He fumbles at your spirit... (Maan/Geet OS) 27 Jul

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@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

hats off..... !!

my adjectives will be short enough to explain it ....i absolutely loved it ....!!!!!!!!

u hav really created something....

fantastic..!!!!

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I can only say WOW
u have a gift sookie.
I am not much of a critic but your power of analysis is superb. you have what it takes to penetrate in the mind of the character and bring out his/her deepest thoughts and feelings to surface...well done
It was filled with passion yet it was subtle
loved it😊😊

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Will be back...
Edit:
Wowo..another great shot and this time from Grandma's POV..
I really felt that i was seeing the whole scene again but with a very different perspective..while i was so involved seeing ManEet in the scene here i could relate to grandma's POV..
Her relationship with her grandson and how to make him normal again..(Not that he is,, 😆 )..But the comfort he shares with Geet is very different and eventhough ManEet couldn't recognize it themselves she has understood them very well..a sweet n sour realtionship..
Great again..👏
Sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hey that was fantabulous....Beautifully written...Gran's POV...twas amazing...!!!

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Aysha

@ayshuri14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

such a beautifully written peace once again .. x

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rusha4003
WOW ... Soookie ..... Look like I'm the first ..😊.

Classic romance ... loved it ... 👍🏼

An inquisitive granny's perspective on her grandson's love interest .....

Absolutely compelling read !!! 👏

Thanks ...dear .. 🤗

Earlier I had asked you to continue that OS ... Now I wont ..

I'd rather you came up with such pieces of brilliance !!!! 😍

Thank you :-) Glad you liked this OS and a different perspective.
Many things are left to readers discretion and whatever they want to make out of it.

Thanks again!
S

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: imshveta
You are absolutely terrific. Gosh I have used that word for the first time on this forum. It was completely entertaining and I could see the scene being unfolded in front ofmg eyes. And I am happy that you ar writing (and making VMs) of Geet-Maan
Two things though:
I go that DD is Dusht Danav but what is BS

secondly should t this ff be called Dadima-Geet-Maan. I mean for a moment there when yo mentioned two decades I was rain aback and suddenly realised it had been Maan's granny so far

But I liked this way too. Of looking at the couple from a third party's point of view
please di this more often

Can I take this chance at requesting you to update 'infinity' or even 'Revenge of ..'
Thanks for the PM

Love
Shveta

Thank you very much for your lovely comment Shveta. Yeah, Geet-Maan are the latest flavor of the season and I have started with OS on them like I generally did with other fandoms.
Actually the title is the name of poem from Emily D which I was reading yesterday and which was also my inspiration to write this one shot.

Daadi is mere reflection of a viewer. The way all of us are. How we see what those two are, is left to us for interpretation.

Aah...you know that next part of Revenge..will be written by Kiran.
And about infinity...I have an idea and that is a start, right? It is going to be one of the lengthiest chapter since I will be picking up an age old debate of "How much of not good is bad?" :-)

Thanks!
S

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal
AMAZING! You right sooooo well! I loved it and the POV was very different and new!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this POV :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl
wow sookie...this was an amazing os...👏👏👏loved it so much...very different...i dont think anyone has thought of writing an os in dadi's pov b4....hats off to u dear... u r a fantastic writer...😊do write more often⭐️

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked this OS. I kind of like that grand ma because she has a streak of childish mentality in her.
Thanks for appreciating the writer too! :D

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
nice that you chose this perspective- watching her grandson go through a new phase of his life through a grandmother's POV was refreshing.
loved the conversation, particularly overgrown peacock thing.
beautiful one.
showed Maan's character pretty well...:D
thankyou for the pm

Hello Sur!

Yeah, a different perspective this time. I don't think I have done this before so I thought I will give it a shot. Overgrown peacock thing was inspired by something which was a part of the conversation I had with a colleague yesterday. He was complaining about heavily beaded dresses worn by ladies on an average working day. :-)

You are welcome for the PM.

S

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