Tomorrow's yesterday-(OS): part 2, pg6, 31 Jul - Page 4

Originally posted by: imshveta

It was nice, beautifully written.

But then again it started to have a feel of "Infinity...".

When i think of Maan and Geet, i think of craziness. I think of intensity of emotions. I think of a heaviness of situations which are suddenly lightened by one party's humour. The pieces that you have done on both of them so far reflected all that.

This particular one seems like it had been picked up right from another ff of yrs on AR. nothing that I associate Geet-Maan with.

Dont know what others will say to this.

Still it was a good one

Love

Shveta

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever

Magnificent writing S! I'm glad that you gave this link to me. It is a refreshing piece. And as to the tiny chemistry part, well, may be its natural for a polymer tech. graduate. 😆

This OS is different in the way it progresses. In the beginning there are these questions for which for a moment i thought, these dont have any answers at all, especially about the opposites attract. And as the story goes on the answers unfold which kept me spellbound. This definitely is my favourite OS so far.

Anu

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

you know sookster i actually dont have words for this one.
it was completely unexpected!!! Just loved the whole thing...the fact about opposites existing after one another was something that was bothering me a few minutes ago after a heated conversation. you explained the whole thing so nicely.
Damm, you must really like his eyes.
Love has a name. And that name is Maan.
great line.
and romantic too ;)
plz continue
soon
Sur

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

im speechless, your way with words makes me speechless, it was a very beautiful one shot, and you must write the companion piece to this special oneshot!

Originally posted by: khushali16

"""Maan, I think I finally have an answer for you, you know for the one that you asked me about how I fall in love. Well, here it is. Love has eyes like mid-summer sky that seem to pierce through a mask of fantasy. Love has dimples on the chin where I can take a dip on a hot summer day. Love smells like earth after first monsoon rains. Love has fingers that hold me on a tiring day. Love has a strength to put life back into me. Love has a smile of a thousand watt. Love is always unexpected yet strangely familiar.
Love has a name. And that name is Maan. """

This paragraph almost got me teary-eyed. I love the way your writing is so soulful :)

*Big hug*

Originally posted by: blueflames

its beautiful;awesome....plz do continue and write the next part....I am falling in love with ur writings...

"Day and night co-exists during dawn and dusk. When two opposites meet, a miracle is created."
Love has a name. And that name is Maan.
Yesterday is gone. Tomorrow will be here. Today is a miracle.

these lines are fantastic

Originally posted by: bDgT

Loved every single word!