Tomorrow's yesterday-(OS): part 2, pg6, 31 Jul

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Khushali

@-Khushali-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

OMG this was so beautiful !!!! but somehow, i just cannot imagine them speaking in english !! Lol. But i loved it. Everything touched the heart ! :)

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: blueflames
WOW
Mindblowing....It was Maan's expression in words which we witnessed in his eyes in yesterdays epi when Geet said "K mera bas chale to me apka chehra dobara kabi nai deho"...

it was clear, subtle;emotional;phenomanal,beautifull............& much more

ur writings seem to be an excerpt out of novels for which i can do anything.....I've told u before u have a gift of capturing the readers attention...keep it up
I am definetly going to read all ur stories on whatever character u have written them as I am not an avid T.V watcher.....

simi

Thank you so much Simi! Please do read and tell me what you think about them.

Will be waiting for your comments...

S

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Mind blowingly written
Loved it

Thank you very much...

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: rusha4003
Sookie my dear ... That is the best piece of work ever written on a reaction to a single statement :

"Mera bas chale ... tho me aapka chera dobara kabhi nahi dehkun ... "

👏

Aur Mera bas chale tho me appko is piece of work ke liya Doctorate dilavun !!!!

*Applause* .... My dear take a bow ..... you've earned it !!!

It made my heart beat faster and my hair stand up .... I was totally zapped ... drawn into the vortex Maan's pain .... all I can do is Sighhhhhh !!!! 😍

Thank you Usha. Of course the episode did not end the way I ended, but meh :-)

Glad you liked it!

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
OMG...u wrote an entire piece on tht one mere dialogue ??

it's was superb ...i don't have words really ..!!...

"Love is you and me" ......perfect !! 😊

the way u expressed maan's pain n desire made me feel so much
im in a trance !!

-fatima

Thank you for the comment Fatima :-) Glad you enjoyed this short piece.

Quote

-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it is with each other."

so true Sookie...

yet sometimes Love, just one word fills you up. It becomes the reason for being. It asks nothing in return, just gives. It completes you. It consumes you. It adds brightness to the day, stars to the night, the rustle in the leaves, the wave to a river that was calm.

Love has manifestations that transcends the being. It could be a smile, a touch, a word, a look...

Love, being in love and loving someone starts with self....an emotion that emanates out of you and engulfs the other into you...

Quote

Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

This was so touching. Like, seriously. I am amazed by the quality of words you have chosen, and how they have been used to describe each and every feeling. This reminds me of you, unknown to me, on the blog. Longest time back.

I like how these words suit the characters this time around :)

Kiran