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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Damn it was only a dream!!!! lol
that was maaneetastic Jaz....
enjoyed every word of it...
if only something like that were to happen in the show....
can't wait to read more of your works....

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shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Maan's pain was expressed beatifully, but at the end u made it a dream...

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Whatttttttt? All a dream? Jazuuuuuuuuuuuu 😭

Lekin..hayeee..kya dream tha!! 😍 ...just too..ishhh!! 😳

Loved it babes.. 🤗

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Julie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

that was brilliant! totally loved it!!

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sheena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Wow!!Tht was wonderful!!I loved it though it was a dream,nevermind....i love the way 2 write!!Amazing!!1🤗

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Amerra

@esquire1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Again a beautifully written OS!! You just amaze me with your writing it just blows me away!!

Love your description you put in there and the scenery was very good!!

Well Done!👏👏👏👏 and can't wait for your next OS!

-amerra

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Brilliant.....Simply Beautiful!!!👏👏

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

awesome!

beautifully written!=)

but that was all a dream!...sooo sad!=(

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mchopra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

She stayed silent.

"Kyun Geet, kyun?"

Finally, she spoke.

"Kyun ke main aapse pyaar karti hoon!" she yelled.

shhhh..I jsut jumped reading that..if someone sees me na..gone only me..everyone will think i have lost it..

and u broke my heart in the end..No we not gonna throw shoes but we are gonna put forward broken pieces of our heart..

AS usual it was beautiful..Really...i hold my breath and read it..gosh i can literally see each and every movement..thanks...

and u know u making us so used to ur FFs that i have started waitinf more for ur PM than the epi itself..so if one day u forget to write i bet ur inbox will be full of Pms asking abt our daily dose..

A beautiful one..Thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts..in such a wonderful way..