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Posted: 14 years ago
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<font size="3">Okay guys, firstly sorry for the delay....here's the next part hope u like it, thanks alot for all the comments</font>


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"Maan", a slow whisper left her trembling lips. There he lay, face-down, beaten to the ground. Veerji (no idea what his name is! 😕) along with his men stood laughing around him. They held blood-stained swords in their hands. As she watched the red liquid slowly drip from the edge of the sword, Geet was overcome with anger. How dare they! How dare they hurt her Maan. She made her way towards the main entrance of the run-down fort. It was a good thing she knew each corner of the place, or else she would have probably been lost. Once out of the fort, Geet quickly got to the car, smashing the wind shield with a stone, hoping no one heard, she removed her cell phone. (hey Geet is mordernized here! Maan gave it to her when she was taking care of dadi just in case she needed to contact him) She remembered how much she had hated the thing when she had first laid eyes on it, what was Maan sir trying to prove by giving her the cell? She would buy one when she had the money. He had softly smiled and just kept it in her hands, while she stared in those deep brown eyes, twinkling with the rare smile. 😳 Coming out of her thoughts, she quickly called the police inspector. He was a kind man, had helped her when she had first raised a voice against her brother. He had been the one who was willing to come and arrest Veerji even without any proof, just because he trusted her. He would come and help her, he was her last hope, he had to come. After about five minutes of explaining the situation, the inspector agreed to come, he said it would take him about ten minutes to reach the fort. Finally done with the call, Geet began to think of ways to get Maan out of there. She trembled at the thought of his worsening condition, as a vision of his bloodied body flashed in front of her. Brushing aside these thoughts she made her way inside, making sure not to make any noise. She hoped her brother had not noticed she was missing, hell would break lose if he did. At last she reached the room where they all stood. Maan had been moved to a corner of the room, while her brother and his friends drank to their victory on the other side. "Now I will see how that Geet survives, she committed a sin and now the whole of Hushiarpur will see what happens when someone defies me!" she heard her brother scream, before they all broke into a wicked laughter. Keeping her fear in control, Geet concentrated on Maan. She made her way to the corner where he lay unconscious, or maybe dead, but she didn't want to think too much. Finally making reaching him, she knelt down beside him, ignoring the shot of pain that went through her broken leg. "Maan sir, Maan sir….sir please uthea na….sir, sir…." She tried waking him up, shaking him with each attempt. Getting worried with each passing second, she shook him with all her might, "Maan wake up!" The tinkling of her bangles and loud whispers finally caught the attention of one of the men. "Aye, what are you doing there…..Veerji look there's Geet!" She watched as her brother turned and hatred flashed through his eyes. A slow grin formed on his face as he watched her next to Maan. "SO finally you came Geet, seems like you've found yourself a new lover. Tell me is he as good as your previous one?" 🤢 Geet cringed hearing her brother's words. He continued throwing insults at her as he gradually walked towards her, like a lion coming towards its cornered prey. Her eyes filled with terror as she watched the sword come descending down on her, "MAAN" she screamed while shutting her eyes, waiting for the pain.</font>

<font size="3">What will happen next??? no clue 😆 ...keep reading and plzzzzzzzzzz comment, thanks in advance</font> 😛
Edited by dudley - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am sooooo intrigued and I can't wait to read more continue soon please!!!!⭐️👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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add me 2 the pm list plz... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one.... waiting for next... pls add me in ur pm list .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys, here's the next part, thanks for all the comments

