theek hoon, aap fikar mat kijiye. " she looked up at him after saying this to notice the hurt in his eyes, but it vanished within a second. They looked into each others eyes, Geet's fearful ones and Maan's angry ones. "Oye chalo chalo bus nikalne wali hai..." the conductor banged the door and soon the bus was off.
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"And that is how the job should be done!" Maan screamed as he threw the file in his hand. He gave out an angry sigh as he watched his employ scurry out of his office. The clock ticked 9pm...he made his way to the glass wall in his office. It gave a spectacular view of the city and the ocean at a far distance. It looked so beautiful, so alive, just like her...wait Maan pulled himself out before he went back into one of his day dreams. He noticed he had been having alot of those lately. He combed his hand through his hair in frustration. What was happening to him? Geet had been all over his mind lately, eversince they had come back from Hoshiarpur, he Maan Singh Khurana could not even concentrate on his work. He would look up everytime someone took her name, or watch her through the blinds for hours as she went around tumbling through the office. Geet on other hand was running away from him. She would talk to him only about work and then walk away without a sound. She was still the same with everyone else, infact she had become more energetic and much happier, but whenever he was around she would become a different person. He would never admit it, but somewhere he was missing her pointless blabbering. What was wrong with her? Has something happened? Was she in trouble? He banged the desk in anger, so many questions had been plaguing him for weeks now. It had been three weeks since that bus ride from Hoshiarpur and the two of them hadn't had one decent conversation. He had become so frustrated that he would scream at his employs for the smallest of mistakes. But he didn't care, Maan SIngh Khurana was always in control, but for the first time in his life he was losing control of not only the situation, but over himself as well.
hope u enjoyed reading plzzz comment, n thanks in advance 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing update!!
Geet is ignoring maan!!
And maan is getting frustrated!!
Oh! Can't wait till they accept their feeling for eachother!!
Please continue sooon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, i'm really really sorry for the really really late update. I just sort of had a writer's block cum anger at the show. I stopped watching Geet for a while with the whole Bhuaji track n when i started watching it again, i had no clue where i was taking this ff. SO the point is i needed some time to think about what exactly i want to do with this ff...n now finally is the next part. Oh n future warning it is a pretty boring part, but needed to get the story moving, promise i will try and make it up to u in the next parts...okay now enough of my blabbering...here's the part, njoy, and do comment!

Part 8

The city was covered in darkness, there was no sign of the moon or even a single star in the dark sky. It seemed even the universe had been enveloped in the darkness that covered her life...her heart. Staring out at the darkness from the single window in her tiny room, Geet Handa felt alone today. There was no light in her life, no hope, just plain darkness. A single tear slid down her pale cheek as she thought about her past that refused to leave her present and was now clouding her future. The loud creaking of the window hedges brought her back to the present. She looked around the tiny room, which was littered in cardboard boxes. Had she made the right choice? Once again she had been forced to leave the place she called home. The place where finally she was getting the love of a family, the love of Pinky and her father, Mehta uncle.

It had been another such dark night two weeks ago when fate had dealt her another blow. There had been a storm that day, it had been raining for hours. The office had closed early and in an attempt to get away from Maan sir she had left the office in a hurry, getting drenched in the process. Finally when she got home, she was a sickly pale color, and had fainted before anyone could react. It had been Mehta uncle who had carried her to the bed and called the doctor. It was then that her past had come back to hound her, they had found out the truth. She was pregnant. The news had spread like wild-fire, people had found a new topic to gossip about. She had been forced to take a few days off from work, one of the most horrible days of her life. Women from the colony had come to meet her, they called her characterless, called her unborn child names...she shuddered remembering the things she had heard. But even after all these insults she had stayed in that house, because after she had confided in Mehta uncle and Pinky, they had given her their full support. However she had to leave when people started raising fingers at them, she knew the importance of the reputation of girl. She could never bear Pinky having to go through the things she had had to endure, and so she had left. Her pay did not allow her to get accommodation in an expensive place, and so she had ended up with this tiny one-bedroom house, if you could call it that. The walls had paint peeling of them, there was a single tiny window with broken glass panes. The neighborhood was always dark and gloomy, not like the neighborhood of Pinky's house, which was always loud and chirpy. She shivered as she heard glass break in a distance. The drunkard was back. He stayed in the flat next to hers, drank all day and muttered curses and everyone who passed.

It had been two days since she had moved here, she had made sure neither Pinky nor Mehta uncle came to leave her. Two days without proper sleep or food, were having a toll on her, how was she going to stay here? But did she have a choice...where could she go? Pinky was the only friend she had and getting help from her now was out of the question, who would help her now? suddenly his image flashed before her eyes. "Nahi", she said aloud, "Mein unse madad nahi loongi, woh...woh Maan sir hain...woh mere madad nahi karenge." but even as she said this, she knew she was lying. He would help her, he had helped her whenever she had been in trouble. He would definitely help her again. But then what was stopping her? The thought that he would find out the truth, the fear that he would not understand...but why did it matter to her, what difference would it make if he hated her after finding out the truth...She signed in resignation. These thoughts had been plaguing her for the past two days. WHy did it matter to her? Why did she keep thinking about him? Why was he the first person she thought about she needed help? And most importantly why was she avoiding him ever since they had come back from Hoshiarpur? WHat had changed?

hope you enjoyed, do comment plzzz.😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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just found ur ff.. read it in one go... nd i truly love it... i hope u will continue it soon. one thing which i like is tht it is gng from d strtng... plz add me to ur pm list... it is a refreshing ff... plz continue soon

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