Dil Ki Baatein (FF) - Update page 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
hey....lovely starting....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Nice update
Liked the way u wrote
Jus got lil confuse wit words location n focus
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Interesting update
Continue soon.😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Awesome FF dear!!!
Add me to your PM list!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2
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Location: random house in Mumbai, time: morning, day following the party
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Focus: random 19 yr. girl reading page 3 news at breakfast table
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Girl runs into the kitchen
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Girl: Mumma you will not believe this. Yeh dekho, look, look.
She frantically waves the newspaper in front of her mothers face as she moves about the kitchen preparing breakfast
Girl: *whining now* Mummy dekho na, see.
The mother finally washes her hands and takes newspaper to look at what her daughter was desperately trying to show her. Her gaze falls on the picture of a very handsome man and a beautiful girl smiling. Above it reads the headline. "Office leads to Romance: Dhruv Dave finally off the market".
Interest piqued as to the details about this couple, she continues on to read the article.
Before long, her daughter hastily interrupts
Girl: Can you believe it, one of the most eligible bachelors engaged. He is so handsome. You know I met him at one of the seminars in college, he is very nice also. so cool, you know he raised his empire himself from a young age and he graduated top of college. oh, did you know he also modeled briefly to raise money for college fees. a complete self made guy.....(she continues rambling about Dhruv Dave).....I can't believe he's engaged.
Girl starts pouting.
Laughing the mother ruffles her hair and kisses her forehead.
Mother: Pagal ladki. Yes, he is very handsome but his fiance is also beautiful. They look happy together. So, do you have a crush on him?
Girl blushes and snatches the paper out of her hands.
Girl: Mumma! aise koi baat nahi. I was just saying. Aap bhi na.
Girl stomps off back to breakfast table and the mother goes back to cooking. Smiling and shaking her head at her daughters fancies.

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Location: Mumbai domestic airport, time: morning following party
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focus: Man stepping off a plane and making way to gather his luggage
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Dials phone once he has his luggage
"Hey bro, i am here"
"yeah, i got it"
"should be there in 10 minutes"
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comments are appreciated and welcome.
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note: image of Dhruv Dave: looks similar to that of Shahid Kapoor. Jab We Met style.
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Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Very interesting...but why such short updates???BTW,thanks for the Shahid kapoor tip..that was quite helpful😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
OMG!!! this is so good!!! I love it...so many twists and mysteries...it's amazing!!! Please do continue and quickly...i'm dieing here...it's that good!!! Thanks a bunch babe!!!! Just love it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
yes.. make ur updates a little bit longer..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
lovely part but a bit short😳
Add me to the PM list for this FF also.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
wow very interesting.....2 much of suspense ...cn u pm me the next tym..will be eagerly waiting fr ur update

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