Part 3:
Her eyes filled with terror as she watched the sword come descending down on her, "MAAN" she screamed while shutting her eyes, waiting for the pain. But it never came. Slowly opening her eyes, she saw Maan's hand firmly holding the sword mid-way. Veerji's face contorted with surprise, then anger, and finally hatred. Both men stared at each other in pure disgust, while Geet stared in shock at one particular person. Suddenly coming out of her reverie she looked at the blood flowing down the shiny metal of the sword. "Maan" she whispered, and a pair of brown eyes came and rested on her terror filled ones. They stared at each other, words were not needed, their eyes did all the taking. A loud groan brought their staring-session to an end. "Oh stop you two, I told you to stay away from her Maan Singh Khurana, now you will pay too. This girl is filth and now that you have dirtied yourself with her, I will just have to kill both of you," Tej (Geet's brothers) said with an evil smirk. With one smooth stroke he pulled the sword free from Maan's hand. Holding it at Maan's throat, he roughly pulled Geet up causing her to flinch in pain. "So Geet found yourself a new man have you?" He caught her hair and pulled her head back, bringing his face close to her ears, "Does he know your secret Geet?" Her eyes opened wide in fear as only one thought swept through her mind, Maan didn't know… "Mujhe laga hi tha" (I thought so) said Tej while he turned to look at a confused Maan. "Tum iske liye marna chahate the? Is Geet ke liye? Woh Geet jisne aaj tak tumhe apne puri sachaai hi nahi batai…vaah kya baat hai." (You wanted to for her? This Geet? Geet who hasn't even told you her whole truth as yet?) Maan looked from Geet to Tej and back. While Tej looked at him, Geet had her eyes on the ground and refused to look at him. What was all this about? "Geet…Geet yeh kya bol raha hai? Geet main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon, Yeh kya ke raha hai? GEET!" (Geet..Geet what is he saying? Geet I'm asking you something, What is he talking about? Geet!) He felt his old wounds and insecurities come alive again. Had Geet betrayed him like Samira? No, No Geet was different, his heart argued. But his brain was working at double its speed. Agar Geet ne kuch galat nahi kiya toh uske parivaar wale use kyun maarna chahate the? (If Geet had not done anything wrong why were her family members out to kill her?) He looked at her once again, Geet please sirf ek baar meri taraf dekho , please Geet (Geet please look at me, just one Geet please), his heart begged. As if hearing his pleas she looked up. He saw a mixture of emotions in her eyes. There was fear, no doubt, but above all there was love. The same love he had read in her eyes the countless number of times. No Geet would not betray him, yes she was hiding something from him, but she had to have a valid reason. With this new-found confidence he looked back at the Tej's smirking face.
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Hope u guys enjoyed....plzz comment 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great, can you please update the title with the page number you have added a new chapter?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for the delay guys...exams going on 😭
yeah so anyways here's the next part...let me knw what u think 😊

"Geet.....Geet...Geet utho....Geet! uff yeh ladki, saari auratein aisi kyun hoti hai?" Maan grumbled as he limped down the road carrying an unconscious Geet in his arms. "Maine iski baat kyun suni, saari ek jaisi hoti hai, hamesha problem main...." He had been walking for what seemed like ages, Geet had fallen unconscious while he had dealth with her stupid brother. Maan wanted to kill that man....how could he try to kill his own sister??? WHat the hell was he blabbering about anyways......there were so many unanswered questions. When Maan had looked into Geet's eyes, looking for assurance that she was not lying to him, he had been shocked to see her avoiding his gaze. Yet something in him told him to believe her. If it had been someone else, Maan would have walked out right then, but with Geet things were different. Maan's frowned as he tried to make sense of his changing nature. Maan SIngh Khurana only listened to his brain, he had paid dearly for listening to his heart, but yet in Geet's case he always found himself listening to his heart. A slow grin formed on his handsome features as he thought of the many encounters they had had. SHe was always in some sort of trouble, be it drowning in the water, or running away in the mela. But even through all the trouble she had a child-like innocence, a unique quality that made him want to protect her...Yes that was what had made him give her a second chance. He still remembered, when she had met him at the field. SHe was the first, or actually the only person who dared to stand against him. SHe had looked him in his eyes and dared him to make her sign the papers. Then she had suddenly fallen unconscious and he had had to carry her to her house. Her family had made a spectacle of them, insulting not only him, but also their own daughter...He had not been able to sleep the whole night out of worry. Maan SIngh Khurana was worried, yes that was it....maybe that was when he had fallen for her.....wait what!! Maan came to an abrupt stop as the realization hit him. Yes he had fallen for this stubborn, stupid girl, who loved to get into trouble. He wanted so desperately wake her up....Her beautiful hair flying in the cool wind, her angelic features glowing in the moonlight and a soft smile playing on her rosy lips....

okay thats it....wait for the next part 😆
Hope u liked it....plzzz comment!.....oh and does anyone have any idea how to change the title of the post???
Edited by dudley - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzz...continue soon..
add me to yr pm..plz
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Amazing FF!!!

hope geet is fine now!!!
cant wait for the next part!!!
do cont.soon and pls add me to you PM list😃
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hey great FF! do con't soon!

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