He fumbles at your spirit... (Maan/Geet OS) 27 Jul - Page 5

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hmmm!!! :)

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Hey Sookie!!!

Wow!!! I asked for one and you gave two. Thats so nice of you. Kudos dear!!

Wondering what and how? Well, I asked you from Geet's view, you gave from daadi's and also added a bit of Geet's too.

Opposite attract, at the same time distract each other from the routine. Thats interesting. Lovely again S.

PS: What about Sasha's POV? 😉. Hahaha! I know its a very bad joke.😛😆

Originally posted by: doodleberry

Sookie, I think am writing to you for the first time....

AMAZING...A piece of brilliance...Believe me your perspective at Maan and Geet equation have opened the blocked windows to the other side of my understanding.

Now I am starting to understand them in a different way. Wow...Thanks you again.

P.S. Pl PM me in future if you post some article.

Ok I am back like I promised now you can stop harassing me with the PMs (joke).

I liked this better than the first one. The first one was serene while this one was feisty; the color red came to my mind while reading this. I liked the fact that this was from the grandmothers point of view, it was different yet interesting to see Geet and Maan through another persons eyes.

The main reason I liked this FF was because of the way to you described Maan. A quiet man who really preferred to be alone but when it came to Geet he does a complete 360. He is chatty and mocking. Funny how one person can bring about such a change.

I was sorry this ended.

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Awesum one

Dadima jus came to spy on them😆😆

Loved Maan n Geet's convo

Their were really fab

Dadima got to knw wat she wanted atlast😉

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Prathi is here!

Yep! Aren't I grand? So will I get off the hook for few hours for not updating Infinity or something else?? :D

Actually, it did cross my mind to do from Sasha's POV. Unfortunately, her character is not fully developed. I did not wanted to use the spoil brat tone so I let it go :-)

Not a bad OS, huh?

Well, I cannot help it. Maan's eyes are too distracting to think about some high funda stuff for Infinity :D :D

Cheerios!
S

Originally posted by: Angel-Pebby

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Heya... gone through a hectic day. Phew, umm glad it's finally ending. :l Anyways, this soothed my mood a little bit. To start with, it wasexcellently written. I bluntly thought, 'her' in the beginning to be Geet, (err.. I wrote Muskaan here.. :P) but, laughed on myself when it was she was not Geet but his Grand' heheh...

btw, the title seemed quite off the scenario... it didn't really suit what you showed. Just my perspective... :)

umm... I do not watch the show, so I don't have much to say about; but great attempt... I'm happy!! It was stunningly fabulous. :D and I loved the interactions betweent them, finally some real conversation from you! Phewww!!! ;)

So, miss Superstar, I'll be greatly honoured if you could just give your valuble time to drop by an update on your AR fics, coz there are still some people (me, to be precise) who are awaiting their respective update so earnestly.

and this doesn't really mean, that I did not like it. I already said.. I'm flattered. :)

Love ya!

Originally posted by: nehaahmad

Sookie, this was an awesome post. i love the fact that you used dadi as the narrator and it was not cheesy nor xrated, which i liked. we tend to get carried away with that kinda stuff and forget the underlying emotion and sentiments. and you have brought those out implicitly. i enjoyed reading it and add me to your list of people, when you write another one.

Thanks,
Neha

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

hey sookie tht was wonderful !

loved it to d core....wow a diffrent perspective all
together !
frm grandma's point of view ...and tht added to d simplicity of the story !!

it was chalked out in such a subtle manner tht i'm in awe !
the emotions....the perspective and each and everythng simply added to d beauty !! :)

loved this one too !

tc
fatima

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

E X C E L L E N T

Fabulous... OS ....just too good.... u knw..at the start i wrongly thot..that it was Geet thinking of Maan.. till i read...that 'she saw herself in him'

Luvd to read th OS..from Dadimas POV...n u bet.. our Maneet are so very..comfy in each others company.....

Rocking OS dear.. plz keep writing more...👏

Originally posted by: simran1285

Ok I am back like I promised now you can stop harassing me with the PMs (joke).

I liked this better than the first one. The first one was serene while this one was feisty; the color red came to my mind while reading this. I liked the fact that this was from the grandmothers point of view, it was different yet interesting to see Geet and Maan through another persons eyes.

The main reason I liked this FF was because of the way to you described Maan. A quiet man who really preferred to be alone but when it came to Geet he does a complete 360. He is chatty and mocking. Funny how one person can bring about such a change.

I was sorry this ended.