OS: O Re Piya - Page 2

Very nice Jaz kash ki sapna nahin sach hota anyway still good .....:)

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Originally posted by: maybe-just

Jazzzzzzz, 🤗 nice to see you here 😆

NAHINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! 😲😆 Jazzz, I won't mention what happened, dont wanna ruin it for the readers 😆 but right when I was really excited by the end, it all disappeared 😲😆 How could you Jaz? 😲 How could you do this to us? 😲😆

Serious note - Tussi kamal kar dita Jazji 😆 I lovedddddd it 😳 Everything was so clear and I had this clear image in my mind as I read along! 👏 Wonderful dolll, keep up the good work! 😉

Exactly 🤣 I was so Nicely Readin n then 🤣 i Got ma Chapal for her 🤣

what a dream dear
maan u are totally gone
please both of you making fools of yourselves and us and just say damn it
do continue
bye sumi

shoes for u ,noway missy.u have depicted the feelings of maaneet so beautifully.its a painful phase for both maan and geet but this pain will pave the way for their happiness to come .the joy they will have together in future will blur away the pain they r feeling at the moment.

J J o J .... this is brilliant .... simply brilliant .... i loved it with the bottom of my heart ....

Loved the way maan got the truth out of geet .... simply awesome ...

Maan and geet - they are truly an eternal love story !!!!\

after reading this OS who wud want to come after u wid shoes it was brilliant i am coming after u wid roses

Shoes nahin, im coming with a belan, which is much cleaner 😛😛

Wonderful Jaz ...right until u poured cold water over all of us.