Tomorrow's yesterday-(OS): part 2, pg6, 31 Jul

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Sookie my dear ... That is the best piece of work ever written on a reaction to a single statement :

"Mera bas chale ... tho me aapka chera dobara kabhi nahi dehkun ... "

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Aur Mera bas chale tho me appko is piece of work ke liya Doctorate dilavun !!!!

*Applause* .... My dear take a bow ..... you've earned it !!!

It made my heart beat faster and my hair stand up .... I was totally zapped ... drawn into the vortex Maan's pain .... all I can do is Sighhhhhh !!!! 😍

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

OMG...u wrote an entire piece on tht one mere dialogue ??

it's was superb ...i don't have words really ..!!...

"Love is you and me" ......perfect !! 😊

the way u expressed maan's pain n desire made me feel so much
im in a trance !!

-fatima

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her_story

@her_story

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

loved it sookie...i must say u r an amazing writer... all your works r fit to be published... u seriously got a professional touch to ur writing...

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imshveta

@imshveta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Sookie,

I OFFICIALLY TAKE BACK MY WORDS .

This one was fantastic, mindblowing, awesome, and every bit Geet-Maan. You got it this time dear.

Thanks for the PM

Love

Shveta

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imshveta

@imshveta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Hello Shveta,

Thanks for the comment. This is an old draft and was written when I was working on Infinity. So it is possible that there is a shade of that.

This is a whimsical piece, something that I want to see in them in future. Him being less angry and she being less whatever she is now.

Thanks!

S

Yes, you are right.

This can definitely qualify for a future setting for Maan-Geet. what will be the point of a love story , if there is never going to be an improvement in the relations. settling down of emotions, lesser pain, more romance.

Thanks and I am sorry for being so harsh. i hate it myself sometimes.

Love

Shveta

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Will come back to edit..

Edit:
loved the companion piece..it so relate to the first and then it looks so fresh too..loved these lines..

"Love is you and me. And for as I am concerned, being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it is with each other."
Couldn't end better..ManEet is worth addicting..and so are Maan's eyes..i noticed..😆

Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Awwn, the last words took my breathes away. I liked it, of course. This was short..really very short, that doesn't really suits you superstar. :l

Come back soon! :)

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Doodle

@Doodle

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

WOW!!! Sookie, I always believe in the statement:-

"Love is a moment. Love is a lifetime. A moment is a lifetime."

and today I had an addition to the below analysis by you:-

"Love has a name. And that name is Maan.
It may seem silly to you, but to me it is true. You are like an epiphany that my existence was waiting for; you are like the last clue to the puzzle that has been put in its place and suddenly my life is having a new meaning and I have finally come to realize that the world is something more then a place to be. It's a place to live."

Would love to read the continuation.

Edited by doodleberry - 15 years ago

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Wow, beautiful.

The way you described Maan's emotions when he heard that one harsh sentence from Geet - fabulous. There was a myriad of emotions on his face at that moment - shock, distress, hurt and anger and you brought about all these emotions so beautifully.

Love,
Ash