Tomorrow's yesterday-(OS): part 2, pg6, 31 Jul - Page 3

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

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hey sookie,

well first off...this was an unusual story !
the way u described the amalgamation of nature and the symbiotic nature tht exists...
wow tht was wonderful !
I loved it....

thank you so much. Glad you love it...

and it was indeed true tht words sooth cajole and entice yet at times they leave you wounded...
the whole story sort of calmed me down ....it was so alluring !
yet Blah Blah Woof Woof.....remains my fav when it comes to short stories !
it sort of captivates me in such a manner that i'm left spellbound !

:-) I know what you mean. I think its the way things happen between two people and the way it is written which makes you like that story.

Can relate to it more easily than i can do with other short stories of urs 😊
Nevertheless this too is a good work of art !

Wow! Thanks so much!

I guess geet/maan are your current fancy :)
the lines i loved d most....", sacrificing their individuality to create something new; like salt or like dawn or like dusk or like horizon or like a dream or a lot like love or something like us.
A small miracle." ...."Love has a name. And that name is Maan. "

Yeah. I am waiting for few serials to start and few serials to be subbed. Till then I needed something to obsess over. :D

do write more !

tc
fatima

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great one shot!👍🏼 Beautifully written and absolutely enticing!👏👏

I really am left speechless, don't know how to express how good that was.😳

I love how you described love and then how you developed connection betweeen chemicals and related it to the characters😊.

Can't wait to read the companion piece, do continue soon.

Anjali

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

i dont have much words...Amazing!!!Beautiful!!!

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Awesome Sookie as usual !!..... do give us the companion piece also ......

Originally posted by: Sofna

OMG..U are such an Amaaazin writer.........!!!!!..........i loooooooooooooooove this type of writin......!!!.......Plz Plz cont!!!!

Originally posted by: nehaahmad

love it!!!!!!!!!!!! absolutely soulful and beautiful

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

S!!!! How do you come up with something new like this everytime. Lady, that was just so beautiful and... and...oh my no words are coming out now. I LOVED IT! Marking this one as one of the many bests from you.

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Prathi...you should tell me which are the ones you like someday :-)

Glad you liked it P!

:-)