Dil Ki Baatein (FF) - Update page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello, this is a preview of a ff i am thinking of writing, i have been toying with the idea for a few days.....please read the preview and let me know if I should continue with the story
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Dil Ki Baatein

Location: A lavish high class party, Movie-Masquerade theme

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Focus: A couple dressed Jodha-Akbar style dancing a waltz in the middle of the dance floor

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The waltz ends and the man kissing the hand of the woman, leaves her, and grabbing a Champaign moves to the top of the stairs facing the ballroom.

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Clinking of glass heard and all attention goes to the Man at the top of the stairs

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Man: thank you everyone for coming to this party and taking part in our success. Today marks the two year anniversary of our new company and it's thanks to everyone here that we have reached the heigths we have in such a short time

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Thunderous clapping from everyone

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Raising his hand to quiet everyone, continues: "Thank you, thank you......the success of this company would also not have been possible or as sweet without the presence of my partner, Geet"

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Every greater clapping as the attention is focused on the woman dressed as Jodha as she removes her mask and smiles at everyone

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"And I have even happier new to share with everyone, after much pursuing and 6 months of relentless begging, Ms. Geet has finally agreed to marry me"

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Laughter and clapping heard

Suddenly hear the breaking of Glass

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Everyone's attention turns from the couple and sees Maan Khurana backing away and fleeing the ballroom

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Index:

Intro - Page 1

Part 1 - Page 3

Part 2 -Page 7

Story Short form part 1 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the intro cont soon plz👏
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Wow wat an intro....do cont....
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interestinG!!!!


loved iT!!!

continue sooN!!!

n pm me!!!
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love it!! its different :D
please add me to your pm list!!
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gr8 intro.. looking forward to the updates.. do continue soon
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huh?it wasnt maan who was marrying her
interesting cant wait to read more
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What a preview!!!!!!!!!!
I loveeeeee it.
Plzzz continue soon.


Fatima
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Oh no!! It wasn't Maan in the beginning!!
Now I need to know what's going to happen next .. pl add me to your PM when you next update!!
Uzma xx
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CONTINUE THIS - GOOD DIFFERENT STORY
PM ME AS WELL

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