Tomorrow's yesterday-(OS): part 2, pg6, 31 Jul

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

S!!!! How do you come up with something new like this everytime. Lady, that was just so beautiful and... and...oh my no words are coming out now. I LOVED IT! Marking this one as one of the many bests from you.

Edited by Prasanthi - 15 years ago

Quote

simran1285

@simran1285

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

**RESERVED***

Wow your on a roll......

will be back if not later today then definitely tomorrow...Tomorrow's Yesterday.isn't that a song?

MUAH love you!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey sookie*
Its beautiful dear..and fits ManEet well..
I loved these lines..
"Day and night co-exists during dawn and dusk. When two opposites meet, a miracle is created."
Love has a name. And that name is Maan. 😳
Yesterday is gone. Tomorrow will be here. Today is a miracle.😊
Hmm..did i read this before with AR?Or no?
Anyways waiting for another one u mentioned as its companion piece.. 😃
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Thanks Sri!

It was written ages ago and its possible I posted it elsewhere. But I did not find it on IF :-)
So am guessing I used few lines here and there :D

Yeah, companion piece is brand new. Will be posted on Saturday.

Thanks!
S

Quote

ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Sookie,

Wow, that was amazing.

You know, I am really wondering what made you write this piece. Is it a reaction to a feeling or is it a reaction to somebody's words? For me it felt like a battle of emotions at the time you begin to a feeling of complete solace by the time you end. It is like you started with a question in mind and ended with an answer by the time it was done.

A wonderful metaphor of chemicals and life. I loved how you used nature to understand our feelings because answer to every question lies in nature.

"When two opposites meet, a miracle is created" - Very true.

"Love is a temporary madness. It erupts like an earthquake and then subsides. And when it subsides you have to make a decision. You have to work out whether your roots have become so entwined together that it is inconceivable that you should ever part. Because this is what love is. Love is not breathlessness, it is not excitement, it is not the promulgation of promises of eternal passion. That is just being "in love" which any of us can convince ourselves we are. Love itself is what is left over when being in love has burned away, and this is both an art and a fortunate accident"

Your shot for me explains the above words perfectly. Brilliant.

Please do write the companion piece and thanks a ton for the pm.

Love,
Ash

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Hey awesumly written

Jus loved the way u descibe the love

Thank you very much! :-)

Quote

imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

It was nice, beautifully written.

But then again it started to have a feel of "Infinity...".

When i think of Maan and Geet, i think of craziness. I think of intensity of emotions. I think of a heaviness of situations which are suddenly lightened by one party's humour. The pieces that you have done on both of them so far reflected all that.

This particular one seems like it had been picked up right from another ff of yrs on AR. nothing that I associate Geet-Maan with.

Dont know what others will say to this.

Still it was a good one

Love

Shveta

Quote

imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

You better be back with "infinity ..." missy.

I miss that one. and now that its nearing completion, i am finding it even more diificult to wait for months that you usually take to update that particular ff of yrs.

and i guess one week can be granted only if thats all that you are gonna take. ;)

Love

Shveta

Quote

anu.happy4ever

@anu.happy4ever

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Magnificent writing S! I'm glad that you gave this link to me. It is a refreshing piece. And as to the tiny chemistry part, well, may be its natural for a polymer tech. graduate. 😆

This OS is different in the way it progresses. In the beginning there are these questions for which for a moment i thought, these dont have any answers at all, especially about the opposites attract. And as the story goes on the answers unfold which kept me spellbound. This definitely is my favourite OS so far.

Anu

Quote

Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

you know sookster i actually dont have words for this one.
it was completely unexpected!!! Just loved the whole thing...the fact about opposites existing after one another was something that was bothering me a few minutes ago after a heated conversation. you explained the whole thing so nicely.
Damm, you must really like his eyes.
Love has a name. And that name is Maan.
great line.
and romantic too ;)
plz continue
soon
Sur